14:21, 22nd Jun 2008
Septimus:

Good Point

[+] I was amaze at the size of the map considering you add the music of C & C General on it, the map size only took less than 2 mb.
[+] Good sound effect, it is loud and clear.
[+] This map send a very clear message that the humanity should not kill each other through war in order to find a easy solution.
[+] No bug detected

Neutral Point

[!] The way the ship turn is really odd.

Bad Point

[-] Sending 2 jet at the same time ? That is asking for the jet to crash it at each other.

Overall - 5/5
Approve

Septimus Comment : This map had a very good point, it sends a clear message that the war is not the solution for the problem we are facing. It deserve rating 5 for the moral value on it.

some points i noticed:

-the turning of the ship in the very beginning looks rather unrealistic ^^
-they would never airborne 2 jets next to each other; they could crash in the air ^^
-some soldiers are bugged; u dont see their bodies
- the mp-vehicles are smaller than an ordinary soldier ^^ normally they transport around 8 of them ^^ here they could just "ride" it

and to say something about your conclusion:
"no wars... no dead"
-> questionable
but i guess you got some kinda forum to discuss that at your mentioned webpage


nice video anyway ^^ i liked the rockets - they roxx ;D

Thank you, Shaun.

I'm not well in English. ^^"

I'll fix unrealistic things, some word and I'll update the map soon.

Hey Zeroanger. This is a very well made cinematic, also it has a good moral.
I'm against war, too lol keep doing this! You have talent

I'm sorry what? Whats the story of the map? Just a bunch of ships and planes and people fighting? And those 2 lines in the end? war has death? We need peace? Is that the moral of the "story"? The way this cinematic presents these facts is not an award wining way. And since a 5/5 rating is the highest rating (apart from the directors cut) it theoretically won awards, on this websites standards. I'm sorry i was not impressed. 3/5 from me.

very nice cinematic, of course there are some missing points but in overall this is good. I felt like this was a short movie. Showing a war and the outcomes of it and a message after that. This was a nice job. But you could improve the ending message too