12:42, 12th Jun 2008
Rui: Approved! A fine cinematic series.

You should delete your old map if you make it via campaign

Great! I like them all, but part 1 was the best.

+ You solved the problem with the arrows in part 1 with the potion
+ rezized the tables
+ Updated the text

- The Lightning cage of Undeniable One bugs. You can see it through grounds.
Must be a ways to fix it.

Overall 5/5 +rep for you!

Um... the intro still isn't there.

wow, that was great. i loved it. only problem i have is that there was ALOT of typos. and two, you could see the lighting barrier around Undeniable One through ground

-I agree that the chapter 1 is the best since it give a good suspense.
-Terrain at chapter 1 had been done nicely, well done.
-It is not too short and neither too long for each chapter, so it kinda good as it won't make us feel boring.
-Seem like there is a spelling error or maybe a typo error ?
-The victory condition would be better if you set it to skip dialog and skip the score list.
-The loading screen doesn't seem to match with the campaign cinematic.

Overall - 4/5
Approve

Approved! Fine cinematic series.

[+]The environment is pretty OK.
[+/-]The lore seems to have it's roots based on Warcraft III lore, thus not totally original. Still original enough, though.
[-]There are some bugs. Most notably the lightning cage, which has been mentioned already. Also, please do not display the victory message, it is annoying. I understand it's purpose, however, you should instead add a key (ESC for example) to stop the cinematic.

Also, please upload the campaign file only when the series are totally complete.
My rating for this is 7/10, which is approximately 4 (Recommended).

2/5

I coulnd't bring myself to finish watching the introduction. The terrain was an atrocity. Timing was poor. All the models used were basic wc3 models. Sounds were also basic sounds. Lacked music. The pace at which it was moving was very slow. Overall shows technical proficiency with the map editor, and a complete lack of articistic vision.

I did enjoy sumwut the introduction, and the whole concept in the forest scene where arrows are flying in from all around and you couldn't see where they were coming from. However i think calling it "Recommended" is a stretch. Aside from the forest scene, the terrain seemed to be lacking and at times... awful (im sorry). I wished that the story followed more in the steps of which the introduction was taking, as i found that interesting. In particular, the humans fighting and then the big rocky green thing comes from the meteor (im having a brain fart and cant remember the name) and then punched the footman and killed him.

However for a 4/5 map, i was expecting something a little bit more. I think a 2 or 3 out of 5 would be more appropriate. Probably closer to a 3. However im not a map moderator am I, so what do i know?

I would rate a 2/5 but when the soldiers entered the cave, one of them hited the jail and he screamed AAHHH, AN ESKELETON!!! and i ... welll xDD i laughted like a crazy man!!! so i would put it a 3/5, sorry if i dont make any sence, my native language is spanish so xD you know... i'm good at english but i'm not ready for talking whit other english people (or yankys)

I think overall cinematics are not bad and as mentioned before part 1 was best part specially with that giant arrows hitting through shields lol. 4/5 for nice triggers and the way soldiers make quick formation and good terrain.

It's been a long time since I last watched these cinematic series. I remember that I loved them back in the days. What happened, nobody keeps up with this? I might be necro posting however I don't care a lot about that, just wondering what's going on with things I once loved to see.

-they were hiding and shooting right near them on the road...
-"if you don't want to die, come with us". They were three against a squad
-it seems they know a common tongue
-so, the guy thought the elves were also human!?
-I'm afraid those living in the tunnels would not be so well fed to fight
-who is who? Most of them look like Footman clones
2/5.

this isn't a playable campaign, why is this here?

anduin lothar said:

this isn't a playable campaign, why is this here?

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It's a compilation of cinematic maps. It's tagged as campaign because the file is a campaign type one, namely .w3n.