18:02, 22nd Apr 2010
DonDustin: I like your concept, but it still needs some improvements:
1. please try to use other textures for the clothes, as it still looks too much like Gul'dan.
2. another weapon would be good. That dagger plane weapon is way too low poly and does not look good. Making the staff a bit more interesting might be a good idea aswell. The ghoul had was already a nice start.
3. I don't like that you added a whole skeleton to his back. The first reason is that it adds many additional faces to your model which would not bee needed at all. But the second and more important reason is that it is not really creative. Those 2 skeleton heads + the chest with that one arm should do it aswell. And if you still want to add more skeleton to it, I would suggest to take a look at my point "2.", why dont you make the handle of the stuff out of a skeleton leg and the dagger a modification of a skeleton hand?

It will not be "rejected until updated" as it is already quite fine, but please take my advice

General Frank: I like the changes and the model so I approve.

mhm, there isn't much changed beside a new head, a new staff and a new weapon... right now it is just a simple geomerge, I suggest you to work more on this.

Dont worry iam working on it it gonna be much more interesting with more features. But as a simple necrolyte, its good.

Nice

I like it, it's simple, not too flashy. I am giving you a 3.5/5

I like it but you should add some more features.

You get +rep and 3.5/5 now but Im sure ill give you 4/5 or more when you add some features

And do you have any ideas for more features ? i would be glad for them

I would remove skeletons chest and legs and maybe add one impaled human skull and some bones hanging like scourage chimes item icon ( maybe to hang on staff? ).

I would also add some pouches and skulls around waist maybe.

You can also add Rod of Necromancy (ingame item,undeads have it in its shop I think) or something.

But thats just me

The idea is awesome

Neat idea of a model. Execution's not perfect, though.

pretty sweet

The beard looks really, really wierd.

Excellent for a undead dwarf warlock.

OMG! This is awesome model! It really looks like bone collector
I'll use it in my campaing.
100500/5 !

Lmao Lil Sheyn
This isen't bad i think... real good... i like it.

nice!

i like it it looks badass

The updated version looks great, I love the staff.

terradont said:

The updated version looks great, I love the staff.

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amazing!! i wanted a unique orc warlock model, and that is awesome!! great work!

Looks quite unoriginal since i saw this ...

If this model is to be considered unoriginal because of that one, then I'd say that The Thrall model is unoriginal since there are already a Far Seer model, or Grom is unoriginal since there are already a blademaster.

Even though there are similarities, this model is still pretty far from that one, and I'd use it over that one anytime.

If he got inspiration from there or not, I don't care. What I care about is that this is a good model.

Omg.... That's fawkin' awesome 5\5.

Needs an icon to go with this awesome model. Sure, it's edited from the Gul'dan/Drak'thul model but it's still freaking awesome looking. Vote for approval!

Hmm... if you ask me, kinda looks more to be an undead than to be an orc... Meh,Who cares? Rating it 5, +REP

Wow thank you guys anyway ! your are the reason why i create models. Thank to all of you!

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Now this is a good undead.. Haven't seen many good skeletons for a while now. Definitely worthy of a download. 5/5 Highly Recommended

hmmm it can used like a blood shaman or Necromancer

Good model!

Good for my collection.

Hmm i think a green wersion would be quite nice.

Looks great but remove the ghoul from the staff.It will be better 5/5

I think its brilliant,awesome necrolyte/necromancer

dose this model have an icon?5/5 I love it

The staff's head looks kind of weird, too transparent and too pinkish. An actual skeleton would have been better, methinks.
4.5/5.

Sweet model.