13:59, 16th Jun 2008
Septimus:

Bad Point

[-] Terrain too plain
[-] Terrain seem weird (Especially the dirt area) since I notice most of the dirt area look too smooth
[-] Seem like almost no effort had been given to create this map
[-] Position of those creep seem awful (Should put those creep guarding a gold mine or their base (Something like tent))
[-] Position of Player 4 (Purple) base ain't that good, creep at the opposite of the gold mine (Infernal Juggernaut) would attack worker that harvesting lumber from it.
[-] Amount of tree seem to be too less.
[-] Amount of gold seem to be too less.

Overall - 1/5
Rejected

Comment : More effort should be put especially when it comes to melee map. Making melee map is the most easiest compare to other map type, but to get a good rating/support require a good work in terraining, position of creep and many other else concept should be consider.

Bad Point

[-] Terrain too plain
[-] Terrain seem weird (Especially the dirt area) since I notice most of the dirt area look too smooth
[-] Seem like almost no effort had been given to create this map
[-] Position of those creep seem awful (Should put those creep guarding a gold mine or their base (Something like tent))
[-] Position of Player 4 (Purple) base ain't that good, creep at the opposite of the gold mine (Infernal Juggernaut) would attack worker that harvesting lumber from it.
[-] Amount of tree seem to be too less.
[-] Amount of gold seem to be too less.

Overall - 1/5
Rejected

Comment : More effort should be put especially when it comes to melee map. Making melee map is the most easiest compare to other map type, but to get a good rating/support require a good work in terraining, position of creep and many other else concept should be consider.

Tips : Look into all those melee map design by users that had high rating and blizzard map. You would notice how much effort had been put into it.

Note : Don't feel offend by this review, anyway you ask for it. I was trying to help you. Good luck in map making ^^

Thank you for the review, I'll update the map when I have time some time. And I agree, the creeps are acctually pretty strange placed.

It's not bad....but its not good either. It really does need alot more effort. Try harder and update this to make it great!

thanks for feedback, I'll try to update it regulary

Like said before: Too plain. Make hills and stuffs.

Also how can dirt burn?

ok, in the first update I'll add some Black citadel/outland or dungeon tiles, remove/move some creeps, set places for the creeps to defend (tents/caves etc), and make it a more variable terrain.