Twister V3.00 [RMX] Documented.

Moderator · May 17, 2009

17:51, 18th May 2009
Dr Super Good:

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This spell looks ok to me. I do not see any leaks and it seems fully MUI. Efficency is lacking however due to the use of GUI, thus it may be advisable to make a JASS version. It also has a long damage delay so it ma not be that useful to some. Documentation is also lacking quite a lot, so beginners may find it hard to understand how it works. I can advise using it if it is what you want and your map is not too complex.

Suggestions . . .
- Improve efficency, using JASS reccomended.
- Add better documentation so that people can understand it better.

Advice: If you do not understand why this spell was given the rating it received or if you would like to ask questions about how to improve this spell. Feel free to send a private message to spell moderator Dr Super Good.

baassee · May 17, 2009

this looks intresting

downloading ...

first of all

I think you should either make the caster invurnable or make a death condition because I don't like my hero corpse spin in the air

also with this said above I think you should turn off the spell if the caster dies and don't deal damage.

and as always you lack of documentation

PS:

your test map have a nice theme, sunken with lorderon summer

PS2: great as always!

~baassee

Rmx · May 17, 2009

Well THANK u for finding this out ....... i knew something was missing +REP

Also as u can see ....... all my spells lack very very much documentation only my last one Unstable mind

i have the time to do some docs........

WELL thnx BASE

-Berz- · May 17, 2009

Haha, pretty nice idea, i just love how the creeps tries to follow the caster xD

A bit to much of special effects, but it's ok..

+what is mentioned above, documentation :S

Anyway another epic spell by you! Keep it up

Rmx · May 17, 2009

Thnx Berzeker I will do keep it up ........ but tell me what do u think about my MAP Template ..........

Septimus · May 17, 2009

Gosh, the effect is really impressive.

But your set up ability really need hotkey to make testing more convenient ....

-Berz- · May 17, 2009

Map could use some more doodads, more different terrain texture(try to add some ashenvale), try to add more hills, or lower the terrain(random)

But for now just try to add more tilesets and more of doodads(rocks, grass, shrub)

baassee · May 17, 2009

-BerZeKeR- said:
Map could use some more doodads, more different terrain texture(try to add some ashenvale), try to add more hills, or lower the terrain(random)

But for now just try to add more tilesets and more of doodads(rocks, grass, shrub)

This is not map devolopment section or isn't it?

-Berz- · May 17, 2009

He asked about the template... its the part of the spell...

baassee · May 17, 2009

-BerZeKeR- said:
He asked about the template... its the part of the spell...

Haha chill out, was just kidding

Commeneted myself the terrain so ya

Deuterium · May 17, 2009

baassee, don't worry, BerZeKeR is always chill

about the spell RMX, as usual, i look at the triggers and i go like: WOAH!

Simple to use and import, original and nice spell idea. However, I personally don't like it much since i prefer simple spells

but that's a personal opinion and doesnt alter the fact that it's a good spell

Map Template:
MUCH BETTER than that River Rush! Ohh did i use to hate that template?

ummm... u can improve it a bit more, but i cant think of how...

Keep it up & good job! & i'm actually waiting for some vJass from you

EDIT:
oh btw, i just noticed you didn't provide any documentation... at least provide some on how to import

Rmx · May 17, 2009

Thank Msaeed28 i will update it soon .....

And thnx BerZekeR ... i will update the terrain also ... i got to say that

ur Simple Spellpack looks AWESOME ....... sorry had to say it

LebaneseSoul · May 17, 2009

Template needs alot of improvement, but I suggested (if you want to promote both your spell and map template) Adds a variaty of destructibles, including trees and have the spell damage trees etc. It should add some nice effects to your spell demo as well as the map.

Also try to diversify the map a bit. Make a village or something similar with strucutres and units so you can demonstarte the effect of the spell on that, then make a forest with some doodads and destructible and show the effects of the spell on the forest and ofcourse the deformation of terrain. good luck

D4RK_G4ND4LF · May 17, 2009

cool
useless for me but still cool... :thumbs_up:

some improvements:

and he's still flying around while he's dead

Rmx · May 17, 2009

Well thnx to LEBANON .... i'm also from lebanon ........

Well this is a spell.... and what i meant was .. the map has to be very simple and low KB yet very Wonderfull...... i will just create some terrain deformation and tiles ext... but i will not add structures nor trees coz it will make the file size bigger........

You can see my old map TEMPLATE ... in my SIGNATURE .. Let's Bounce !!. it will grab ur taste i think .....

Long live Lebanon

: P

EDIT : i will make the CASTER invurnable .,.... while he uses the spell !!!!!!!! or the spell stops when he dies

LebaneseSoul · May 17, 2009

Hehehe, More lebanese here than I thought

msaeed is also Lebanese

btw, trees and structures wont affect the file size much (or at all), gr8 spell as it is, just thought it would be cool for the spell to damage trees as well

Deuterium · May 17, 2009

offtopic:
Rmx from Lebanon!?

haha... i thought I was the only Lebanese here until i told LebaneseSoul about the hive and he joined!

COOL!!

LebaneseSoul · May 17, 2009

ya kinda gettin off topic

oh well atleast the thread is gettin some posts

Rmx · May 17, 2009

OFF TOPIC ........ i didn't know Msaeed28 is lebanese also ...... Great now we are 4 lebanese in hive.,,,,

List of Lebanese People :

msaeed28
Rmx
LebaneseSoul
Joe-Black-5

EDIT : NOW THE HERO WON"T DIE ......... ok the spell is perfect now i think ??

baassee · May 18, 2009

Rmx said:
EDIT : NOW THE HERO WON"T DIE ......... ok the spell is perfect now i think ??

lols because he is invurn isnt he? ^^

well you did the lame version thought I hate when casters goes invurn but that's prob the most right thing to do.

Gj as always

PsychoNerdial · May 18, 2009

Spell is very nice, though you should change the Scenario Name to the name of the spell.
Else someone might get confused if he/she has multiple spells by you

Deuterium · May 18, 2009

haha yeah rmx always forgets to adjust Scenario Name... i got used to that

Rmx · May 18, 2009

Well thanx msaeed and Psyco .. i always forget

.... but hey it's only the scenario name right

..... anyway i will update it soon to make it MORE Efficient ... and have documentation

Kingz · May 21, 2009

Wow, now that is a great idea made with great originality.
I am speechless, certainly the best work of yours.
Nice use of special effects and the fact it got aproved so fast tells everything.
This should, no this deserves 5/5.

Jawzy · May 23, 2009

Awesome, Fantastic, Minblasting I see this spell as one of the best

zolga · Jun 20, 2009

probably the best spell i have ever seen

Twister V3.00 [RMX] Documented.

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