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Melody of Sorrow

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Drama about female elf who ran after her husband.
Try so hard to protect his life and his soul in the war he been called to...

First part is about the beginning of this war..

MY SECOND TRY AT CINEMATIC..!!!
COMMENT PLEASE..!!!
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Melody of Sorrow (Map)

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VGsatomi: Approved. Pretty good for a second try at cinimatics. Terrain could be worked on in some areas, particularly the indoor areas, and the fates of the husband/wife seemed a bit...well...anti-climatic.

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VGsatomi: Approved. Pretty good for a second try at cinimatics. Terrain could be worked on in some areas, particularly the indoor areas, and the fates of the husband/wife seemed a bit...well...anti-climatic.
 
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OK, dracemia i see you have improved this cutscene só i'll have to give it another try but click on update on your last cinematic instead of uploading another one. and could you comment my cutscene if i comment yours?
 
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OK, i watched through it and i must say you still got huge terrain problems, i mean look at when the ice creature goes through the gate and the gate is so small and still the ice creature goes right through it.
 
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Recommendation: Approval
Rationale: Even though it claims it is a beta, it is of excellent high end quality (one that would rank high in a contest) and it performs better at "beta" than many cinematics do at full.
Pros:
[x] Interesting plot.
[x] Runs.
[x] AWESOME cinematic skills! You said this was your second time?
[x] Very nice skill overall
[x] Excellent songs! Fit the mood perfectly!
Con:
[x] No victory condition: You have to alt+F4 out.
[x] Cinematic can be a little unrealistic in some parts (how did he get under that gate?! Also, the lifedrain comes on before the portal?)
[x] This map is HUGE! How did you use that much space on a map when the cinematic is so short?
 
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Using the chinese?(Japans,Korean launguage?LOL)
makes the cinematic kinda sad,i can say in one moment it touched my feeling -_-
but you do need do work on your terrainning other is 4/5(it coud have been better but you give what you have) gj
 
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