10:18, 25th Aug 2014
Orcnet:

Change remaked to just remake or remade as there is no such word as remaked.

There are many grammar errors and why are the Paladin and Commandor (should be Commander but why not give him a name) talking like buddies? This is hilarious.

I suggest you use more fitting dialogues. Here are some suggestions
K= Kill'Jaedan P=Paladin

k2p: Don't run you coward - Ah! Running like a dog. Then I'll make sure you die like a dog.
k2p: I am getting angry man - You human dogs are getting on my nerves.
k2p: You are really powerfull but I'm faster than you.(Laugh) - If u think u are holding your ground, I can easily overpower you.
p2k: You are talking very much- Shut up and fight! I don't need to listen to you demons. May the holy light be with me.
k2p: I'm bored and tired. Anyway, this fight will end and I will win.
[At this time i suggest playing lightning for infernal's arrival.]
It seems I have ran out of time. Say your prayers human. Time to die.

I suggest like in between the fight K and P to increase the morale of their armies like the P saying "the light is with us"

I will fix my map but I think dialogues are normal. Maybe I will change dialogues.

tolist85 said:

I will fix my map but I think dialogues are normal. Maybe I will change dialogues.

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I am not saying that map is not good. Map is ok but dialogues need a little work. It seems like the humans and the demons are buddys and are arguing and want to kill each other just to shut each other up. But they are fine just the way they are. I was just giving suggestions. I am not forcing u. Your resource, your right.

Updated.

Map approved.

I think you dont know english. In the first picture it says lets start my soldiers. You should have said Lets start attacking. And in the second it says this cinematic is end. You should have said This cinematic will end now.

1/5. Bad to the bone.

What can be done better?