X Earth Rage Unleashed V3.00 {RMX}.

Moderator · May 20, 2009

01:06, 23rd May 2009
Dr Super Good:

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Pretty good spell, next to the odd graphic bug it worked fine for me. It did not lag once at all and trigger wise it is both leakless, MUI and realitivly efficent. Testing it was a problem due to all the creeps used have stun which was annoying as you hardly were ever able to cast it. The terrain deformations may cause MAC users to OOS and split I think but that only affects a select few. Generally a pretty good spell with few flaws. Good for use in RPGs and slower based maps, probably is too fancy for a fast pased map like AoS or wars.

Suggestions . . .
- Improve test map, too much stun is not good to test with.
- Optimize coding, via JASS or otherwise.
- Improve documentation, to allow new triggeres to better understand it.

Advice: If you do not understand why this spell was given the rating it received or if you would like to ask questions about how to improve this spell. Feel free to send a private message to spell moderator Dr Super Good.

Aspard · May 20, 2009

Well... why not this "shake" toss the units on it's way?

Just the idea problem, in real life it'll look only this way.

I'd like to suggest some "Boom!" effect when the unit is dropped back to the ground. It can not make damage, but just create an effect.

Also, you know, that your codding is okay, but it's really difficult to look through this variables in the second trigger.

Documentation on impelementation exists as far as settings in trigger.

4/5

Rmx · May 20, 2009

Well there is an Effect in it... Volcano Special effect when the units lands....

Anyway thank u for the comments and a simple review.

baassee · May 20, 2009

Downloading ...

Edit:

Great spell as always, didn't look threw the code totally but as usally your documentation is ... better

Add more variables to store different values.

Like the time of the boulders

Environment - Create a "MAKE THIS CHANGEABLE:0.50" second Permanent crater deformation at ER_Point[1] with radius 200.00 and depth -100.00

Also the depth and radius should also be like changeable.

And in my opinion the ... increasement of the ground looks really slow, what happen if a target moves? will the slow raise move against it or

Also if you want the raise to happen more often I think you should make the 12 stored into a variable

ER_Spam[ER] Equal to 12

so it will travel faster

special effects can also be stored? not necessary thought

gj

regards

~baassee

Rmx · May 20, 2009

Thank u Bassee for the Great review .. i will store everything and make it more ...
or have more settings ....

Great Review

... and +REP ... like always ... thnx

M4stah · May 20, 2009

Good job Rmx
The spell works fine, no leaks and good documentation.
But it can be more creative. 3.5/5
PS: If you want me to correct some of your sentences PM me. They are not bad English but teh sentences are builded badly

Rmx · May 20, 2009

but teh

I don't think so .. loooooooooooool . GOT YA !!

M4stah · May 20, 2009

thats a typo. Atleast I no make sentences like this

Rmx · May 20, 2009

I no make

GOT YA !! Again hahaha come on

M4stah · May 20, 2009

that was a demonstration. Read the whole sentence. Jeesh Also we are getting very off-topic

PsychoNerdial · May 20, 2009

Only thing i can criticise is the speed of the fall, as it looks a little weird, but that is
easily changeable if someonewould add the spell to his/her map^^ Didn't look
through the triggering, but i'm very sure that it's effiecient and leakless

Rmx · May 20, 2009

that was a demonstration. Read the whole sentence. Jeesh Also we are getting very off-topic

Ok ok u win, still i know how to write correctly, but it takes time for me. LOL...

SHUT DOWN ... OFF-TOPIC

Deuterium · May 20, 2009

Hahaha

well RMX, as usual, amazing...

However, i think there should be a minor toss and damage for units on the way (I think that's what Aspard was trying to say)

& tooltip needs fixing... i dont know if i'll have any time to do it myself, but maybe i will

GJ!

Rmx · May 20, 2009

Ok i will do that OFC ... anyway thank u all for the comments and +REP if i can ... or if i need to spread some REP too bad anyway i will +REP u all

Deuterium · May 20, 2009

OH I just remembered one thing! to find out where you live to go kick you so hard so that you learn how to adjust the map's name (in-game) to the spell's one

haha

Rmx · May 20, 2009

LOOOOOOOOL i always have mistakes in these kind of things ... but in triggering NAA

Dark_Dragon · May 20, 2009

yeah nice spell it does what it is supposed to and is leakless and MUI as fare as i can see.
in my option speed should be increased but thats very easy editable so i wont say anything more. its a GUI spell not vjass one however its still good coded. spell is simple and does its job + is documented good enough so i can suggest to use this spell if its what people need in there map.

4/5 and +rep!
~Dark Dragon

aaron · May 20, 2009

downloading to see whats the proper way to make a spell efficient

also 5/5 on spell.

EDIT: yeah i make my spells MUI the same way i just messed up a bit on the arrangement of the spell and missed some functions.

REVIEW:
-nice coding... looks similar to mine xD
-good effects
-MUI
-nice idea
-when target unit dies spell bugs
I give this spell a 4/5 gj

D4RK_G4ND4LF · May 21, 2009

similar problem as with your tornado
if target unit dies and spell didn't finish casting yet there will be some auras on the ground ( who knows why.... i didn't read the code x)

Rmx · May 21, 2009

similar problem as with your tornado
if target unit dies and spell didn't finish casting yet there will be some auras on the ground ( who knows why.... i didn't read the code x)

Funny but the aura on the Ground ... is a RECENECATION .. AURA for reviving the hero..
Go to the ability called SET UP ... and search for revive .. Every unit that dies the aura
will be at his point ... looooooooooooooool

+Rep to Dark_Dragon ... aaron ... D4RK ... thnx for the comments :L)

Deuterium · May 21, 2009

D4RK_G4ND4LF said:
similar problem as with your tornado
if target unit dies and spell didn't finish casting yet there will be some auras on the ground ( who knows why.... i didn't read the code x)

HAHA! yeah it took me like a bit to figure out that it's just an aura which points to where a unit dies

Kingz · May 21, 2009

Nice, good idea and nice effects.
I can't bother looking through triggers due to the fact you way of making MUI spells is unknown to me

Can get better though.
Still 4/5 by me.

Rmx · May 21, 2009

ChangeLog .....

Improved ALOT ALOT the special effects...
Added a new variable that can manipulate WAVE Height...
Added new Feature to toss every unit in the AIR in earth rage PATH....
Special Effects are more SUPEr !! did i say that again

TRY IT NOW !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aspard · May 21, 2009

Much better now

But now I think, that those spikes should be changed to something connected with earth, not death... well, let's see...
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/resource.php?t=104183&prev=search=earth&r=20&d=list&page=2
What about this explosion? I know, there shouldn't be any import, but that really looks cool, try it yourself. ;D Well, don't import that, but just recommend to use it somewhere in documentation.

Dark_Dragon · May 21, 2009

D4RK_G4ND4LF said:
similar problem as with your tornado
if target unit dies and spell didn't finish casting yet there will be some auras on the ground ( who knows why.... i didn't read the code x)

lol i just up there said its bugfree and leakless.... this is just an ability to quickly revive creaps rather then using triggers for it

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yeah! more editable is what i like the most on the custom spells so its much better now for me and for people who will use this spell ofc.

well all in all gj on keeping ur spell updated!
~DD

Deuterium · May 21, 2009

Thumbs up!

now that's a spell!!

D4RK_G4ND4LF · May 23, 2009

aaaaahhh shame on me xD

ok then it's fine
great spell

Orochimaru1993 · May 23, 2009

Great spell for GUI ! But I want to see more vJass spells on this site ;D

Could anyone tell me what the natives for
a)call TriggerRegisterEnterRectSimple(trg, gg_rct_Bounce_Down)
b)call TriggerRegisterTimerEventSingle(trg, 0)
are? would be a really really great help !

Septimus · May 24, 2009

from what I view, nothing seems to be wrong.

But you really need to add hotkey to those testing ability.

blackrider123 · Jun 1, 2009

the effects are nice and well-thought

Rmx · Jun 1, 2009

the effects are nice and well-thought

Thnx and this is ur first post then get some +REP ...

baassee · Jun 2, 2009

Septimus said:
But you really need to add hotkey to those testing ability.

have you ever seen rmx adding a hotkey sometimes sept?!

the answer to that is never thought I think he should ... sometimes

Rmx · Jun 2, 2009

have you ever seen rmx adding a hotkey sometimes sept?!

the answer to that is never thought I think he should ... sometimes

Well i did add a HOTKEY to the ability.

But how can i add a Hotkey to spells in a spellbook ... They will take All HOTKEYS Away lool.

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