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Lasmini's REVENGE BETA2

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Lasmini, a famous battle maiden at the golden age of Pajajaran Kingdom reappears after 2 years from the day she was gone.

After learning on Mount Lawu she becomes greater, stronger, and more beautiful(?) than before.

The sword of justice at her left hand; the sword of revenge at her right hand. Will Lasmini be strong enough to defeat her nemesis?
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This is single player; keyboard controlled; action RPG.

The event took place on ancient Javanese Civilization.

You don't need mouse to play this game.

This is a BETA version, so there are currently 3 stages.
(the (k)th stage is longer than (k-1)th stage)

Models credit to THW:
- General Frank (Lasmini + Others)
- WILLTHEALMIGHTY (Special Effects)

Misc Modeller:
- JetFangInferno
- Dionesiist
- Pyramidhe@d

Screen Shots:




Keywords:
Lasmini, RPG, keyboard, Third Person, 3rd Person, action, single player, blood, fantasy, combo, quest, woman, boobies, lady, girl, female, Indonesia,
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Lasmini's REVENGE BETA2 (Map)

Reviews
13:02, 28th Feb 2010 ap0calypse: Approved
Level 4
Joined
Jul 24, 2009
Messages
1,842
Not bad. Almost feels like a standalone game, but misses a lot of things.
-Movement system feels like shredded. Leftrightuprightupleft, you press a couple more and everything can go to hell.
-Imbalanced - Not very much, but some fights and trials are rather difficult. On the road after the first boss, I died 2 times. Add more health orbs.
-Immature humor. PLEASE. "Hey, there's a beautiful chick, let's rob her and **** her!" or "Shut up you *****!" I don't think those words even existed in that time.
Overall, the combo system is enjoyable, there is lots of combinations. You didn't credit all the music, but who cares? If you fix this in the full version, I'll gladly give it 5/5. Now 3/5 and vote for Approval. Knowing your skills, KingB00ker, you can do LOADS better.
 
Level 10
Joined
Oct 5, 2007
Messages
103
Not bad. Almost feels like a standalone game, but misses a lot of things.
-Movement system feels like shredded. Leftrightuprightupleft, you press a couple more and everything can go to hell.
-Imbalanced - Not very much, but some fights and trials are rather difficult. On the road after the first boss, I died 2 times. Add more health orbs.
-Immature humor. PLEASE. "Hey, there's a beautiful chick, let's rob her and **** her!" or "Shut up you *****!" I don't think those words even existed in that time.
Overall, the combo system is enjoyable, there is lots of combinations. You didn't credit all the music, but who cares? If you fix this in the full version, I'll gladly give it 5/5. Now 3/5 and vote for Approval. Knowing your skills, KingB00ker, you can do LOADS better.

Thank you for you comment and criticism :p.

Actually I make this map in my language and the "F" word in my language is not that taboo :p. (I do not find any better replacement)

Oh, and DON'T USE WHOSYOURDADDY. It will cause error when fighting bosses, haha.

BTW which musics are not credited by me?
I have credited all of them in the game :p
Oh for the music when you meet "Nyai" Nirmala, it is uncredited because it will become the boss theme when you meet her again.
 
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Level 15
Joined
Apr 5, 2009
Messages
969
PROS and CONS

PROS: unique design, solid action game, good camera angle, and intense combos.

CONS: weird dialogue, game can get laggy, and game is too difficult that most newbie players could find it frustrating.

Score: 5/5
"Beautifully created hack-and-slash for the Warcraft 3" - myself
 
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Level 16
Joined
Nov 30, 2009
Messages
2,073
Okay. Tested it until the way to the Village near the Mount Merapi. Some dialogues were, well, strange. Also, f*ck should be substituted with r*pe. Bandits never f*ck for no reason. But they do r*pe. Move system also rigged a little. However, this worth approval and a 4/5 now.

Reach 5/5 by:
Reducing awkwardness of dialogue
Give an option to turn off locked camera.
Give hints on how to defeat boss (Not an exact hint. A riddle can be nice)
Change preview pic (The text was horrible)

This would make this map got 5/5 for sure. But, for now, 4/5, Approval and a +Rep.
 

deepstrasz

Map Reviewer
Level 69
Joined
Jun 4, 2009
Messages
18,799
Some sentences are in another language.
The story is pretty much absent but the gameplay makes up for it.
Waypoint system could work to not wait too much on saving and loading on later game phases due to increasing time.
You can only use one red explosive orb even if you gather more.
Some transmissions run too fast.
 
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