18:25, 25th Jun 2009
zombie2279: Obviously rather lacking from all perspectives. The asteroid needs to be given way more work, it looks rather empty as it is. As said below, give it some more craters, some rocky parts on it, altogether give it a much more rocky shape. As soon as you're done, carry forward with detailing the flames. The effect doesn't look realistic at all. Give it some more colors, some more shading and and more variation to achieve a better look. Also, make the edges more flame-like.

Rejected until updated.

20:26, 28th Jun 2009
zombie2279: The asteroid looks like some sort of black stone now, even worse than before. The effect itself is becoming okay-like, but I failed to detect any more color schemes.

13:25, 30th Jun 2009
zombie2279: Rejected until updated.

OnkelManfred said:

lol. crap.

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dont spam like that. it isnt nessiscary. but on topic, this icon is good. i like the concept. i think what needs to happen is the comet needs to look more rocky with little craters and lumps around it. not just a solid lump. you should probably have some small little flame stones coming off of it too. since a comet isn't nesiscarily one solid object but has tiny parts breaking off. The fire should also be fixed since it uses dissolve... try smudging it around and add a better colour sceme to the fire. (i.e. yellow... red... dark red... and possibly a bit of blue.

This icon has good potential but it is lacking in many areas. its a 2/5 from me for now

I would suggest to make the Comet nucleus, i.e. the center of the comet, have a texture more similar to that of a rock, as it currently looks like a sphere of clay. The tail of the comet could use some work aswell, in that it shouldn't be as a distinct an outline.

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OnkelManfred said:

lol. crap.

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Not exactly the most appropriate way of pointing out lacking quality. Please refrain from using such a tone in the future.

its bettter but it still lacks a rocky quality. and the fire should be smudged at the back to make it seem like its shooting. and fix the borders. they are incorrect

It's still missing the rock-like texture, and once again still looks like a ball of clay. Try to mimic something like this: http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/a/a9/Tempel_1_Deep_Impact_5min.jpg

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The actual rock needs to be less smooth and have more definition.

The asteroid still needs a more rocky look, it looks like potato with holes on it. The fire effect needs more work aswell, the flames hardly resemble flames at all. Use more colors, a better shape system and some better glow to achieve the results.