shaun said:

since i remembered your name from the crash cinematic which i found highly recommended - cos the atmosphere camerawork etc was pretty pretty nice
i was rather disappointed by this map

terrain 1/5 (simple and lifeless)
-dont start your cinematic at the edge of your map you miss trees etc in the upper left corner

cammerawork 2/5 (there was no proper camera, no good shot, nothing)
the camera which was supposed to pretend he's drunk was just creepy for the eyes and disturbing after a minute

animation 1/5 (the only thing i would call special effect was when the "archimonde" killed the footman and the bubbles above his head)

sound 1/5 (not noticeably existent)
story/scenery (the latter goes hand in hand with terrain) 1.5/5

conclusion: the crash cinematic was short but pretty amazing and i REALLY hope that this will NOT be it's sequel, it's really hard to formulate this without offending your map, so i'm just saying: please remake it

2/5

PS: and stop rating your own maps (especially with 5/5)

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