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Map Review

1) Terrain - Excellent (5)
2) Trigger - Average (3)
3) Minor Error - Horrible (1)
4) Major Error - Good (4)
5) Replay Value - Average (3)
6) Fun factor/gameplay - Average (3)
7) Use of imported material - Excellent (5)
8) Single player - Average (3)
9) AI support -
10) Camera - Bad (2)
11) Originality - Good (4)
12) File Size - Good (4)
13) Internet/LAN Friendly -
14) Balancing -
15) Packaging - Bad (2)
16) Credits - Good (4)
17) Storyline - Good (4)
18) Theme - Good (4)
19) Protection - Excellent (5)
20) Quality - Average (3)
21) Description/Information/Detail - Bad (2)
22) Hiveworkshop rules & regulation - Excellent (5)
23) Game Mode -
24) Function -
25) Unit Placement -

Total Accumulation Point : 66/95 * 100 = 69.47

[+] - Well develop terrain.
[!] - Leak trigger, but since this is cinematic. It doesn't matter even though it leak.
[-] - Typo error found, you mistype "their" as "theire"
[-] - Lot's of typo error, it ruin the cinematic. Fix it.
[-] - Some camera movement not suitable for certain scenery.
[-] - Unit can walk through the door without open it ?
[-] - No music or voice actor, which is a kill joy for it.

Review : There terrain is very good, it been done as detail as possible to make it look like japanese cultural alike.

And it seems to follow the theme of japanese war time quite well.

However, it lack of music/voice actor which could kill the joy of watching this cinematic. Not forget to mention there is a lot of typo error in those dialog. If there is grammar error, it is fine as long as those audience could understand it. But, typo error is a eyesore especially when people try to read those dialog.

Some camera timing was not accurate, such as switching from one camera to another all the sudden at the wrong scenario.

This map condition is currently useful, but not ready to be recommend yet.

Septimus Score System

Awful: 1-10
Unacceptable : 11-30
Lacking : 31-49
Useful : 50-69
Recommend : 70-90
Highly Recommend : 91-100
Director Cut : 101-105
Sub-Zero : 106+

Rating & Miscellaneous information

Score - 69/100
Rating - 3/5
Condition - Average
Status - Approve
Review - 1

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