Right Of Defence v2.5

Moderator · Aug 25, 2012

Vengeancekael
Date: 2012/Oct/31 13:40:36

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Reasons:
Memory Leaks are not destroyed: Leaks tutorial
Inefficient Triggers: Triggering Tutorials
[Optional] Missing Custom Preview Image: To add a preview image, resize the image to 256x256 or 128x128 using gimp and save it as .tga. Import the image and change its path to 'war3mapPreview.tga'.

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aarcaa · Aug 26, 2012

Description is not enough,and add screenshots please.

kingston45 · Aug 31, 2012

aarcaa said:
Description is not enough,and add screenshots please.

Yeah,screenshots are importants.If you don't want to put some screenshots,you can put a video.

Problems that maybe face a map creator:
-Lazy to make a long description.
-Use other people map and make it his/her map.

And then,moderators will comment:
"Please improve the description, get inspired by the description of other approved maps. You're not telling us much about the map's content, gameplay, originality, etc."

meatfactory · Sep 5, 2012

Yes indeed the description could be pimped a bit with some bb codes. As for the gameplay I think it's more of an AOS type map rather than a Defense. Terrain is simple, Custom items and abilities are made only from standard ones (no advanced functions), there are no custom models. Nothing much about this map but with some work it can be more enjoyable. Also try to avoid the "triggering unit" function instead use for Enters Region event - entering unit, Dying unit for event - unit dies ... and so on. 2/5

xDChiiz · Sep 9, 2012

Okay i added some use of BB codes such as a new video and some text colourings. I also improved map details with better terrain and doodas to help it. I tried to improve on description but could not think of much more. Keep on correcting my problems and helping me make better maps thanks!

xDChiiz · Sep 15, 2012

In v2.3 i learned how to use spell triggers and now tried to use some dota spells to try out.

bhusta · Sep 26, 2012

I can't see the video, you have to change the privacy settings.

Right Of Defence v2.4

First of all, you shouldn't refer too much to DotA.
There are better sources for spells like 1 | 2 | 3 and this Tutorial.

You can use this link to improve your description.

The Terrain is also poor. This could help you.

I played the Goblin Warlord

He has three passive abilities what makes him boring to play and the abilities don't fit together.

It is good that one can use the spells with Q W E R.

The Tooltips are okay but you should improve them too,
because they really don't tell you how a spell works. link

In my opinion the map is too hard for one player at the moment.

Good luck with improving your map

Radicool · Oct 25, 2012

Reasons:
Lacking Description: Template
Other:
Missing custom preview image: To add a preview image, resize the image to 256x256 or 128x128 using gimp and save it as .tga. Import the image and change its path to 'war3mapPreview.tga'.

Why on earth is the map rejected because its missing a custom preview image (I understand its mentioned
as "other", but it shouldn't be mentioned at all...) Since when was a preview image a requirement to a successful
map? Stupid.

Anywho:

The game seems to start a little fast. I just picked my hero and massive orc units are already attacking. Pherhaps
let the small attackers start, then send in bosses a couple of minutes later. The game should start a little easier,
then progress in difficulty.

You need to fix memory leaks, I noticed a lot and this will cause your game to get laggier and laggier as time
goes on. http://world-editor-tutorials.thehelper.net/cat_usersubmit.php?view=27219

Although the terrain is interesting, it seems a little messy and odd. I think there are a little too many shrub on
the fields.

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