Time to review this map. :3
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Review:
Terrain:
Some kind of a lobby texture image could have been used, but not important.
Comedy:
The cinematic is fairly funny, it's very classic and fits the warcraft chats perfectly. Although some jokes have been overused, the 2 song transitions for example, but the different characters keep their attitude throughout the cinematic, they're all unique and funny. You've brought a lot of different characters together, which lead to a massive troll-fest.
Quality/Polishing:
You have all of the messages correctly colored, no mistakes. Although sudden ending, at least show the credits. (songs used, map creator, ...)
Overall:
It's a nice idea, you've executed it well, not extremely well, but some of the issues can be fixed, for example add the lobby texture image as a background and add a credits ending. The cinematic would've been more hilarious if it had continued a little bit more, but the length was fine.
Rating: 3/5
Why:
*Sudden ending (-1)
*Some overused jokes (-0.5)
*A bit short (-0.5)
If you don't want to read my feedback:
- Add a credits ending (songs used, map creator, help from other users, ...)
- Extend the cinematic a little
- More jokes at one time
Keep up the good work.
Other:
I've also made a new description for your map:
My Day In A Lobby
A Map by Assassins-Creed (MetaDeath)
About:
The cinematic represents a 'normal' conversation in a warcraft 3 lobby.
Other:
Length - 7-9 Minutes
*No Terrain/Camera Movement - It's a lobby conversation
Credits:
- superthundrag@USEast for allowing me to make him a character
- Chris-Yamaha@USEast for allowing me to make him a character
- BiGtOiLeT@USEast for allowing me to make him a character
Songs
- Avenged Sevenfold for their awesome song Bat Country
- Other sounds/music (Peace and Exorcism is from an unknown source)
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How to use it:
PHP:
[CENTER][table][CENTER][COLOR="RoyalBlue"][B][SIZE="5"]My Day In A Lobby[/SIZE][/B][/COLOR]
[I][SIZE="2"]A Map by Assassins-Creed (MetaDeath)[/SIZE][/I]
[B][U]About:[/U][/B]
The cinematic represents a 'normal' conversation in a warcraft 3 lobby.
[B][U]Other:[/U][/B]
[COLOR="MediumTurquoise"]Length[/COLOR] - [I]7-9 Minutes[/I]
[COLOR="Red"]*No Terrain/Camera Movement[/COLOR] - It's a lobby conversation
[B][U]Credits:[/U][/B]
[LIST][*]superthundrag@USEast for allowing me to make him a character
[*]Chris-Yamaha@USEast for allowing me to make him a character
[*]BiGtOiLeT@USEast for allowing me to make him a character
[/LIST]
[I]Songs[/I]
[LIST]
[*]Avenged Sevenfold for their awesome song Bat Country
[*]Other sounds/music (Peace and Exorcism is from an unknown source)
[/LIST]
[/CENTER][/table][/CENTER]