11:26, 24th May 2009
Hawkwing: Alright, I think it's good enough. Take a look at the public's comments. They've got the idea.

The horse looks buggy

The horse looks like a camel xD
The cloak is nice, but the colours are a bit confused. Yellow/blue/brown/black don't mix well in my opinion.

well, the blue is coz he has like a blue dragon scale.
The yellow is coz he is lighting knight. What colour is lightin?
Maybe can i did it light blue.
The brown is coz its a horse! what colour are the horses? if i do it white, the color will fit less than now! :S
Take on count that the original model is a death horse thingy with horns and really confused things.
Anyone can do a costructive critic with more ideas?
Some idea to what color scheme will look good?
Waiting...

What colour is lightin?

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what colour are the horses?

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Lightning? normally its white, but well...
and horses... they come in variety of colours...

well, iv recolour the yellow parts, as hawkwing advice me. How its lookin now?

much better. if only there was a way to give the poor horse ears... =))

Oh! I had forgotten that! i will see if i can add it adding alpha to the horns...


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i did it, and looks horrible:

Also, the ears of the horse are under the helmet in my skin.

neat, but the face and the horse head look odd and out of shape. you could rework that. his face is kinda like full of holes and weird.... The armour could use some propper shadings and highlights, as well as different tone and definition. Wouldn't hurt a few acid etched engrawings either.

Rating: 2.89/5 Lacking, but nice idea.
work on it a bit more :]

~Misha~

Misha said:

neat, but the face and the horse head look odd and out of shape. you could rework that. his face is kinda like full of holes and weird.... The armour could use some propper shadings and highlights, as well as different tone and definition. Wouldn't hurt a few acid etched engrawings either.

Rating: 2.89/5 Lacking, but nice idea.
work on it a bit more :]

~Misha~

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-Well, the horse head is a bit difficult coz it is my first time makin a horse.
-What holes do you mean on the face??
-The armor is a bit hard to me to make it, but i will try to get it better.

Wouldn't hurt a few acid etched engrawings either.

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Sorry but i cant understand thats. I didnt know some of the words that you used and these doesnt figure on my english translator. :S

Well it is a cool skin, but as the others mentioned the horse looks bad. As for the other part, i think they really look awesome. good job to you!

Xezko said:

-Well, the horse head is a bit difficult coz it is my first time makin a horse.
-What holes do you mean on the face??
-The armor is a bit hard to me to make it, but i will try to get it better.


Sorry but i cant understand thats. I didnt know some of the words that you used and these doesnt figure on my english translator. :S

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well..... ?=3
~rework the horse head a bit more then :3
~the shading on the face is so weird that it leads me to think there are holes on it @.@
~armor.... practice makes perfect my friend

~acid etched engravings? well... that's kinda a light linework on the armor that is done with acid, it looks very good, like a metal tattoo C:

- the horse looks like a llama. But I blame blizzard.
- the armor's shading needs more smoothing
- he is in full metal armor but he has a semi-wooden shield?

the horse face plate doesn't really fit ?=/

I suggest you base your horse off of the Knights horse not exactly but get a good idea of what it looks like, cause your horse looks like a camel *granted I know making horses is awkward as we are not horses .. or are we?*

Edit: Oh also you could just fix the helm and title him

Sir Azthen the Camel Rider

Looks good

I actually really like this skin. The metal appears very good in game. The face looks pretty good except for the eyes being WAY too big. The scales should be much darker and less blue.

Hmm you can change his face it should look better

horse needs armor as well.
and it might be a good idea to make armor light-yellowish. but only a bit.

Kinda messy but could be useful...

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My rating: 3/5
You should try to create an helmet for the knight and fix the horse a bit.
If you change that and perhaps some small detials, you'll have a 5/5.

Just a bunch of tips :
First, i'd make the horse dark/light grey, and i'd also remove the face plate of
the horse, and make the shields fullly metal^^

tnhks to da comments. But there isnt a shield. There are the horse shoulder pads. X)
I'm workin on this, tomorrow i dont hav school and maybe i can update this tomorrow.

Reminds me of them jousting ppl

nice work

the horse does look kinda funny tho.

Xezko said:

tnhks to da comments. But there isnt a shield. There are the horse shoulder pads. X)

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Thats what i meant

Xezko said:

tomorrow i dont hav school

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Lucky you. i have army D:

D:
Sorry i didnt upload the skin yesterday and not today. my mom used the PC all the damn day ): (she is workin on a job or something )
I will trate to work on this to the nite and tomorrow. Sorry again. :/

Finally Updated!

- Added more armor to the horse
- Re maked the sword
- Darkened the dragon scale
- fully plated the horse's shoulder pads
- fixed the eye of Sir Azthen
- Fixed various shadow/lights effect (For example: shadin parts of the horse that is under the rider)
- Other minor impros/fixes.

C=

*facepalm* DON'T Doublepost D:

This is an superb skin man. The horse and the robes look GREAT. My only criticism is the sword, which looks like it could use better shading when it is wrapped.

Great skin, 5/5.

Hmm.... still the same issue with the horse head plate =/

rework that do two plates with lill chains. maybe that'll be nicer :]

The eyebrows on the screenshot looks kinda funny

Misha said:

*facepalm* DON'T Doublepost D:

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*facepalm* DON'T Spam D:

Btw, check the dates: 05-28-2009, 09:29 PM / Today, 03:53 PM (5-30)
two days.

Hmm.... still the same issue with the horse head plate =/

rework that do two plates with lill chains. maybe that'll be nicer :]

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well, its a bit difficult, coz the horse head has the worst wrapp of all. I tried to do a full helm on it, but the head get totally black :S I tried to fixed it, but is near impossible to do some better, the only thing that i can do is to remove it and add hair. but if i do that, would be weird the horse with all the armor in his body and no helm

Dark Nite said:

This is an superb skin man. The horse and the robes look GREAT. My only criticism is the sword, which looks like it could use better shading when it is wrapped.
Great skin, 5/5.

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Tnks man! well, im not so good makin swords, this is my first one :S

Xezko said:

*facepalm* DON'T Spam D:

Btw, check the dates: 05-28-2009, 09:29 PM / Today, 03:53 PM (5-30)
two days.

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Double-post is double-post, regardless of date. *sigh*


Anyway... what wou might do is to make that horse head plate like if it's composed of 3 smaller plates, would keep the same look, but would not look as weird as it is now.

alright i guess

Don't talk !@#$ the skin is really great and the horse is perfect, lets see how would you make a horse from a skeleton... -_-

haha, thanks. atm im workin on other things (im workin the witch doctor model for the CloudWolf project) but when i get finished i will improve this with some cool things that im thinkin of. See ya!

Misha, thats bullshit, read the rules... damnit, hes allowed to double post if there are 48 hours between, you should really get a idea....

And the skin is cool, but it is hampered by the mistakes of blizzard, oh well..

And Misha, I thought you are a skinner, so you should know that most horse wraps of blizzard are completely bullshit, the death knight horse is one of the worst, so please...

thanks for defendin me! :3
but, please, dont make a fight of this. And i say this coz i know Misha, and i know that he will post his reply to you xD
Well, thanks to all for the possitive comments. Im feel fine with how this skin looks.

*facepalm*
Its a skin! Ò.ó
But thanks for that 9!

I like it, i think that the face looks a bit, odd but i like the idea of the tattoo on his forehead, its nice, but i think needs a tiny bit of work, i'd say 4/5 gj

This is a very nice model. Its concentrated on 1 color in places, I would fix that. Also, I found a see through triangle on the horse's butt ingame. And a pervert would lol after reading this

First, you NO need to review the model, its from Blizzard.
Second, I make the Skin not the Model. Skin! Skin, skin, skin! model = NOT
Third, maybe you would try to get better of what are you talking about before to post. You are reviewing a Blizzard's Model! XD
Skin, Piel, Peau, Haut... in wich language you want it?!! NOT A MODEL. PLEASE.

really nice