Order Of The Hoof

Moderator · Apr 17, 2016

Next Review: [2016-06-10]

Rufus Moderation Note

What you need to do:
In its current state, this alteration doesn't offer much new units, mostly just reskinned and renamed originals. The heroes have new abilities, but they are all standard warcraft abilities all the same. I saw an alteration on the archmage, having replaced the lavaspawn with an infernal like model. It is a very simple edit, and it misses certain animations that a lavaspawn have.

It doesn't really give the feeling of playing new races as it just slightly different from each race.

Additionally, it doesn't really feel like it is a finished product because of multiple style and structure errors. For exmaple, the human hereos had very variating tool tips. Some of them were super long with a large piece of story while others didn't. The footman unit in the barracks had no difference from a normal footman and its button position was second in line even though the first in line wasn't available. Things like those should be in order to reduce the feeling of the map being sloppy.

Also, having the map looking like it does prevents ai players from killing the creeps in the middle. They don't have the brains to shoot down the trees, and therefore leaving everything in there for the human players to take advantage of.

While the map contains a lot of good models, and having clear themes for each race, this map still needs a lot of updates in order to become something unique. I suggest you post this in the map development forum for additional feedback.
Right now, as there are a lot of things to improve on still, status is set to awaiting update.

Next Review: [2016-05-02]

Rufus Moderation Note

What you need to do:
The current state of the map is not acceptable.
The terrain is lacking, and items should always drop from enemies in order to be a good melee map. I think this tutorial could help you a lot.

You should also take a look at your description, as you have a lot of broken bb code snippets here and there.

Status set to Awaiting Update until the maps overall quality has been improved.

bear_369 · Apr 17, 2016

foje tit said:
AUTHOR NOTE
THIS IS JUST ON BETA VERSION SO STAY TOONED

Alpha/Beta maps can't be submitted into the Map section unless it's completely finished.

Also, some screenshots would be great due everyone need it to see how the map looks like.

Althavis · Apr 17, 2016

oh SORRY IT IS NOT ON BETA VERSION ITS FINISH AND JUST NEED UPDATES

bear_369 said:
alpha/beta maps can't be submitted into the map section unless it's completely finished.

Also, some screenshots would be great due everyone need it to see how the map looks like.

i dont know how to put pictures and video can you help me

bear_369 · Apr 17, 2016

It's these BBCodes.

~ For photos/GIF.
[YOUTUBE]Video's Url/Link[/YOUTUBE*] ~ For videos.

Just add them into your description.
You can't add a video that is from an another site than YouTube btw.

One last thing, please avoid double-posting due it's a part of the rules.

Rufus · Apr 17, 2016

Next Review: [2016-05-02]

Rufus Moderation Note

What you need to do:
The current state of the map is not acceptable.
The terrain is lacking, and items should always drop from enemies in order to be a good melee map. I think this tutorial could help you a lot.

You should also take a look at your description, as you have a lot of broken bb code snippets here and there.

Status set to Awaiting Update until the maps overall quality has been improved.

Althavis · Apr 18, 2016

The current state of the map is not acceptable.
The terrain is lacking, and items should always drop from enemies in order to be a good melee map. I think this tutorial could help you a lot.

Thank You I hope You like my improvement soon

Aether · Apr 25, 2016

From the looks of the description, it makes me feel, "I will test it later." Please, improve your map description, add some color, sizes, and whatsoever. This helps you how to add some color, sizes, etc. To make it more attractive, take a look at this. If you don't know how to put screenshot, click here.

Notes, you should follow

The description is still not good. You might want to improve the description. Like fixing the broken BBCodes in your description. Check the example below.

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The terrain is too empty. Its too simple. You need to take a look at this.

For now, I will vote for awaiting update

Althavis · Apr 26, 2016

Sir Can you Point me The part of the map that Needed a better terrain

Aether · May 1, 2016

foje tit said:
Sir Can you Point me The part of the map that Needed a better terrain

I forgot about this. Let me check this again.

Edit:

I just downloaded the newest version. But it seems, I can't test or play it. It won't open, it crashes instead.

Althavis · May 2, 2016

Aether said:
I forgot about this. Let me check this again.

Edit:

I just downloaded the newest version. But it seems, I can't test or play it. It won't open, it crashes instead.

ok I will try it to download it to another computer to see if it crashes or not :goblin_jawdrop:

Oh I try it on my friends Computer Cafe I doesn't Crash but I will try to figure it out

Aether · May 2, 2016

foje tit said:
ok I will try it to download it to another computer to see if it crashes or not

Oh I try it on my friends Computer Cafe I doesn't Crash but I will try to figure it out

Don't worry, its fine now.

Nortander · May 7, 2016

Hey! Coming directly from Leafshade

(Thanks again for your sweet comments, by the way!).
As promised, I tested your map and... I absolutely loved it! Though it might still be a little too easy, it's got all the things I like! New units, new skins, nex spells, a well-thought map, a desertic area, (...).

I've only played once as of now (with the Nightelves) so I still have a lot to test.
However, I've already found a few things you might like to fix

Here are the little bugs I've noticed so far:
-The nightelf moon priestress does not have a voice;
-The Keeper of the Groove still has his old portrait while he has now the skin of a [female] dryad;
-The ability of the keeper of the groove which summons an ancient to fight first summons it with the animations of the nightelf building process but if you pick the ancient and give him an order, he turns into his final form in a split second;
-The attack of the Keeper of the Groove still has its own graphism while the hero now uses a bow (and not his hands);
-The hero Warden still has his female voice although it is now a man.

I might have forgotten a few things but those are the main points!
Again, thanks for your hard work! I really appreciate it!!
See you!

Althavis · May 8, 2016

Cleclejossstone said:
Hey! Coming directly from Leafshade (Thanks again for your sweet comments, by the way!).
As promised, I tested your map and... I absolutely loved it! Though it might still be a little too easy, it's got all the things I like! New units, new skins, nex spells, a well-thought map, a desertic area, (...).

I've only played once as of now (with the Nightelves) so I still have a lot to test.
However, I've already found a few things you might like to fix
Here are the little bugs I've noticed so far:
-The nightelf moon priestress does not have a voice;
-The Keeper of the Groove still has his old portrait while he has now the skin of a [female] dryad;
-The ability of the keeper of the groove which summons an ancient to fight first summons it with the animations of the nightelf building process but if you pick the ancient and give him an order, he turns into his final form in a split second;
-The attack of the Keeper of the Groove still has its own graphism while the hero now uses a bow (and not his hands);
-The hero Warden still has his female voice although it is now a man.

I might have forgotten a few things but those are the main points!
Again, thanks for your hard work! I really appreciate it!!
See you!

As your right my Friend The day I uploaded this Map Was Last Week And About This whole weekend I am trying to update everything ,here is the changes that I make:
-Keeper of the Groove has the dryad portrait
-keeper of grove missile is an arrow
-about the voice of the warden and Moon prietess they are now change
-UI Interface of the Map Has Change and other things
-Now I am working on making the map bigger and the terrain suitable for 8 players

It might take days or weeks before I will upload the Large Update but I have to make it fast and ease cause School is near and this time in my country tomorrow will be the election this day or tomorrow I will upload the Version 1.02 for you to test I know that there is many fixes needed on my map on units doodads and others :goblin_good_job:

Rufus · May 25, 2016

Next Review: [2016-06-10]

Rufus Moderation Note

What you need to do:
In its current state, this alteration doesn't offer much new units, mostly just reskinned and renamed originals. The heroes have new abilities, but they are all standard warcraft abilities all the same. I saw an alteration on the archmage, having replaced the lavaspawn with an infernal like model. It is a very simple edit, and it misses certain animations that a lavaspawn have.

It doesn't really give the feeling of playing new races as it just slightly different from each race.

Additionally, it doesn't really feel like it is a finished product because of multiple style and structure errors. For exmaple, the human hereos had very variating tool tips. Some of them were super long with a large piece of story while others didn't. The footman unit in the barracks had no difference from a normal footman and its button position was second in line even though the first in line wasn't available. Things like those should be in order to reduce the feeling of the map being sloppy.

Also, having the map looking like it does prevents ai players from killing the creeps in the middle. They don't have the brains to shoot down the trees, and therefore leaving everything in there for the human players to take advantage of.

While the map contains a lot of good models, and having clear themes for each race, this map still needs a lot of updates in order to become something unique. I suggest you post this in the map development forum for additional feedback.
Right now, as there are a lot of things to improve on still, status is set to awaiting update.

Althavis · May 26, 2016

Rufus said:
Next Review: [2016-06-10]

Rufus Moderation Note

What you need to do:
In its current state, this alteration doesn't offer much new units, mostly just reskinned and renamed originals. The heroes have new abilities, but they are all standard warcraft abilities all the same. I saw an alteration on the archmage, having replaced the lavaspawn with an infernal like model. It is a very simple edit, and it misses certain animations that a lavaspawn have.

It doesn't really give the feeling of playing new races as it just slightly different from each race.

Additionally, it doesn't really feel like it is a finished product because of multiple style and structure errors. For exmaple, the human hereos had very variating tool tips. Some of them were super long with a large piece of story while others didn't. The footman unit in the barracks had no difference from a normal footman and its button position was second in line even though the first in line wasn't available. Things like those should be in order to reduce the feeling of the map being sloppy.

Also, having the map looking like it does prevents ai players from killing the creeps in the middle. They don't have the brains to shoot down the trees, and therefore leaving everything in there for the human players to take advantage of.

While the map contains a lot of good models, and having clear themes for each race, this map still needs a lot of updates in order to become something unique. I suggest you post this in the map development forum for additional feedback.
Right now, as there are a lot of things to improve on still, status is set to awaiting update.

Thank you for The review I already worked on Heavy Custumization since last week

Rufus · May 26, 2016

Great!
Keep up the good work!

Rufus · Aug 24, 2016

Moved to substandard due to lack of development, discussion and interest from the author.

Contact me if an update is uploaded, and it will be moved back to the moderation queue.

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