Review should be readable at first place
Try to avoid rainbow of colors.
For human eye is more elegant to see some text in shades of same color or "cluster" of colors.
Try to mix orange, gold, yellow, white. Or go with teal, blue, cyan, sky. Something like that.
Also use BB Codes, there are created for us, common people, to make our work much easier around forums.
will bold your text
make cool rectangular object
etc
And finally, review as review isn't bad, you pointed errors and mistakes, provided some solution and ideas to mentioned and that's it. I will accept you into group don't worry it's just formality.