Arch Angel Seraphim

Moderator · May 28, 2008

10:37, 31st May 2008
HappyTauren: Some animations show her walking, and some show her floating. So, it could use few touchups, and maybe get wings animated, but, other than that, it is very nicely edited model.

LiOneSS · May 28, 2008

*_* wonderful model and great name ^__________^

Grievous1 · May 28, 2008

looks great nice angel warrior model with funny wing shoes good work 5/5

kuanish · May 28, 2008

great model. :thumbs_up:

Mamma_Pappa · May 28, 2008

Very good!
+rep

Amigurumi · May 28, 2008

Nice model, but the wings on the big shoes look a little bit odd

But good job :thumbs_up:

4.5/5

Devine · May 28, 2008

nice work... the lionface on the boots look bad ... to stretched
anyway
4/5

arthasdeath · May 28, 2008

why are u always quarriling with lioness XD?

General Frank · May 28, 2008

arthasdeath said:
why are u always quarriling with lioness XD?

Always ? I must admit she's can be a nice girl, but wha do you think I have always something to do with her ? It's the first time, I name something like her.

Karouk · May 28, 2008

Really nice model to go with your other angel. Though... the face... I just don't like it, she looks all... Shocked in horror... 4/5

plaid_man · May 28, 2008

wicked...i love it it is so sick i will use in my map when i resume it!

XS-Archangel · May 28, 2008

wonderful and unique and recognizable style of GF :wink:

Holy race on it's way :grin:

Kuhneghetz · May 28, 2008

Awesome!
Though I have critiques on the portrait model.
In talk animation, her chin makes an odd elastic movement and the lips moves like if she is going to give you hundreds of smooches.

General Frank · May 28, 2008

Dan van Ohllus said:
Awesome!
Though I have critiques on the portrait model.
In talk animation, her chin makes an odd elastic movement and the lips moves like if she is going to give you hundreds of smooches.

Oh, really ? I haven't noticed that flaw in portrait model. I will indeed, update it as soon as possible.

emperor_d3st · May 28, 2008

Nice one. I see some influence from the game 'Sacred'

I think the boots look okay ingame.

Malvodion · May 28, 2008

She looks like the Sacred's Seraphim

WolfmanArc · May 29, 2008

Looking good General.... nice model.

General Frank · May 29, 2008

Malvodion said:
She looks like the Sacred's Seraphim

Yeah, indeed I was my intention.

Just_Spectating · May 29, 2008

why is this unapproved?

A.R. · May 29, 2008

Awesome things:
- I really love the shine on the sword, looks great.
- Sacred <3
- nice use of textures, models. looks badass all round.

Things that need improvement:
- proportions are a bit blocky and her chest/shoulders are too broad (as I've outlined in the paintover)
- portrait anims need work, as has been mentioned. If you look at it from the side during the talk anim... its not pretty.

also, try the parts that use white.blp as teamcolour, just a suggestion

TheDivineBoss · May 29, 2008

What next? A brad.dude03 Tauren Kodorider?

And why does she got four wings?

shaun · May 29, 2008

her boobs are to small

General Frank · May 29, 2008

TheDivineBoss said:
What next? A brad.dude03 Tauren Kodorider?

And why does she got four wings?

No, a divineboss flame tank

lightning might · May 29, 2008

her wing could be bigger,otherwise great model 4/5

K0Rn3 · May 29, 2008

Looks very nice, but the Swords is a bit small.

General Frank · May 29, 2008

K0Rn3 said:
Looks very nice, but the Swords is a bit small.

It's longer ingame.

arthasdeath · May 29, 2008

i saw u quarrilied with her in chat once remember? who is she anyway ur girlfriend? :razz:

General Frank · May 29, 2008

arthasdeath said:
i saw u quarrilied with her in chat once remember? who is she anyway ur girlfriend?

Quarrilied ? What the hell is that ? What ever it'S used to be, she not my girlfriend. And dude, work on your language, it's gross, and stop to spam okay ?

Just_Spectating · May 30, 2008

^ Lol..

What skin did you use?

General Frank · May 30, 2008

Just_Spectating said:
^ Lol..

What skin did you use?

Look it up youself. Just click 'Click here to display advanced details.'

Just_Spectating · May 30, 2008

oh i c, didnt know that was ther.

TheDivineBoss · May 30, 2008

General Frank said:
No, a divineboss flame tank

Yay, can't wait!

^{/sarcasm, sproing.}

Blackscar · May 30, 2008

Why is this model stil in pending status?
Edit
-Never mind

arthasdeath · May 30, 2008

General Frank said:
Quarrilied ? What the hell is that ? What ever it'S used to be, she not my girlfriend. And dude, work on your language, it's gross, and stop to spam okay ?

i think its u who has to get better english general. quarriling is to "fight with words". i learned that in 4th grade and im norwegian-.- also i just replied ur reply so dont call it spam

General Frank · May 30, 2008

arthasdeath said:
i think its u who has to get better english general. quarriling is to "fight with words". i learned that in 4th grade and im norwegian-.- also i just replied ur reply so dont call it spam

I don't know this word, honest. Sorry, if my comment about your language was bad, but I really don't like to see rather intelligent people use bad improper language.

TheDivineBoss · May 30, 2008

arthasdeath said:
i think its u who has to get better english general Frank. quarriling is to "fight with words". i learned that in 4th grade and im norwegian-.- also i just replied ur reply so dont call it spam.

Sir.

Somebody get Google Translate, quick!

A.R. · May 31, 2008

He means quarrelling. It means arguing

Xendarc · May 31, 2008

ok... first of all
Stop arguing!
second
It's a very nice model but I have one problem with it.
this is just personal liking
the sholders and chest are to manly, they stick out and are to thick (and yes... im aware that she has massive pauldrons but she still has sholders under them)
just constructive crit. so dont slog me for it.

Velmarshal · May 31, 2008

Do a Gladiator, with Dalamar's set, next. And what does the Seraphim mean?

HappyTauren · May 31, 2008

http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&...:en-US:official&hs=yXQ&q=seraphim&btnG=Search

Velmarshal · May 31, 2008

HappyTauren said:
http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&...:en-US:official&hs=yXQ&q=seraphim&btnG=Search

Oh, Thanks.

HiTch · May 31, 2008

Why not try to make her armor thinner. Making her a "bit" sexy i pressume.

Csicska · May 31, 2008

@Arthasdeath

The General has still far better english than you... and anyway, first get a girlfriend for yourself, and just then start thinking about others'. Lol.

By the way I wanted to mention, that this is a very nice model. Reminds me of Sacred too

(And yeah, her boobs are too small for a blond-superhuman-angel-lady-stuff model. Really. =P )

TheDivineBoss · May 31, 2008

Now that you mentioned it..

GF, try a cup C-D, not a B, please.

General Frank · May 31, 2008

TheDivineBoss said:
Now that you mentioned it..

GF, try a cup C-D, not a B, please.

C is one hand full. D look pleased but is too much.

Duckyquack · Jun 1, 2008

Cool, immense. Just HAVE to use in my new map. 100/10!
:infl_thumbs_up:

punwisp · Jun 2, 2008

great model! just needs a longer sword!

DroZzhat · Jun 2, 2008

Huh. It's well put together, as in... I can't detect any flaws, or anything technically wrong with it. But I have to say the model just looks strange all around... Weird legs, what's she wearing anyways? Also, I mean even take it from just the picture uploaded here, she looks like she's straddling something... Maybe a skirt might help with that problem. Either that, or I'm insane. I'm guessing it's just a result of the animation set..?

All well. I love almost all of your stuff, General Frank. I'm sure this is a great model too, but this isn't doing anything for me.

Oh and, is it me, or is her face a bit tall/long? Or was that intentional?

4/5

[edit]

Gah, typo...

TheDivineBoss · Jun 2, 2008

Unlike other modelers, GF puts head A on body B with C-legs and B-arms and then reskins it.

Nudge nudge.

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