VGsatomi: Approved. Standard RPG style map. Having selectable chapters is nice. Should disable the selecter guy when there's a chapter running and fix any bug issues with players dying.

Are u then one who firstly upload your maps in the Epic War? I mean this map.

yes its me, i upload all versions

and this is latest version, try it !

Update:
i am also the map designer

ermm... 2 more questions:

1) I think you are a chinese, is it true?
2) Can I help you in making the map, such as suggesting the stories of heroes.....

I'm glad if you agree. Please answer my question!

of cuz i need ur help, i totally have no idea and had to think of something from cartoons etc
i have no creativity

im chinese, haha, the way the dialog...XD


BTW, number 2 is not a question

After I post the second comment, I soon discovered you are a Chinese and a Malaysian too! I'm happy to greet you, just because you are a Malaysian, and I'm a Malaysian too! You are the first Malaysian I saw in this community. So, welcome here. I like to make cinematic and you can watch my two cinematic from http://www.hiveworkshop.com/resources_new/maps/?user=138539
I have comments on your map. Firstly, your must be careful of your minor grammar mistakes. For example: "I will help you take it.", and it should be "I will help you 'to' take it". Although you are good in English, but the minor mistakes are still very important. Secondly, there is a bug, after Rylai, Bloodmage's gf, shout "Help me, please, I trapped inside the cage!" then the cinematic mode is not being turned off, so the cinematic can't go on and I've to press Alt+F4 to exit Warcraft. I hope you can fixed it! Anyway, the story is funny, and I give you a 5/10 rate. Bring it on!

Sorry, the second comment is a bug right? I found the bug because my Line get kill ^_^.
So, that is not a bug! Sorry!

so its not a bug?
cuz i feel weird, as i tested everything
and lina is not even suppose to get kill, your spell damage are so high, and those bandits health are already set to RED
one spell kills all, and to support that, i added a even-more-powerfull-soulBooster 4u

and take note, many hidden items in dalaran, did u find them?

btw, now downloading ur map

-What is btw stand for?
-Ya, I found your hidden items.
-This is about the unit's head facing you talked about.If your are using GUI system, then ---->

Animation - Lock Unit Body Part
after that
Animation - Reset Unit Body Part

This is something like that. You can lock the unit's body part: head, chest to a specific unit. Then if you want their bodies part to become normal, just as above Animation-Reset Body Part.

-There is a bug. This bug occurs in the story of Kardel. After I
detonated the invisible bombs, then I returned to Sylvanas. So, she asked me to go to kill the Undead outside the city right, but there is no Undead unit except the abomination, but the abomination is invulnerable. And so the gate can't be destroyed due to its invulnerability. I found the place where the Harry Poter book hides. But just can't get out of the city. Please help me!

thanks for that lesson about body parts ^.^

what? the undeads must be shot dead from inside the city
its flying outside the city and the north-east above that mana fountain

u are not allowed to exit the city to kill them

sylvanas already said he dont wanna risk some more people going to kill undeads because there may be more bombs by undeads and they dont have enough range to kill the undeads and thats why u are wanted to kill them

BTW, btw=by the way

nice map idea with loads of bugs
I'm stuck @ gan_ws's problem, too
U do not have to bring the gargoyles down because the "lightning mage" kills them with his blizzard within seconds.
But the next step to learn assasinate is not properly doable. There is no way to leave Dalaran (The gates are locked).

The killing-lasers from Linas Quest are buggy, too. After a while, the lasers are floating anywhere trough the map because they arent disabled after u complete the "laser-room"

And i'm no fan of ur 1337 kiddie style u use in your dialogs. Complety kills any atmosphere that's in the map.
3/10 so far :/

okay.......
can u tell me what happened?
because i have tested and didnt have problems

1) there is a trigger to make sure lasers do NOT exit that room and i've tested it
2) the gargoyles are set to camp with aq.range 200 and that 'mage' is about 1k range away, i dont how that happened, and i tested it before and i completed it myself without problems, gargoyles are also in hold position state if not mistaken
3) the gates are meant to be lock because i want u to kill them from inside
4) pls explain more about assassinate bug as its actually 'auto done', because when u get into range and begin casting ulti on that ex-bf of lina's, it will auto go into cinematic and it will do it for u... i tested it myself but there may be rare problems, pls explain more about assassinate bug , i will check the killer-lasers that somehow escaped that arena

Well, my problem are completely same with kentuki's. You know, the mage Blizzard ability can be cast from about 1k range of nearer, but the mage isn't a puppet, he'll walk to the edge of the cliff and starting to cast the Blizzard. And all the problems of kentuki are asame with me, so I need no to say again.

ok i'll do a check cuz the trigger for that part to complete is to check if the gargoyles are DeAD or not, if they ARE dead (no matter who kills), the story will continue as long as u get near sylvanas

NEW VERSION : MAJOR BUGS FIXED (i think)

now map is v0.5 (has changelog press F9)
i have fixed many stuff, this version is only many fixes & improvements, NO new heros

- fixed rylai rescue stuck quest ( i think, if still got prob pls tell)
- fixed sniper quests that cant let u out of city (doors locked)
Note : Sniper is completed , u can finish the whole sniper story
- fixed lasers running around the map after LagunaBlade quest
- for other changes press F9 when in-game

u frm malaysia which part? me oso.. support my map oso leh.. i cant imagine still can find such a great mapper frm malaysia at here hehe..

yes im from malaysia, i seldom enter this page, so pls add my msn [email protected] or enter my site www.scyap.invisionplus.net

is it kinda RPG style map like the mod said?

off topic: I just found 2 Malaysian here! because Im Malaysian too..

oh,you have a problem with ressurection,sorry for my english,i'm indonesian.
i can solve that!you need a trigger:
EVENT:Unit-a unit owned by player (number) dies
CONDITION(triggering unit)is a hero) Equal to true
ACTIONS:Wait (number) seconds
Special effect-Create a special effect at (position of(triggering unit))using (effect)
Hero-Instantly revive (dying unit) at (position of(triggering unit)),(H or S)revival graphics

Are you still updating this map? if you didn't, can i continue your history of dota map?

Well, I can still control Balanar even if it says otherwise.
Not sure how really fit to the heroes' themes are these stories...
Makes little sense for a knight to tell you about a mage instead of Jaina.
If you destroy the magic wall surrounding Rylai, the cinematic doesn't continue after she says the thing about being trapped in a cage.