18:22, 26th Jun 2008
Septimus:

Good Point

[+] I like the way he detect which 1 is the real enemy.

Bad Point

[-] Why it written Samourai ? Should't it written Samurai ? Is it typo error ?

Overall - 4/5
Approve

lol k

another pretty random 'n somehow funny cinematic

i love this song n i loved how you used it (especially with the animals)
and the usage of the song is the biggest + u get from me
your camerawork needs improvement (Z-offset, usage of more (different) camera-perspectives etc.)
there was one nice idea how he countered the mirrorimage spell; i liked the idea
the other "skills" were relativly standard, some looked a littl odd but since i dunno the model u used i dunno if the animations would let you do any better

the end was also pretty random ^^

most beginners/mapping-novices do the same mistakes so i just can advice you to watch the other cinematics and read the comments t/here

[x] usage of music
[x] some nice ideas
[x] random/funny
[x] one noticed you put affort into this map

[/] camerawork
[/] use of animations
[/] some minor stuff

Oh, yes. But now i use the cameras perfectly. I created this map 6 months ago. I didn't know what was the Z offset axe. I have posted this map in Epicwar.com. And no long time later, i discovered Hivework Shop. I have decided to post this map only today. lol
Ps Sorry for my bad English, I'm French :-/)

Lol that was funny! The ending made my bro laugh for quite a while. If this is your first map, then incredible! I like the way he found the real mirror image thing. Keep it up

Nice cinematic ;D about the ending - ROFL that made me laugh nice one 5/5

REally cool, and funny 5/5

2.5/5.
Kind of silly.