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The peasant 1 - The cave

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This is a little cinematic I made...

Its about a poor peasent, who is in a cave, and face some strange things.

(...and sorry for my english, but i've tried my best)

*Please say it, if you found any bugs, or if you found it good, or bad*
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I fixed some minor bugs, like shadow

Keywords:
Peasant,Poor,Cave,Monster,Cinematic
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The peasant - The cave (Map)

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03:38, 24th Jun 2008 Septimus: It is very short maybe around 1 minutes +, but I see no reason of reject it.

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03:38, 24th Jun 2008
Septimus:

It is very short maybe around 1 minutes +, but I see no reason of reject it.
 
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I thought this would be rubbish but it was very good :thumbs_up:.

Please make more it was funny but i want to see more seriousness this could make a very good series and the ice bit where he shoots up is brilliant.

Terrain was okay

Very well done!
 

.KC

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Actually it was good. First I thought "Ohh another bad cinematic", but somehow I found it good. Please keep producing this serie.

And no dont protect it. I cant see the reason why to protect a cinematic.
I am so lazy that I dont even put downloaded maps in the map folder to test them. I just open them in WE and test them.

So please dont protect.
 
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LoL
How is this to be continued? he's dead - he wont come again!!! lies!!!

lol omg i have to admit the other posts are right - u like it but u dunno exactly why
maybe 'cos it's so f***ing random; u dunno what will happen next and in the end it makes absolutely no sense

i'd like to write a proper comment about it but it's just not possible
i'm just thinking about this little guy running there - he wont get out of my head

n even tho the terrain is not the best etc it's just a great piece of work

n i don't believe that i'm just saying this - normally it's hard work to impress me

thumbs up
 
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Very well done. To protect your maps google a program called "Heavy Lock". So just google these words : heavy lock warcraft

Otherwise very good. Just a tip, to make it more professional, try to write perfectly. When you write "i like blablabla" you have to write with a big I.
 
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This may contain spoilers.
>>I do not get what you have written in the map description at the place where I choose the maps in game. It is unbeschrieben. What does that mean?
>>The idea of the protagonist's name to be same as the user account in the game is very good. When I first saw my name in it I was thinking hey what's this? This guy got same name as me. Pretty Good idea.
>>The thing which I did not like is that there was nothing about how that guy came to be present in the middle of the cave.
>>Random sound effects & music could have added to the fun.
>>The motion of the skeletons could be improved.
>>I saw a few flying doodads. See link image. The snow mountains you made are in mid-air.
The Hive Workshop
>>I wish it were longer.

Good but this could be improved. 2/5
Will see other parts too. Surely.
 

deepstrasz

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Apart from not knowing what the hell is going on, like where was that guy, why was he there and so on, the Skeletons just turned back... Oh, and bones don't really have a certain smell so you'd say it smells like them unless you cooked some sometimes and remember that.
It's also too short.
 
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