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Revenge of the Blademaster - Part 1
- Author(s)
- millzy
- Tags
- Cinematic, Medieval / Warcraft
- Size
- 10.68 MB
- Rating
- Downloads
- 1342
- Created
- Aug 8, 2010
- Updated
- Aug 10, 2010
- Resources
- 1
- State
Approved
This bundle is marked as recommended. It works and satisfies the submission rules.
DetailsStatusMap Type - Cinematic
Map Status - Open source
Current version - v1.01
Duration - 9 minutes and 23 seconds
DescriptionThis is the first part to my cinematic series it took me a long time to make as for i wasent working on it constantly
This is the begining, and this cinematic opens up the story to the Revenge of the Blademaster series. The humans are attacking the orc town where the young blademaster lives. so this shows why the blademaster is after his revengeScreenshots
Change log
v1.00 first up load v1.01 Grammar and typoes fixxed Reveng of The Blademaster mapsother maps by millzy
Keywords:
revenge, blademaster, war, revenge of the blademaster, cinematic.
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Reviews
- Joined
- Jun 29, 2010
- Messages
- 788
Will check. Also, please tell us more about the cinematic in description. Also, you have to give credit to the people who made the models and skins (unelss you made them yourself.)
Edit: Ok many spelling and grammar mistakes but other than that I liked the terrain and the cinematic story.
Edit: Kk, atleast fix all those grammar and spelling mistakes.
Edit: Ok many spelling and grammar mistakes but other than that I liked the terrain and the cinematic story.
Edit: Kk, atleast fix all those grammar and spelling mistakes.
- Joined
- Jul 9, 2008
- Messages
- 1,552
credits are in the cinematic at the end
i dont want to give away to much of what happends....its telling you that the humands are atacking the town where the blademaster lives nothing els to add realy
i dont want to give away to much of what happends....its telling you that the humands are atacking the town where the blademaster lives nothing els to add realy
- Joined
- Aug 11, 2009
- Messages
- 6,528
You have to post the credits here in the description as well, it's a rule.
Anyway, I'll check it now.
Edit:
As a member of the group Map Reviewers, I will be reviewing Campaigns/Cinematics:
[+] Terrain
[+] Battle Scene
[+] Story
[-] Flat Terrain
[-] Grammar mistakes
[-] Typos
[-] Missing words
Rating: 2/5
Status: Approval
Anyway, I'll check it now.
Edit:
As a member of the group Map Reviewers, I will be reviewing Campaigns/Cinematics:
[+] Terrain
[+] Battle Scene
[+] Story
[-] Flat Terrain
[-] Grammar mistakes
[-] Typos
[-] Missing words
Rating: 2/5
Status: Approval
- Joined
- Dec 5, 2009
- Messages
- 846
I think its pretty good. but some wrong typos.
- Joined
- Jun 29, 2010
- Messages
- 56
Huge file size geez 
i like it alot but you should totally fix all the typos.
and maybe fix up some of the script some parts r kinda cheesy.
also one thing is when the Soildier says to Grannis
(you goin to be ok sir (or w.e)) change the "ok" to "okay" : ).
but yeah sweet idea cant wait 4 that next one.
Edit: you Fixed Pretty much all the Grammar and spelling mistakes good job : )
i like it alot but you should totally fix all the typos.
and maybe fix up some of the script some parts r kinda cheesy.
also one thing is when the Soildier says to Grannis
(you goin to be ok sir (or w.e)) change the "ok" to "okay" : ).
but yeah sweet idea cant wait 4 that next one.
Edit: you Fixed Pretty much all the Grammar and spelling mistakes good job : )
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- Joined
- Jul 9, 2008
- Messages
- 1,552
ok guyz thanks for the reviews i noticed use are all talking about my typos and grammar well im pritty bad with grammar and stuff like that.
- Joined
- Aug 11, 2009
- Messages
- 6,528
You could pass me the map so that I remove the typos etc.
If you don't trust me then fine.
If you don't trust me then fine.
- Joined
- Jul 21, 2010
- Messages
- 923
Hey I am willing to help with all the typos as well.
p.s.: I am good at terrain (wink wink) want sexy map? I might help you
p.s.: I am good at terrain (wink wink) want sexy map? I might help you
- Joined
- Aug 11, 2009
- Messages
- 6,528
As a member of the group Map Reviewers, I will be checking approved cinematics again:
(This is not counted as double post)
(This is not counted as double post)
Compatible - X
Permission - X
Map already uploaded - X
Rules - X
Bugs - X
Genre - X
Section - X
[X = Passed]
[X = Failed]
- Joined
- Jan 18, 2010
- Messages
- 131
This is a great cinematic, as we don't often enough watch.
The bad thing is you should really do something for the typo and ponctuation because it's somehow quite annoying. Be some more perfectionnist.
I also think you should use your imagination to find custom names for your characters instead of just taking old warcraft ones (granis, kigami, rokan, etc.).
Nice cinematic overall, i'm impatient to watch the following ones.
The bad thing is you should really do something for the typo and ponctuation because it's somehow quite annoying. Be some more perfectionnist.
I also think you should use your imagination to find custom names for your characters instead of just taking old warcraft ones (granis, kigami, rokan, etc.).
Nice cinematic overall, i'm impatient to watch the following ones.
- Joined
- Nov 20, 2013
- Messages
- 23
great cinematigcs; but at the begining the soldiers were banging each others.that was funny
Map Reviewer
- Joined
- Jun 4, 2009
- Messages
- 18,836
This should have been one film, one story.
2.5/5.
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2.5/5.
Pressing ESC more than one time will start the countdown multiple times.
- Joined
- Apr 13, 2017
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