and btw the new version of Lieutenant is really better than before . though it done with some others' help . but still u had already improved urself a lot .
and there are some problems :
first try the face closer to helm , u know the warcraft game angle , it should be goof - u can see the cape in his helm and just found that his face was just a part .
second fix the animation of the cape , now it looks wired .
three , the portrait , u will see the eyeballs when he close his eyes , and the eyelids are too bright , they should be in shadow in helm , that's not correct .