You need a better description and a credits to the author of the models man. Also is this map in english or Russian?

Hi man.I do credits for models now.Its Russian map yes.
Thanks for the comment

nhs325 said:

You need a better description and a credits to the author of the models man. Also is this map in english or Russian?

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There's quite a long list with the authors whose resources you've used: Resources in Use by Universe Battle 0.3 | HIVE
You also have to write the game names and companies from which the ripped models are from and if you can also write the names of the ones who extracted the models.
You also have to credit any music or sound you've used that's not from Warcraft III.

You could use spoiler/hidden tags on screenshots for ease of scrolling.

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First of all, you do not have a loading screen. It's everything black. At least the normal W3 loading screens from the campaign
would have been a better choice.

Some users may not notice it, but my formed eye can, you used Valkemiere's terrain from his AoS Battlestadium DON,
the layout and orientation even the lanes and everything else
are exactly the same as in his map, only the doodads are different. (Did he give you permission to use the terrain made by him for your map?)

The multiboard is totally uncertain, you can't know how many kills or deaths you have
since the titles are not explained

Ranged creeps attack "melee creeps' which do not have a model but their death sound is the one of an orc grunt. (doesn't quitely fit the theme of this AoS)
Neutral creeps have the same problem, they appear on the minimap, but their models are non-existent

The terrain does not fit the theme you wanted for this AoS, combining Hi-tech themes with jungle, is not a good thing
There are giant green boxes on your terrain.
The lanes could use some more work, they look too simple. The edges between the lanes and the grass are not designed well, there must be something that
cuts off the main appearance (maybe regarding this, my artistic subjective point of view is too much)

Nothing in this map has a name, only the prices, stats, damage, etc, are shown. (in game nothing shows up, although in the screenshots here I see some Russian names)

The fighting factions are not named, I'm talking about Faction 1 and Faction 2

But what do you think? I couldn't test this more, since it is impossible to pick a hero.
No tavern or selection shows up to get a character. What I mentioned above is what I analyzed only by watching the battle of the creeps and the map itself.

I'm totally sorry, but my vote is 1/5, vote for rejection.

My friend, you downloaded the content mix? If not then this explains everything. This is only 0.3 version, in the future everything will look much better. This landscape, namely the line was made similar to DON, because we consider it ideal for AOS maps(Valk see this), but to all this we created a jungle for more interesting and dynamic gameplay. I appreciate any criticism, but next time,pls, dont make hasty conclusions.Thanks

You need to download mix files first.
Then open the Warcraft 3 folder-find redist-miles-. Then paste

valkemiere said:

You need to download mix files first.
Then open the Warcraft 3 folder-find redist-miles-. Then paste

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Excuse me? We don't allow third party programs. The map should be able to run on its own. If not, I'm sorry.

deepstrasz said:

Excuse me? We don't allow third party programs. The map should be able to run on its own. If not, I'm sorry.

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exactly what I wanted to say now

LANKASHIR said:

My friend, you downloaded the content mix? If not then this explains everything. This is only 0.3 version, in the future everything will look much better. This landscape, namely the line was made similar to DON, because we consider it ideal for AOS maps(Valk see this), but to all this we created a jungle for more interesting and dynamic gameplay. I appreciate any criticism, but next time,pls, dont make hasty conclusions.Thanks

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Look also at what @deepstrasz said. Was not a "hasty" conclusion. Hive's maps database is filled with quality maps.