1. I suggest some custom skins/models for some units like the Mad Scientist. RGB recolours look bad.
2. To be able to play this map with less players, you could use the triggers from this map so that enemy players won't spawn near you: Skeletal Coast v1.3
   
3. The map is utterly flat and many parts of it only have one tile (=no variation).
4. I think you should find a proper FX for the toxic gas because it's not that visible.
5. I'm not sure about the balance. There are some weird things like the Amulet of Recall which is permanent and the book of spells which could be too effective and everyone would use these in every game. Well, at least the amulet is not permanent. That's good.
   
6. Scorching Rays is Chain Lightning.
7. Hurl Boulder from the book would create issues in that it's a stun spell and stops channeling abilities like Earthquake, Starfall etc. Same, Cyclone which requires more mana so it won't be used as much.
   
8. The Nuke doesn't say what AoE it has.
9. The Portal doesn't have an expiration timer. You can add one via triggers. Unit-Make Unit Expire.
10. Not sure how helpful the Defense System is when it's pretty far from your base.
11. Final Experiment also has Chain Lightning and its Magic Shell has no tooltip.
12. The items from the middle along with the reborn experiment kind of seal the fate of the other players who didn't get there first.

It's a really nice concept. Soft altered melee though.
Work on balance has to be done.

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deepstrasz said:

1. I suggest some custom skins/models for some units like the Mad Scientist. RGB recolours look bad.
2. To be able to play this map with less players, you could use the triggers from this map so that enemy players won't spawn near you: Skeletal Coast v1.3
   
3. The map is utterly flat and many parts of it only have one tile (=no variation).
4. I think you should find a proper FX for the toxic gas because it's not that visible.
5. I'm not sure about the balance. There are some weird things like the Amulet of Recall which is permanent and the book of spells which could be too effective and everyone would use these in every game. Well, at least the amulet is not permanent. That's good.
   
6. Scorching Rays is Chain Lightning.
7. Hurl Boulder from the book would create issues in that it's a stun spell and stops channeling abilities like Earthquake, Starfall etc. Same, Cyclone which requires more mana so it won't be used as much.
   
8. The Nuke doesn't say what AoE it has.
9. The Portal doesn't have an expiration timer. You can add one via triggers. Unit-Make Unit Expire.
10. Not sure how helpful the Defense System is when it's pretty far from your base.
11. Final Experiment also has Chain Lightning and its Magic Shell has no tooltip.
12. The items from the middle along with the reborn experiment kind of seal the fate of the other players who didn't get there first.

It's a really nice concept. Soft altered melee though.
Work on balance has to be done.

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Thank you for the feedback. Balance is something I was especially worried about. I thought some camps might be too hard. I'm glad it didn't show up in your review.

1. I agree, I tried to do as much as possible without including any custom skin/models so that it would still work in Reforged without clashing in style. Perhaps I should change them.
2. That's very interesting, I'll have to look into that.
3. Every starting areas are elevated, the rest is flat (no terrain deformation). Maybe I should do something with other bases (lower them or make them higher). For the tileset I was under the impression it was pretty diverse, I had a particular reason as to why I wanted the corridor to be uniform in its tileset. I'll look into it.
4. It's true that weather effect for the toxic gas is not always very visible. Maybe I can do something about it. Another thing I'll look into.
5. Item balance is another thing I was worried about, I was thinking about increasing the cooldown of the Portal Gem. I don't understand your point, "Amulet of Recall which is permanent" and then "Well, at least the amulet is not permanent". Did you mean the Portal Gem in your first quote? As for the book of spells, I wasn't aware that giving abilities with CC in them (cyclone or hurl boulder) would be such a problem, I'll have to change that.
6. Forked lightning actually. Is it a problem?
7. As said in 5, I agree I need to change that. I will switch hurl boulder and cyclone for custom made earth type / wind type elemental spells.
8. You mean instead of a "build structure" type of spell, it would work better if it was an AoE type spell like Blizzard/Healing Spray/Inferno? I absolutely agree, good point.
9. This is odd, the portal has an expiration timer and it does disappear eventually. Did yours stay up permanently? If so it might be a bug I need to look into.
10. I wasn't sure either, I included them as a way to give vision on the main entry points of the quadrants and serve as stalling. Perhaps the time they're active is not very generous. Perhaps I need to make them more useful in some capacity.
11. Chain lightning was so it could deal against air units in some capacity (it only targets air). The magic shell needs tooltip, that's clearly an error on my part.
12. I was afraid the intelligence item might be a bit busted, I wasn't so sure about the agility and the strength item. As for the Final Experiment, it's not as strong on it's own as it is as a boss (because of all the support it gets from the 2 other units). I've been told while testing that it was pretty balanced for its food cost. I may be wrong here. I wanted the reward to be influential on the game, maybe even a game changer but I didn't want it to make it a clear victory. I'm absolutely open to any balance tip.

Thank you again for the review!

DanmakuUmineko said:

I thought some camps might be too hard. I'm glad it didn't show up in your review.

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well some are early on.

DanmakuUmineko said:

6. Forked lightning actually. Is it a problem?

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No, just not unique.

DanmakuUmineko said:

I don't understand your point, "Amulet of Recall which is permanent" and then "Well, at least the amulet is not permanent".

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An error. The amulet isn't but the other item is, the book.

DanmakuUmineko said:

You mean instead of a "build structure" type of spell, it would work better if it was an AoE type spell like Blizzard/Healing Spray/Inferno? I absolutely agree, good point.

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That's also an idea but the description does not mention so you don't have a mental image beforehand.

DanmakuUmineko said:

9. This is odd, the portal has an expiration timer and it does disappear eventually. Did yours stay up permanently? If so it might be a bug I need to look into.

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I mean it's not visible like for water elementals/summoned units.

DanmakuUmineko said:

I've been told while testing that it was pretty balanced for its food cost. I may be wrong here. I wanted the reward to be influential on the game, maybe even a game changer but I didn't want it to make it a clear victory. I'm absolutely open to any balance tip.

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You could make it temporary.