Ah yes, Tarzan English...as someone would call it. I always get a good laugh from those then immediately feel bad because I'm not supposed to. Besides, I probably spoke like that as well back in the day lol.
Thanks a lot for the input. I updated it again with fixes on the shading and added more to the background. I kept most of the rest the same because I'm mostly just aiming for a semi-cartoonish vibe but I hope it looks better now. Also Grom has his jaw tattooed black, in case you forgot.