Shadow Fury said:

This map requires lots of polishing. The zombies spawn in such a massive number that some do not even move and just keep watching me. The ammo finishes too quickly; it's a matter of about a few shoots and I have to reload. Vending machines have a "high elven farm" model? This is a modern-themed map, such models should be prohibited for the sake of achieving as much modernity as possible.

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  The game description and loading screen has very poor grammar to the point it just doesn't make sense. I'm not sure if your a native English speaker or not, but consider taking the time to improve it.

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  The unit has a buff which says "tooltip missing". Either remove the buff, or provide some sort of buff title and description.

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  Your volume channels are way off. The music and sound effects are very quiet compared to the unit response sounds. End result is you either turn the game volume down so everything is hard to hear, or you go deaf putting up with the unit response sounds.

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  The warcraft 3 music doesn't fit the theme of the game. Either turn the music off and work on adding more ambience sounds or find some custom music. Try not to bump up the game file size too much though.

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  Add custom sounds for abilities like the reload and sprint, etc.

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  I think the reload should prevent the unit from attacking for 1-2 seconds or so. There should be some sort of short "cast time" added to it.

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  Also change the reload item to an ability. The hotkey for reload is NUMPAD 4. This isn't reachable from a Q, W, E, R standpoint. If it were an ability, you could assign it a F hotkey or something more convenient.

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  Limit the number of turetts you can build. 60 second cooldown, no limit? 6 players in the game? I'd imagine there would be 1000's of turets by the end of the game. Maybe 1 turret per player. When the spell is cast, the old turret is killed before the new one is made. You could sell an item which allows you to have 2 turrets or something.

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  Add more descriptive items. Guns could specify a list of their damage, range, ammo capacity, reload time, splash area, etc.

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  Remove the marines from computer players. There's no point having computer players in the middle. They just die straight away when they run out of ammo then litter the ground with a bunch of items.

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  Those shrubs don't match the style of the game. Find something else to decorate the outside area.

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  Adds lights to the house. Would be cool if the house area was lit up with a warm yellow light or something on each corner of the room.

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  Extend the non-playable bounds of the map. When you walk among the outside of the map, the terrain just "cuts off". Extend a non-walkable area around the boundary of the map.

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  The Grenade can kill yourself, turrets and allies.

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  The concept of having. Wave 1. Wave 2. Wave 3. Wave 4. Wave 5, Wave 6 .....sorry am I boring you? Its well..boring. All your doing is just adding an extra 1 or 2 units each wave. Unit types consist of. Villager. Villager with Hat (Policeman). Villager with Shield (Riot Cop). Each new unit just has some more HP, damage, and armor. Boring. The game progresses slowly. I only tested to wave 14 or something, but nothing exciting happened.
  
  I suggest you create more unique enemies. Start by making each enemy look vastly different to eachother and give him stats/abilities to suit his appearance. A ghoul could run fairly fast but has little HP. A villager is an all rounder. A brute could move moderately slow, have high HP and high damage. An abomination could explode when it dies and spawn little crawly insects that run after you. You could make a jumper zombie, which, well, pounces at you if it gets within 400 range. Add a boss wave every 7 waves? A single strong unit?

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  Make a target time for the game. It took me 15 minutes to reach wave 14 and I had only seen 3 different types of units. I fear this may be one of those game with 50 waves, which just take forever. People don't have time to spend 2 hours on a game for a Warcraft 3 minimap.

Radicool said:

This is an interesting game but need a little more work to live up to it's potential. I'm reviewing version 1.03.

Grammar

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  The game description and loading screen has very poor grammar to the point it just doesn't make sense. I'm not sure if your a native English speaker or not, but consider taking the time to improve it.

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  The unit has a buff which says "tooltip missing". Either remove the buff, or provide some sort of buff title and description.

Sound/Music

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  Your volume channels are way off. The music and sound effects are very quiet compared to the unit response sounds. End result is you either turn the game volume down so everything is hard to hear, or you go deaf putting up with the unit response sounds.

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  The warcraft 3 music doesn't fit the theme of the game. Either turn the music off and work on adding more ambience sounds or find some custom music. Try not to bump up the game file size too much though.

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  Add custom sounds for abilities like the reload and sprint, etc.

Gameplay

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  I think the reload should prevent the unit from attacking for 1-2 seconds or so. There should be some sort of short "cast time" added to it.

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  Also change the reload item to an ability. The hotkey for reload is NUMPAD 4. This isn't reachable from a Q, W, E, R standpoint. If it were an ability, you could assign it a F hotkey or something more convenient.

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  Limit the number of turetts you can build. 60 second cooldown, no limit? 6 players in the game? I'd imagine there would be 1000's of turets by the end of the game. Maybe 1 turret per player. When the spell is cast, the old turret is killed before the new one is made. You could sell an item which allows you to have 2 turrets or something.

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  Add more descriptive items. Guns could specify a list of their damage, range, ammo capacity, reload time, splash area, etc.

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  Remove the marines from computer players. There's no point having computer players in the middle. They just die straight away when they run out of ammo then litter the ground with a bunch of items.

Environment

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  Those shrubs don't match the style of the game. Find something else to decorate the outside area.

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  Adds lights to the house. Would be cool if the house area was lit up with a warm yellow light or something on each corner of the room.

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  Extend the non-playable bounds of the map. When you walk among the outside of the map, the terrain just "cuts off". Extend a non-walkable area around the boundary of the map.

Bugs

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  The Grenade can kill yourself, turrets and allies.

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Radicool said:

This new update has drastically changed everything in your map. I have no idea what your trying to do or achieve...Did you even test this before submitting it..?

You have no time at all to prepare before zombies comes, and thousand come right away. You've removed reload mechanics, shops, and everything...The units are weak as anything. Removal of the floodlights and metalic fences has spoiled the theme of the map...I have no idea what you are doing. It seems your just doing a poor job copying this map: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/maps-564/no-more-room-hell-1-7-a-249331/index2.html

I have to change my rating sorry...

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