14:35, 22nd Jun 2008
Septimus:

Good Point

[+]

Bad Point

[-] There is a lot of spelling error, I do not mind grammar error. But, spelling error ? For example, you written none as noone and which as witch
[-] Camera position and the camera moving is rather odd
[-] When those cinematic character speaking, the only unit I can see is grant character. The rest is blank when they are talking.

Overall - 2/5
Rejected

Additional add on : This map does not had victory condition after the cinematic end and it remain at cinematic mode. I decided to reject it instead of approve it cause this is consider as major bug.

I didnt see the point of this cinematic but i saw the hard work on it. Maybe you should think of a new more original idea. I mean this series... The detective comes watches..then he dies... another detective comes.. and i all ends. No sense. And be carefull with the typing..

your dots are comma's work on it... and work on your storyline and not actually a scary series but... i see hard work and i like that... by the way... its too short