18:14, 20th Sep 2008
Hawkwing:
[Rejected]
No visible progress has been made.

Well the cracks are okay but they need a lot more shadows. Also, the lack of an alpha channel basically ruins the texture. He needs pants; The ice crack spam gets annoying.

Here's your screenshot.

Thanks, I'll add an alpha channel and work on some pants.

looks pure badass...and i think your lieing when you say its your very first skin...cuz this is sweet

Thank you, but it honestly is my first skin. =P

oo and what editing program did you use ...GIMP?

Nah, Photoshop.

ooook nvm...then i cant be trained D:

Not to sound like a noob, but how do I update this skin?

EDIT: Nevermind I found it. =P

Hmm..:B
It looks more like a ice giant,on my opinion.
I dont like the pads and cloths poking out of him,it looks weird,his beard could use some work,and the skull for a face is a bit odd.He could go with some pants as hawk said,because his skirt looks weird :S.For a first skin its pretty good,so if i could rate this,it'd be 3.5 :B

Does it really look like a skirt on the model?

That's not what I was going for at all.

are those.. uhh.. snowflake looking things.. (yeah).. supposed to have it black like that with squares?

No, it disclaims that in the description.

I don't have a screenshot of the updated skin.

could you please get some?

I don't have wc3 installed at the moment, I'll have it within the next 3-8 days.

Problem is that it isn't fixed. I downloaded it and it has the same problem.

StaberFire said:

I don't have wc3 installed at the moment, I'll have it within the next 3-8 days.

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because im such a sweat, cool guy ... with to much free time, i'l make the screenshot for you.
EDIT: the beard cant be alphaed out, instead of black, there holes. I sugest you make a new beard.

I think it looks great for beeing your first skin! I could never have done so good, if it was me who did this skin xD

Yes,it does look like a skirt. :B
And skirts only look good on me,women,and HIGHLANDERS!
YAAAYYYY BAGPIPES!!

DevineArmy said:

the beard cant be alphaed out, instead of black, there holes. I sugest you make a new beard.

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Could I tint the black areas to a dark blue to fix this problem?

Either way it still needs a lot more shadows and highlights.

MUCH CNP ...
And I dont like his Knees

Lord_Firage, where should he have cnp'ed this.... i have never seen such a texture in wc3.....

Off-topic question... how do I add TC?

I've looked through the tutorials but I can't seem to find it anywhere.

You use the eraser tool to remove areas on the texture that have a Team Coloured material.

Thank you very much, that aught to help. =P

redscores said:

Lord_Firage, where should he have cnp'ed this.... i have never seen such a texture in wc3.....

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The Face the "Beard" the Icy spikey are cnp ...

Lord_Firage said:

The Face the "Beard" the Icy spikey are cnp ...

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i dont really think so ... whats it CnPed from?

Someone uploaded a Skin for the Troll Hero (forgot the name)
which had THIS mask ...
I dont know where the other things are CnPed from ... but i knew it is ...
okay maybe the icy things arent CnP but the BEARD and the HEAD is ....

No, I used a gradient fill, then the smudge tool to get the shape.

After that I just used burn and dodge for my shadows and highlights. =P

No CnP, you've got my word.

then remove the beard and fix the head ...

Why?

It's my creation, I shouldn't have to remove it just because it LOOKS like something else you saw.

no .. it looks bad THATS why you should remove it ...

Alrighty then, you should've mentioned that. =P

What should I do to improve it?

remove the beard and fullcolor the head ..

I added more texture to the beard and head, let me know if it looks at least a little better.

cant see any Changes

Not on the screeny obviously, look at the skin. T~T

Dont see any Changes on the Unwrap too >.<

The edges are no longer black on the beard and head.

I lightened them both with blue and but in more highlights and shadows.

Compare the unwrap with the screenshot. =P

I did and I SEE NO CHANGES omg xD Update the Screen XD

I don't have warcraft on my computer, I can't take a screenshot.

='(

take a Screenshot in the Mangos Model Editor or something >_<

Just copy this and use it

GOD !! Now I see the Changes XD

Maybe theres some Delay .. so the Unwrap was not Updated yet

Thank you X.e.r.e.X.

And Lord_Firage, you can't use Magos without having Warcraft3 installed.

Oh .. forgot it xD

Nice but there is still way too many ice cracks. Add some armor or something.

Updated, added alot more definition and shadows and sapped some colour from the pants.

I'm not really sure how I feel about adding armour, I might do that tomorrow and see how it looks, but it's not really what I was going for.