The Sacrifice RPG

Rufus · Dec 13, 2016

The screenshots you uploaded are not showing. I guess you must have a broken link somehow, or perhaps a private album.

Except for uploading proper screenshots, you also need to improve your description significantly.
Check this out, as it may help you: Description Guide - Maps

Good luck!

deepstrasz · Jan 17, 2017

"2 - As long as it does not leave version 1.0, this game will still be a BETA of what it comes across, that is, you are playing an incomplete game"

Betas go into the Map Development forum:
Map Development

Plus, you've already uploaded a previous version....
The Sacrifice RPG v0.6c
Use the green Edit button (which works as an update button) at the bottom of the opening post to replace older versions with the newest...

viniciusbrasil · Jan 17, 2017

deepstrasz said:
"2 - As long as it does not leave version 1.0, this game will still be a BETA of what it comes across, that is, you are playing an incomplete game"

Betas go into the Map Development forum:
Map Development

Plus, you've already uploaded a previous version....
The Sacrifice RPG v0.6c
Use the green Edit button (which works as an update button) at the bottom of the opening post to replace older versions with the newest...

This game is totally playable and is already working but I like to say that it is a BETA because it is not complete only

deepstrasz · Jan 17, 2017

viniciusbrasil said:
This game is totally playable and is already working but I like to say that it is a BETA because it is not complete only

Are you sure? What are the versions over 1.0 going to be called, updated to the completed version?

viniciusbrasil · Jan 17, 2017

deepstrasz said:
Are you sure? What are the versions over 1.0 going to be called, updated to the completed version?

Version 1.0 is the last version of the game will not have more than that, so it's like saying that version 0.1 in the case ... is version 1.0 ... and a 0.2 version 1.1 ... and so in case it goes Because all the versions are completed to a certain area of the game

I'm still going to put images in this post, can you tell me if it is possible to remove the previous map then? I had not thought of giving update in the previous one ... I think it is better to add a new one that will be in first in the front line than to leave in the corner and forgotten

deepstrasz · Jan 18, 2017

viniciusbrasil said:
I'm still going to put images in this post, can you tell me if it is possible to remove the previous map then? I had not thought of giving update in the previous one ... I think it is better to add a new one that will be in first in the front line than to leave in the corner and forgotten

When you update, the map is automatically put on the first page (assuming the update has been made after 14 days since the previous update or since the first upload).

Ask for a thread to be deleted here:
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/staff-contact.692/

viniciusbrasil · Jan 18, 2017

Rufus said:
The screenshots you uploaded are not showing. I guess you must have a broken link somehow, or perhaps a private album.

Except for uploading proper screenshots, you also need to improve your description significantly.
Check this out, as it may help you: Description Guide - Maps

Good luck!

Done, I saw by your site that you recommended me ... before I had no desire to publish more ... now gave in so I did it right

Rufus · Jan 18, 2017

Well, now you have two separte bundles uploaded to the Hive, and this one contains two maps. Which one do you want to keep? This bundle or this one: The Sacrifice RPG v0.8c
Neither of those have any screenshots of the game, so I'm not sure you read the link carfully enough.

I think this is better of in map development, because as you mention yourself, it is still beta.

viniciusbrasil · Jan 19, 2017

Rufus said:
Well, now you have two separte bundles uploaded to the Hive, and this one contains two maps. Which one do you want to keep? This bundle or this one: The Sacrifice RPG v0.8c
Neither of those have any screenshots of the game, so I'm not sure you read the link carfully enough.

I think this is better of in map development, because as you mention yourself, it is still beta.

It is written there that if you visit the site you can see the images, and this very big ... I will leave only the 0.8c

I do not want to leave pictures here, I want people to visit the site

Rufus · Jan 25, 2017

I just merged your threads, as I realized it was a multi-upload. Avoid doing this in the future.
You should remove one of the resources now too.

mustafo · Jan 29, 2017

huh that's a good map!

Rufus · Jan 29, 2017

Oh, you need to have screenshots in your descriptions. You can link your website too, but it needs to be available here on the hive too.

viniciusbrasil · Jan 31, 2017

Rufus said:
Oh, you need to have screenshots in your descriptions. You can link your website too, but it needs to be available here on the hive too.

done ??? kkk ...

Rufus · Jan 31, 2017

Good!

done ??? kkk ...

Please, don't have that attitude. I'm just following the rules. :/

viniciusbrasil · Feb 2, 2017

Rufus said:
Good!

Please, don't have that attitude. I'm just following the rules. :/

Kkk I'm not angry or something I'm just asking ^^, I never posted anything here before so can speak the will so I do not have to miss the next time

dreadlord_tr · Feb 19, 2017

Damn awesome ! Hooked me up for more than 6 hours and i am still just level 800

viniciusbrasil · Feb 19, 2017

dreadlord_tr said:
Damn awesome ! Hooked me up for more than 6 hours and i am still just level 800

Wow, and people complained that it was very easy to get to the maximum level xD
It's cool when the game lasts a long time: D
Report if you see any bug please

deepstrasz · Feb 26, 2017

Music should be played through the music channel not the sound channel.
The map is already discovered.
Dropping the soul and picking it up again lead to its description being changed from killing 10 skeletons giving 1 soul to something like Warrior Soul, fighting soul...
Abilities need proper description. It's hard to understand what they do without using them and even then it's a bit unclear.
For some reason, I can't get more souls after I've written -str.

All in all, this map seems monotonous.

Set to Awaiting Update.

@Paillan, @A Void, some backup, suggestions please?

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Always check/recheck the Map Submission Rules! (Map Submission Rules)

A credits list is required where the names of the resource (models, skins, icons, spells, sound etc.) authors are mentioned along with the specific resource. It would be a luxury to have links leading to the used resources. Credits in the Quest Log would be appreciated.

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EDIT:
-intro cinematic scene cannot be skipped
-the bag (Rec) also gains experience when near the hero; I hope they do not share it
-how do you regenerate?

xXxMKDxXx · Nov 17, 2017

I think this map had cool soundtrack/s
Can I somehow get in touch with?

viniciusbrasil · Oct 30, 2019

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deepstrasz said:
Music should be played through the music channel not the sound channel.
The map is already discovered.
Dropping the soul and picking it up again lead to its description being changed from killing 10 skeletons giving 1 soul to something like Warrior Soul, fighting soul...
Abilities need proper description. It's hard to understand what they do without using them and even then it's a bit unclear.
For some reason, I can't get more souls after I've written -str.

All in all, this map seems monotonous.

Set to Awaiting Update.

@Paillan, @A Void, some backup, suggestions please?

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Always check/recheck the Map Submission Rules! (Map Submission Rules)

A credits list is required where the names of the resource (models, skins, icons, spells, sound etc.) authors are mentioned along with the specific resource. It would be a luxury to have links leading to the used resources. Credits in the Quest Log would be appreciated.

If you want more reviews, come here:
The Grand Review Exchange!
_______________________________________________________________________________

EDIT:
-intro cinematic scene cannot be skipped
-the bag (Rec) also gains experience when near the hero; I hope they do not share it
-how do you regenerate?

Please note a thing before see the map again to review ( i edited the whole game ), see in F9 about the authors has credits, i just don't added everyone name for name because it's more than 1000, and much models i got from another places, Chaos Realm, Uuu9, Korean Websites, Custom Made , etc ... and please see The important notes added on post description

deepstrasz · Oct 30, 2019

viniciusbrasil said:
Please note a thing before see the map again to review ( i edited the whole game ), see in F9 about the authors has credits, i just don't added everyone name for name because it's more than 1000, and much models i got from another places, Chaos Realm, Uuu9, Korean Websites, Custom Made , etc ... and please see The important notes added on post description

The credits list must be in the map thread description. That's what the rule says.
Make sure it works on the latest patch version (basically post 1.28).
There's no changelog in the map thread description. We shouldn't be forced to go to external links.

viniciusbrasil · Oct 30, 2019

deepstrasz said:
The credits list must be in the map thread description. That's what the rule says.
Make sure it works on the latest patch version (basically post 1.28).
There's no changelog in the map thread description. We shouldn't be forced to go to external links.

Well, about the version of warcraft 3 it work normal in all versions from the 1.26a at 1.31.1, the credits in map description i updated now, about the external link, how you see don't has another map version here i removed it, so has no reason to put a changelog if "never" posted it here, the game has much updates and i will not post here the updates too, will need go in website, or i will put a text with more than 100.000 letters here ...

i don't like much to post things here in Hive about the map because i allready have my owner page, I want to avoid having to go to multiple locations to always update ...

deepstrasz · Oct 30, 2019

viniciusbrasil said:
i don't like much to post things here in Hive about the map because i allready have my owner page, I want to avoid having to go to multiple locations to always update ...

Since you are using this site for your map's advertising, it's only fair to write a proper update description here. You can use spoiler/hidden tags and those 100.000 words won't show unless people click the spoiler/hidden buttons. But you don't need to post every changelog version but the latest if that helps.
For website promotion see_>The Hive Workshop Roundtable — Advertise your website here!

As for the credits, at least for those from this site, use this Resources in Use by The Sacrifice RPG v1.16h | HIVE to write a list of the names whose resources you've used.

Please read the rules.

If you want more reviews, you should participate in the The Grand Review Exchange!

R U L E S

Site Rules
Map Submission Rules

M A P - D E S C R I P T I O N

BB CODES
BB Codes | HIVE

MELEE MAPS
Description Guide - Melee Maps
Describing Your Melee Map
Melee Map Description Generator v1.3

MAPS IN GENERAL
The importance of a Description
Description Guide - Maps
Map Thread Guide
Map Description Making: Good & Bad
Map Description - Templates
Map Description Generator [1.2]

How to Add a Screenshot to your Map Description

ADDITIONAL NECESSARY INFORMATION

A credits list in the map thread description is required where the names of the resource (models, skins, icons, spells, sound etc.) authors are mentioned along with the specific resource. It would be a luxury to have links leading to the used resources. Credits in the Quest Log would be appreciated too.
A detailed changelog in the first post would be helpful to reviewers and notify fans about the newest implementations to your map.
Map thread tags are important. Please use those that fit and not more or none.

M A P - C R E A T I O N - G U I D E S

GENERAL MAPPING
A Beginner's Guide to Map Making
The Ultimate Beginners Terrain Tutorial
Advanced Terraining Tutorial
A Guideline to Terraining and the Hive's Terraining Section
Various Terraining Tips!
Basic Mapping Video Tutorial
WE Map Editor for Newbies!
The Path Of Proper Map Making - What to do and what should be avoided

MELEE MAPPING
How to create Melee Maps
General - Melee Maps like the Professionals
Competitive Melee Map
Melee mapping - The reasons behind common aspects of competitive 1v1 maps
Melee Do's and Dont's

PATHING
Pathing - Everything about it
[Terraining] Alternative Pathing Technique

LEAKS
Triggers - Memory Leaks and Custom Scripts

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