16:49, 30th Jun 2008
Dan van Ohllus:
[Rejected]
Not enough changes and effort to get approved.

oh nice 4/5

Why just 4/5, I mean what shall I do better, may some things to improve, taht you could tell me?

eyes don't look good

4/5

looks like worms, has too much dodge. Blood doesnt shine.

The lines in the clothes are too dark and not faded enough in some areas, and nonexitant in others.

The blue-ish sleeves are terrble and dont match at all.

Also, why didnt you try something else with the face??

Its a pretty decent effort, so I give it a 2/5

well its plain and most people wouldnt see the differnce wiht anything other then the face,without looking at the unwrap
2/5

Hm right, but it is very difficult to make it too spectucular, cuz the blizz uvws suck as hell.

Anyway right, the skin is not enough spezial ...

A lot of it is unchanged

the what what now sucks??

Oh noes! A Micheal Jackson skin!

5/5. Its very good, and **** you guys for saying its bad, you have lives

not really much change, few blood bits, blood shot eyes and raggy clothes, needs more work done too it for it to stand out from the rest of the zombies thats been done before.
you should join my contest i have up at the moment, jungle of the dead and use that theme to create another zombie.
create a new texture for the face but dont over do it, change colour of face, pinky/purple doesn't work for a zombie.

Whats the path?

Path: Units\Creeps\Zombie\ZombieA.blp