10:38, 4th Sep 2011
-Kobas-:
Status: Rejected

the description could use some work.

commoe said:

the description could use some work.

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Is it better now?

to be honest, your description does tell us readers nothing about your map but the main topic -.-
You should add more details, not to mention the decorations

use this Bb codes to present your description.

I've downloaded this map and found out something:
1. The game ends a few seconds passed without the player knowing it will end; WHY?
2. Please label your triggers properly.

eubz said:

I've downloaded this map and found out something:
1. The game ends a few seconds passed without the player knowing it will end; WHY?
2. Please label your triggers properly.

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i don't want to label the triggers because if someone is gonna edit it they will have a hard time finding what does something.
ahahha
try it again i fixed the timer so that you would know it would end.

Try reading these to improve your game and descriptions, and I'm sure they will help you out a lot -> Map Description Templates and Polishing Your Game.

Skycraft said:

Try reading these to improve your game and descriptions, and I'm sure they will help you out a lot -> Map Description Templates and Polishing Your Game.

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did you know im 11 yrs old??

haha

hey bro! I can't visualize your map very well can you follow these steps describing our rules about map uploading:

show us some information about your map, tells more about the Gameplay, Features, Commands, Screenshots, Credits, and Changelogs.

by following these useful BB codes it can help you out with coding stuffs, and better yet, apply these Templates depends on your style, good luck and happy map-making

bisnar13 said:

did you know im 11 yrs old??

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11 y.o. hah!!!

eubz said:

11 y.o. hah!!!

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yes im really 11 yrs old.

but there is no age requirements with fixing your map description ):
follow Skycraft's advice and the template is actually useful

i haven't tested this but,is this a same one as the who is the killer series?if so here are some questions i have to ask you,fellow kabayan:
1. are the players defeated when picking the wrong killer?
2. is the terrain same as the original?
3. is the music is as scary and same as the original?
if not, i'll probably test this and make a better review.

btw, the other people are right. it needs a better description. view those links and make the description SHINE . im just agreeing with them, dont be angry pleaaase

no, they lose when all of them die.
you can't pick the killer here.
no, the terrain here is not the same.
yes, some of them.

I gave you more info in chat few min ago.
Map is simple and really bad created, 2 many errors related to optimization.
No game modes, difficulties nothing.

Red player can kick others? Soooo unfair.