The 4 Kingdoms(Version2.52)Protected

Moderator · Jan 24, 2009

15:41, 28th Jan 2009
Rui: Negative feedback from our mini-jury I see. [highlight]Rejected[/code]. Please do not upload it again.

bounty hunter2 · Jan 25, 2009

Here is my rating and comment:

1 - 10 points go on originality
1 - 10 points go on object editor work
1 - 10 points go on scripting 1 - 10 points go on terrain
1 - 10 points go on bug free
1 - 10 points go on gameplay*/fun factor
1 - 10 points go on lag
1 - 10 points go on proper submission and crediting
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That equals 80 points max.
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+ Altered Melee
1 - 10 points on balance
- Altered Melee
Scripting
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->That equals 80 points max.
To get a Hive grade over 1/5 at least 50% of the 80 (Triggered map) or of the 100 (Cinematic map) points is needed. That means at least 40 or 50 points. However if a map gets rated over 1/5 by me, that doesn't mean that I will imidietly vote it to be approved.

Originality: 1 point
You actually just replaced some models or skins with other ones.

Object editor work: 2 points
As I said you did nothing.

Balance: 6 points
The map is balanced okay, it is symetrical and the drops are good.

Terrain: 1 point
It was flat, you just put a couple of trees and cliffs.

Bug Free: 8 points
Since the races are normal it won't bug.

Gameplay/Fun Factor: 1 point
In a Altered melee people expect four or more new races. You added none.

Lag: 8 points
No lag, fine loading time.

Proper submission and crediting: 1 point
Credit your skin or model creators.

In overall: 28 / 80
35% minimal 50% not met.
For the hive grade: 1/5 I suggest this map for: Rejection
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In overall it is a altered melee that is actually a melee. You require a lot more work before this will get approved, the terrain and you must create new races. Not just replace models. And making some commands for the weather doesn't make the map an altered melee.

Good Luck in improving, bounty hunter2
I might not be checking this topic for some time. If you have any questions about the review or you update the map and want me to check it again, feel free to PM me or Visitor message me at any time.

Khaine · Jan 25, 2009

Map is an altered melee map. You haven´t played it exactly!
Because the trees are almost indestructible.

Also i have credit the model+ icon(Look at Quests(F9))

Yeah i will improve the terrain(I know it´s bad)+ add new race(s)- Naga
and add some new skins.

But i like my first Warcraft III map

Septimus · Jan 25, 2009

1) Creep facing position seems to be set at random.
2) Terrain was rather smooth and there is a lack of doodad/destructible usage. The field is the area where it seen to be the bare.
3) Creep placing was inbalance especially at the mid of the map. I could have easily kill all those golem with my air unit.
4) Seems like what you did was just adding a custom model.

1/5 and mini moderator vote was REJECTED

Altered melee need to have more model, more setup and etc etc. Adding just a few model won't make any differ of it from a ordinary melee map.

bounty hunter2 · Jan 25, 2009

The credits are required here as well. Altered melee is a map with new races or altered races.

Dekku · Jan 25, 2009

1/10. Nothing more to say.

Khaine · Jan 26, 2009

Thx for your comments!

But pls wait with rating the map->
I will improve it in many things->
So the map will soon reach a better rating than 1!

More skins will added soon...

bounty hunter2 · Jan 26, 2009

I rate the map imminently and if you update it there is a chance for that rating to change. But as I said before try implementing custom races in your map.

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