I Got nothing -_-
Your grammar it is...
Elfs Elves
an a Present
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This little and cute Tiger was specialy choosen for protecting the beauty nature.
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This Refers to what?
specialy (e)specially
Choosen Chosen
It's the beauty "of" nature.
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Goliath the second greatest Titan and Dael's father, sent Dael to an small yet unprotected village called The Village of Hope.
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Was Dael a Tiger?
an a small
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When Goliath delivered Dael to the village, and when some moments later when Goliath has left, Dael's sister Cij'ho found her and brought her home (Seriously?) to her house and gave her food and something to drink.
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Two Specific events and Present Perfect ha?
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Cij'ho didn't knew she did have an sister, she did almost barerly knew her father too.
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Did and Have together? -__- Use "Had" Only.
barerly Barely
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The next day when Dael woke up and have no idea where she were, she started to take a walk around the village.
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No comment.
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And when she walked a lot of the Elf's did just looked at her and wondered what she were doing (t)here, and what she was.
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Dot and "And"?
Elf's Elves
Double Verb!
Here? Like your home?
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But there were one that welcomed her and that was and quite strong warrior among the Elf's, his name was The (")Conjoure(o)r(").
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Were and There? Like the Conjourer conjuror is Plural. Use "Was".
Elf's Elves
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He started to inspect her and he fastly learned that when she (will) started to grow, she might/gonna have wings.
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Fastly doesn't exist. Use Fast itself as it's both Adjective and Adverb.
Past happens in the future LoL.
Might Gonna? Like 50% and 99% Chance? use only One.
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And so on The Conjoure(o)r started to train Dael and suddenly out of nowhere Dael called him Dad... And now it's up to you to decide what(')s gonna happen to rest of the the History of Dael'Barun.
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Now I'm confused whether What does Dael'Barun mean. Also, this remembers me of Turkish Series, a fantasy one.
THIS ALL NEEDS CHANGE!
And I can't make a cinematic with 6 lines of Story.
So change these stuff, I'm sure you don't want a story with LOOOTS of Grammar/Vocabulary/etc. problems.