Well this isn't place for asking help use
Map Development forum for that! You can make thread there upload your map so people can tell you what they think just like here! Also for any help with triggers or how to clean memory leaks post triggers and create threads here
Triggers & Scripts! Btw if you need any help with WE we have
World Editor Help Zone here on THW! And at the end if you need any resource from icons to loading screens check this out
Requests!