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Magical Lakupiippu

This bundle is marked as useful / simple. Simplicity is bliss, low effort and/or may contain minor bugs.
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A Magical version of the Finnish liquorice candy pipe.
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Define it more as a pipe please, give it unique artistical look. Currently is substandart or even restricted icon quality.
The Panda
The pink stuff needs to be defined, not sure if there bubbles coming off of it or it should be smoke coming out of the pipe, im confused. Please define the whole icon itself so its presentable.
San
San
Nice idea, however bubbles on the pipe looks unnaturally small and solid compared to the bigger, blurry floating ones, they need a better shading and refinement to fit together. The sfx could also use more effort on their thickness and color. Set to...
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It is still quite blurry. You could try to outline each of those bubbles in order to make them sharper, using just a bit darker tone than the color you used as shadows between bubbles. The pipe got some shape problems where lighter grey connects with bottom part of pipe, colored in dark grey, the right side of upper part of pipe (where highlights are) blends with blue outline.

Also your icons are in .tga format, they should be in .blp.
 

San

San

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Nice idea, however bubbles on the pipe looks unnaturally small and solid compared to the bigger, blurry floating ones, they need a better shading and refinement to fit together. The sfx could also use more effort on their thickness and color.
Set to substandard but feel free to update if you have the time.
 
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