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  • Greetings,

    I recall you have interest in one of my map in the past. Currently, I am still working on all my maps and invite you to become part of it's development by becoming a closed tester in Discord Channel.
    If you have Discord, you can join via this link :
    https://discordapp.com/invite/TWphThk

    Sorry to interrupt your time. Hope all goes well for you.
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    (Post) Thank you for the input, I will try to improve it to meet your expectations. And hey, hit 100 Rep :D
    Chill dudesk. It's our right to express. Report me if you don't like it.
    DUTY OF RS
    DUTY OF RS
    Hello again, no i will not report you at all. I just noticed you it that i only wanted feed back & reviews :)
    Happy Birthday! (Happy Birthday!)



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    <span style="font-size: 12px">Here is your present.</span>

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    <span style="font-size: 9px">©SeedinAethyr 2015</span>
    Hey People! Im currently inactive Because im moving into a New house and extremly busy Because im doing the driving license (which,im almost done with now!) And quite busy because of working. Its like when i Come home and make dinner, i et it and starting to work on the new house. And when i have done it, i go to sleep... So im VERY sorry for no responding to anyone for a While. So i hope im soon done and when i am, i Will continue on my map editing and such. So thanks for understanding!
    Sorry dude, will be busy as hell the next 2 weeks, so you may want to ask some one else.
    Some really pointlessly long sentence that describes something even more pointless, Chaosy would write something better here if he was freaking creative. And then there is another possibly long sentence which make it look like a wall of text which doesn't look nice at all. So going to a new row is really helpful when writing a longer piece of text. Sometimes it might even be nice to add what we call a blank row in Swedish, normally applied when jumping in time or from a place to indicate that it's not really connected to the rest of the text in that sense. One hundred years later Chaosy finally got the the point.

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    Some really pointlessly long sentence that describes something even more pointless, Chaosy would write something better here if he was freaking creative.
    And then there is another possibly long sentence which make it look like a wall of text which doesn't look nice at all.
    So going to a new row is really helpful when writing a longer piece of text.
    Sometimes it might even be nice to add what we call a blank row in Swedish, normally applied when jumping in time or from a place to indicate that it's not really connected to the rest of the text in that sense.

    One hundred years later Chaosy finally got the the point.
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    (Dont take this offencive!)
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    Offensive XD

    It seems you never use that red Underline do you? (or you are on a phone????) If you see that red underline, simply google your Word. Walla.
    No Comment means No Comment, N/A, Nothing to say. Really.

    Wait, is she an Elf or a Tiger???
    I Got nothing -_-

    Your grammar it is...

    Elfs Elves
    an a Present


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    This little and cute Tiger was specialy choosen for protecting the beauty nature.
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    This Refers to what?
    specialy (e)specially
    Choosen Chosen
    It's the beauty "of" nature.


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    Goliath the second greatest Titan and Dael's father, sent Dael to an small yet unprotected village called The Village of Hope.
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    Was Dael a Tiger?
    an a small


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    When Goliath delivered Dael to the village, and when some moments later when Goliath has left, Dael's sister Cij'ho found her and brought her home (Seriously?) to her house and gave her food and something to drink.
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    Two Specific events and Present Perfect ha?


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    Cij'ho didn't knew she did have an sister, she did almost barerly knew her father too.
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    Did and Have together? -__- Use "Had" Only.
    barerly Barely


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    The next day when Dael woke up and have no idea where she were, she started to take a walk around the village.
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    No comment.


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    And when she walked a lot of the Elf's did just looked at her and wondered what she were doing (t)here, and what she was.
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    Dot and "And"?
    Elf's Elves
    Double Verb!
    Here? Like your home?


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    But there were one that welcomed her and that was and quite strong warrior among the Elf's, his name was The (")Conjoure(o)r(").
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    Were and There? Like the Conjourer conjuror is Plural. Use "Was".
    Elf's Elves


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    He started to inspect her and he fastly learned that when she (will) started to grow, she might/gonna have wings.
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    Fastly doesn't exist. Use Fast itself as it's both Adjective and Adverb.
    Past happens in the future LoL.
    Might Gonna? Like 50% and 99% Chance? use only One.


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    And so on The Conjoure(o)r started to train Dael and suddenly out of nowhere Dael called him Dad... And now it's up to you to decide what(')s gonna happen to rest of the the History of Dael'Barun.
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    Now I'm confused whether What does Dael'Barun mean. Also, this remembers me of Turkish Series, a fantasy one.




    THIS ALL NEEDS CHANGE!
    And I can't make a cinematic with 6 lines of Story.

    So change these stuff, I'm sure you don't want a story with LOOOTS of Grammar/Vocabulary/etc. problems.
    Great to hear that!

    I am ready for the cinematics. But tell me:

    Do you want custom music?
    Do you want voice-acting? (I suck in this, please say no)
    Do you want cinematic-like cinematics or Warcraft-ish Cinematic?
    What's the story?
    What are the Dialogues?
    Are there other team members?



    I'll wait for it :)
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    You are satisfied with the signature ?
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    Your request has been done, please comment on it.
    I'm relieved!

    OK then, as you wish. But please do it before two months from now, Cause schools start then.
    Thanks for suggestion about Terraining!

    Ahh, And what happened to your campaign? You didn't send me a PM to do the Cinematics. Did you figure it out yourself, Or Is the project dead (I Hope I'm wrong on This one)?
    It was kinda vague. To give an example(s):
    Beastmaster controls beasts, so I make spells based around the concept of controlling beasts.
    Tauren Chieftain is based on being a tanky hero, so he makes spells that allows for better survivability.
    I want some background lore/story + general playstyle of the hero.
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