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The Night Wish

The Night Wish

From the creator of the Bloodline, I present a short (4:30) music video to Nightwish - Nemo.

Synopsis:
This cinematic tells a tale of a powerful witch who has lived a long, long time in solitude. A fateful night, she wishes an end to her loneliness and seeks companionship... through the methods she knows best.

Polishing
-A loading screen...?
-A filter for the title at the introduction
Credits listed at the end.
Comment and rate.

Keywords:
music, video, night, wish, witch, demon
Contents

The Night Wish (Map)

Reviews
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Comment: Camera :

The camera work is just excellent, unlike any other cinematic I've seen so far. Nothing else to say here.

Terrain :

Like always, you've created an astonishing world, the forest, the village, all the effects you've used, ...

Story :

The story is interesting, you've told the watcher the story by showing him everything instead of people talking to each other. The music also made it more entertaining.

Animations :

You've also used a lot of different animations, for example the father with his child, or the woman while channeling.

Other :

-No typos
-Excellent description

Hiveworkshop :

You are not breaking any rules.

Overall :

I would say you've put a lot of effort into this and I'm happy that you're still keeping the cinematics section alive, this cinematic is just top notch, I don't think there is anything wrong in this cinematic, everything is perfect. Good work.

 
Review - The Night Wish

A cinematic by dts0301

Camera :

The camera work is just excellent, unlike any other cinematic I've seen so far. Nothing else to say here.

Terrain :

Like always, you've created an astonishing world, the forest, the village, all the effects you've used, ...

Story :

The story is interesting, you've told the watcher the story by showing him everything instead of people talking to each other. The music also made it more entertaining.

Animations :

You've also used a lot of different animations, for example the father with his child, or the woman while channeling.

Other :

-No typos
-Excellent description

Hiveworkshop :

You are not breaking any rules.

Overall :

I would say you've put a lot of effort into this and I'm happy that you're still keeping the cinematics section alive, this cinematic is just top notch, I don't think there is anything wrong in this cinematic, everything is perfect. Good work.

Final Rating : 5/5
 
Level 31
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Elow to you


can u make the description more . .. .




:fp: 1/5 Reject!

You should have elaborate more about the reason such as telling people that description that are lacking detail are against the submission rules to avoid misunderstanding.

Even though description are part of the rules and it was common sense for a map to have proper description, most of the people have an misunderstanding guidelines (Technically) when it comes to description.

In this case, I seen the description to be short. However, it provide the necessary detail such as sypnosis and it was properly structure.

What the fuck. Seriously. This is a cinematic. You don't have the right to rate a cinematic 1/5 until you see it.

Seriously. Just look at his cinematics before this.

Actually he does have the right to vote the map 1/5 if it was unacceptable (In term of submission rules).

Sadly, his elaboration was poor and cause the misunderstanding. In this case, both sides are right and nobody are to be blame for.

Wow Jun, don't rate a map 1/5 for bad description, you should just ask for a better decription instead of rating.

He just post 1/5, but he really did't rate it.

Don't really know what else to add... its a cinematic soooo theres no gameplay.

Well, you could add a screenshot in a hidden tag. It is up to a person to view the screenshot.

Of course, ss is just a bonus to make description look better.

Unfinished
-A loading screen...?
-A filter for the title at the introduction

Instead of saying unfinished, I recommend you to use other phrase for it cause it sounds like you just upload a map without completing it at all.

I would review this map when I have the time.
 
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I think you did a great job here DTS, however i would wish some dialouge instead of only the music and pictures, if you for some reason skip the description, you might not know what this is all about... anyways who would do that, or not return to the page to read it... so il hand you a 4/5 and a cookie! COOKIE COOKIE BLWRAHRAHAHARARHAHRA!!
 
Being a cinematic maker myself, I would have to say good job 5/5
You did well on the environmental picture
You made a good movie without lyrics (Not too easy)
You crafted a fun and enjoyable storyline
You chose a good and fitting song || 5 / 5 ||

Edit: Also you did not protect the map so others can learn from it ^^
 
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I think you did a great job here DTS, however i would wish some dialouge instead of only the music and pictures, if you for some reason skip the description, you might not know what this is all about... anyways who would do that, or not return to the page to read it... so il hand you a 4/5 and a cookie! COOKIE COOKIE BLWRAHRAHAHARARHAHRA!!

I myself like the fact that it has no dialogue at all, because like the description already says, it's kinda a "music video" for the nightwish song "Nemo". Very nice cinematic, 5/5!
 
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This cinematic was awsome it went with the music really well.
loved the camera angles.

5/5

DTS just one question why this when the time could be put into the bloodline cinematics they are really good and alot of people cant wait for the next parts to come
 
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An awesome cinematic (as always).But let me get this straight; the witch conjured a creature which she put inside a conjured body so that she wouldn't be lonely anymore?

Also... damn that wasn't a happy ending for the other character.

Anyway, it's a 5/5 from me.

Yea. living for so long away from people makes her very socially inadequate, but she does know how to deal with demons.
 
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The cinematic was good, though the story was unclear some times. Like why did the witch summon the demon? You could have used a little bit of dialogue to explain that, no need to use it in all story, but a little bit of it could help making the story clearer.
4.5/5 so i will vote 5/5
 
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pigs are damned ... the cinematic almost made me mourn, and you give 1 / 5?

is perfect for me, it's great, I love the one who made the cinematic ...

I would have to be embarrassing!

I give you 5 / 5 and 100000 / 5!
 
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Hmm... I'l have to check this out later.
If you're interested in a loading screen/map preveiw then click my sig and post a request in my Sig Shop (Not only for sigs).
I'l fit you in somewhere between the other requests since it's a long time since i last did loading screens. :)
 
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4.5/5

some animations need to be fixed...such as the man carrying his dead son, he didn't carry him, he lift with his fingers!! :D, make the son really near to his arms or something..

or make it a destructible with bridge properties, put a dead unit on top of his hands, that will make him shake as well as the hand move...

well, i its a really good cinematic !! :D, i will tell my friends about this map.
 
Level 3
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Nice cinematic indeed, the effects are good, the storyline is purely perfect, but it would be nice of someone can make a campaign of this :grin:

4/5 so far....
 
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