nice one Dude

Cool map!... And many new "Star Wars" models cool too.

FIRERANGER said:

Cool map!... And many new "Star Wars" models cool too.

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Darkness.Sansoyat said:

nice one Dude

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Thank you both!)

Good job, keep it up.

jj84 said:

Good job, keep it up.

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Thank You very much)

This is awesome. Here is some feedback and questions from playing ~10 games so far:

• Currently no way to build near the center to catch leaks. Add blink or ramp for builders or another player at the orange spot?
• Why do we start with two builders in different spots? It's confusing
• How do you play the mini game?
• After wave 4 the waves get much easier. Seems a little unbalanced
• Game crashes every time at the boss level

If I can help with adding tips or anything like that to the game please let me know!

Thank you for your hard work!

Heywoods said:

This is awesome. Here is some feedback and questions from playing ~10 games so far:

• Currently no way to build near the center to catch leaks. Add blink or ramp for builders or another player at the orange spot?
• Why do we start with two builders in different spots? It's confusing
• How do you play the mini game?
• After wave 4 the waves get much easier. Seems a little unbalanced
• Game crashes every time at the boss level

If I can help with adding tips or anything like that to the game please let me know!

Thank you for your hard work!

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Thank you, but it seems really strange with bosses, I played it about 10 times and no crashes... Which version of Warcraft do you have? Yeah, I'm working on the balance) kill the droid with your spells in first minigame and catch fishes in second one)

1 odd for turbolazers to attack additional targets, given how turbolazers work and their usualy large impact radius
2 almost seems rocket turrets and turbo lazers should switch roles
- little knowledge of land to air or land to land missile attack/defense turrets in starwars (missles are mostly found on air/spacecraft)
3 turbolasers notorious for anti air as well as anti armor ground and their usual slow firing speed do to the amount of power needed to charge a shot
- laser turret concept works well since its the anti infantry turret
4 plasma turret concept seems odd same as missile turret
5 same goes for the ion turret
- ion weapons normally as i understand are use to disable droids, weaken shields, slow or stop vehicles and air/space craft
6 magnet generator seems more like an ion field concept or by the name perhaps is ment to be an anti turbolift system (turbolift tech is what allows the hovering of vehicles on the ground)
7 dont genosians have wings?
- wave counter would be nice to have
8 fighter mini game, i cant shoot asteroids to blow them up seems possible with them being this small, vulture droids to stupid not to fly into/through asteriods, i also wonder what gravity field is affect these asteroids to move to fast or move at all in the first place
9 generator at 106%, wonder where that extra power is going to?
- ready check system to start waves before timer expires please
-phase 1 clone troopers vs phase 2 stormtroopers feels so wrong
-speeder bikes move very very slow, for speeder bikes
-learned this earlier on but still to late for i cant remove/sell/delete towers, building on the blue/red icons are bad thats where the ai uints go
-vehicle waves dialogue pretty funny (AT-ST) knowing a turbolazer would shred these things normaly for as long as it lives
-ewoks? are we the bad guys now?
10 many many many ship/unit naming errors

game works, not lore friendly in many many ways
no crashes to report, using most recent (current) version of wc3 (as everyone should be)

1. Hotkeys for turrets would be great.
2. The station terrain is a bit monotonous.
3. Maybe you should use the summon building ability instead of human building ability so that you would be able to build towers faster. Oh, but we have more than 1 builder.
   
4. Would be nice to add in the scoreboard how many units a player did not kill and because of that the Shield Generator had to suffer.
5. Would be nice to add Star Wars type sounds.
6. Please credit everything you've used, music etc. Some models look as if ripped from Star Wars games.
   
7. Would be good to write the specifics of every tower in their description (attack speed, damage etc.).
8. Are units supposed to regenerate?
9. I don't think the Rockets hotkey works. Also, this minigame is pretty tough to handle.
10. Strategy wise you need the better towers. Upgrading the first ones, doesn't do any good in late game. Not sure where you're supposed to get the proper gold for proper defense. If the battleship mini game would be more often. Well, maybe in multiplayer everyone can contribute to the repairs.
11. There's an issue with selecting the laser turret.
12. Deadly Magnetic Generator's selection circle is unseen.
13. When Vader came, one Dark Stormtrooper returned to the initial point but turned back towards the generator after reaching the starting point region.
14. The fishing minigame is more luck based than skill oriented.
15. Evil Ewok Anyways it's a pretty fragile unit lorewise to be so late in the game.
    
16. Some models look weird so close together because they are big. Maybe, you should make those bosses instead.
17. Maybe, a way to upgrade the allies (clones and stuff near the generator) too?
18. Not sure this is quite fair. Every boss gives 100 gold when killed. But that's hardly enough to build or research something for the upcoming stronger and stronger forces. I have to say, I am not too experienced with tower defenses.
    
19. Clone troopers have invisible weapons.
20. Death Star's selection circle can't be seen and because the unit is so big, others like Star Destroyer get through it.
21. What about some thrusters for R2D2 to be able to temporarily faster go to some places or fly or something when you need to quickly build a tower closer to the generator?
22. I feel as if the minigames should not be one time only but more often.

Approved.


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deepstrasz said:

1. Hotkeys for turrets would be great.
2. The station terrain is a bit monotonous.
3. Maybe you should use the summon building ability instead of human building ability so that you would be able to build towers faster. Oh, but we have more than 1 builder.
   
4. Would be nice to add in the scoreboard how many units a player did not kill and because of that the Shield Generator had to suffer.
5. Would be nice to add Star Wars type sounds.
6. Please credit everything you've used, music etc. Some models look as if ripped from Star Wars games.
   
7. Would be good to write the specifics of every tower in their description (attack speed, damage etc.).
8. Are units supposed to regenerate?
9. I don't think the Rockets hotkey works. Also, this minigame is pretty tough to handle.
10. Strategy wise you need the better towers. Upgrading the first ones, doesn't do any good in late game. Not sure where you're supposed to get the proper gold for proper defense. If the battleship mini game would be more often. Well, maybe in multiplayer everyone can contribute to the repairs.
11. There's an issue with selecting the laser turret.
12. Deadly Magnetic Generator's selection circle is unseen.
13. When Vader came, one Dark Stormtrooper returned to the initial point but turned back towards the generator after reaching the starting point region.
14. The fishing minigame is more luck based than skill oriented.
15. Evil Ewok Anyways it's a pretty fragile unit lorewise to be so late in the game.
    
16. Some models look weird so close together because they are big. Maybe, you should make those bosses instead.
17. Maybe, a way to upgrade the allies (clones and stuff near the generator) too?
18. Not sure this is quite fair. Every boss gives 100 gold when killed. But that's hardly enough to build or research something for the upcoming stronger and stronger forces. I have to say, I am not too experienced with tower defenses.
    
19. Clone troopers have invisible weapons.
20. Death Star's selection circle can't be seen and because the unit is so big, others like Star Destroyer get through it.
21. What about some thrusters for R2D2 to be able to temporarily faster go to some places or fly or something when you need to quickly build a tower closer to the generator?
22. I feel as if the minigames should not be one time only but more often.

Approved.

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Thank You very much for the review!) I will try to fix as much points as I can in next version, I'm working on sound effects by the way)

deepstrasz said:

• What about some thrusters for R2D2 to be able to temporarily faster go to some places or fly or something when you need to quickly build a tower closer to the generator?

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i totally forgot r2d2 can fly or at least hover, dont need the second worker if he can just go over the small gap @Phantawalker

hi, also some feedback from me.

About Star Wars Lore and mechanices: it has already been much stuff written. (one short thing about the "Star Destroyers", those are Venators. The empire used them in it's early days so you can use them but please changee the name)
Some "Roger, Roger" for the Battle Droids would be nice ^^

About the turrets (apart from lore stuff):
Turbo-Lasers are very strong in early game and i also used them in later game but i am unsure if they did much effect there.
Plasma-Tower: Probably the most important unit. They can attack air units when they are at least level 2. (I don't know if it is intended but for me it was very important that they could attack air units.
Laser-Towers: also strong since they can debuff enemies
Rocket-Towers: i used them in the first round but no more in the second one. Feels useless for me
Energy-Turret: for units without armor (e.g. ewoks) usefull but i did not build much of them
Magnet Generator: same as Rocket-Towers and way to expensive
Ion-Tower: a comic book guy would say something like "worst high end tower ever". I tried building them in the first round. In the second i did not used them but tested one at the final boss using cheats: it did not much damage. (25% to deal 260 damage to a Venator. Great isn't it)

Speaking about the final boss: My second round was successfull but i am sure that the final boss is unkillable (without cheating). It has too much hp and there is not enough damage.
Also the Health increases a bit too much when fighting the empire. And At-Ats and some other units are definetly not that fast. (or some units are just too fast, i am unsure about that)
Also i am missing Doku and Palps.

Events: Yes that are some events and it is nice to repair the generator but it is hard to play them since the control is a bit hard.

Upgrades: nothing to say. I think they are ok.

R2D2: it's not the typical way you command building untis in tower defense maps (at least not typical for the ones i played)

Clone-Troopers: There are some shooting boys who kill 1 or 2 units. (Replacing them with Storm-Troopers would be a funny gag)

a little bug: in singleplayer you can only play on the red position. I tried to start as blue just for fun and saw that there were also creeps spawning at the red position. If you have 4 people this is not important but it is a bit annoying for singleplayer.

Whole in one: The map has potential but better balancing and less mistakes concerning lore would be nice.

i can agree with most of what Gauda said, with one exception

the Ion Tower may seem weak first, but the fully upgraded version is basically the only way to kill the final wave, as it deals damage based on HP percent. But that is also my biggest issue with it,
nearing the end, suddenly all other towers get useless, except maybe for their debuffs and the only way to deal damage is if you get lucky shots on the ion tower, this needs some rework for me.

some other small things:
- why not use the Techtree requirements in object editor instead of triggering the research? that way you would be able to see what towers do before researching them
- a bit more info on towers would be great, like show exact values maybe
- INCREASE R2D2 MOVEMENT SPEED!!!
- as said before, make it possible to build in the back to be able to help each other catch leaks
- would be nice for minigames to have a little more impact moneywise
- some things like terrain has already been mentioned
- Selling has been mentioned before, but i deem it important enough to say it again
- you should check your triggers for leaks and properly remove dummy units


TLDR: Nice concept, needs some small adjustments 3.5/5