Hero Cyberslayer

Moderator · Jul 1, 2009

21:58, 2nd Jul 2009
Pyritie: Fix the normals on the stuff on his back and on his weapon and stuff. The bottom of the cube thingy could use a better texture.

His anims are kinda sloppy. Almost all of them have his feet sliding around or have him going into the ground. The death anim is too slow, the two attack anims are the same, spell ready just looks weird, and spell two isn't even a valid animation tag.

BlinkBoy: well Spell Two is actually a valid tag (look at Art Tools documentation). I think the model needs some reanimating, many parts go through the body and attacks are repetitive. I suggest you to edit attacks with MdlVis, Warshape, Oinker's NoteTrack or WarForger (Warshape and WarForger are found in the modeling & animation forum). That's all, nice work until now. (Rejected until Update).

BlinkBoy: Nice improvements, Approved.

anarchianbedlam · Jul 1, 2009

ya, thats the problem when you use blizzard animations. his weird lil energy sword is impaling his skull at the end of all 3 attack animations. and his stand ready animations makes it look like he is floating, his feet go slightly below and above the ground. feet sink into the ground at the stand 2 animation.

ALSO, you need more teamcolor. The teamcolor blade is cool and all, but if you only have it show up when it attacks, then... how can you tell whose unit is whose unless they are fighting?

otherwise seems like a good model

Direfury · Jul 1, 2009

Yeah, I forgot to add that one tag in there.

For all who read this, I'd like to avoid seeing off-topic comments, which seem to always be caused thanks to those few members I highly disagree with, i'd like to ask these members -You know who you are- to simply observe/download, and keep their posts to themselves.

anarchianbedlam · Jul 1, 2009

Also, i dont remember goblins and night elves teaming up... but , i guess that makes it unique

:Ya, all you people apparently know who you are... not like we can stop you, since this is a free country..... but uh..... whatever revellion said:

Direfury · Jul 1, 2009

That includes you, now quit.

anarchianbedlam · Jul 1, 2009

? what includes me? what am i quitting? i don't remember playing anything :/

well this stinks, you said no off topic comments, and here you are, talking about some game ive never played

Rizz_Boomer · Jul 1, 2009

come on... you can do better.
you already showed us.

Suggestions:
since i dont think laser swords
are that a good choice, why dont
you let the weapon snap together while
he isnt using it? like both blades pointing
upwards and only get that Bat-like positions
in attack and stand ready animations?

Glasses:
try to use the lights on the shoulders of the
shredder (irongolem.blp) he would have green
glasses wich looks kinda more cyber than these.

Backpack:
i'll tell you once:
Gunpowder Barrel is NOT Cyber!
use the tinkers stuff for example.
or the grey box from the shredder.

Direfury · Jul 1, 2009

I don't specialize in Goblins, mostly Orcs & Humans, but i'll get to it.

draken koning · Jul 1, 2009

this idea is ftw cool

Anachron · Jul 2, 2009

This is pretty cool. I like it. But it looks to plump somehow.

Titanhex · Jul 2, 2009

The only difference between attack 1 and 2 is that he adds some extra arm in 2. Perhaps remove one or add another. Maybe even differentiate with particle emitters on the weapon. As is that's just another anim taking up space from what I can see.

Perhaps change Spell Two to Spell Throw. Seems like it'd make more sense.

You know the only thing that's been bugging me as that you never have any portraits, just cameras. Perhaps you should hone your skills in lip and facial movement.

Otherwise it's a great Revellion styled anim that's sure to be approved.

chr2 · Jul 5, 2009

Nice! This is hilarious! Really great model!

Potluck · Jul 6, 2009

cute little guy aint he? nice model keep up the good work

expazatrix · Jul 7, 2009

Nice Model & Animations.
Keep up the good work!

ondrej.kolin · Jul 7, 2009

big problem with team color

expazatrix · Jul 7, 2009

Yes I noticed the team color was a bit demented and needs a quick fix up, because several colors look wierd.
Also the wooden poles coming out of his back, one is going through the shield.

Midnighters · Jul 7, 2009

T-Revellion-T said:
That includes you, now quit.

Hey bud? You ever heard of freedom of speech? That includes the internet too. You can't keep us from posting on this topic, so you need to quit

Direfury · Jul 7, 2009

My model, my decision, don't push your luck with me.

expazatrix · Jul 8, 2009

Its a really good model with good animations.
Just needs to be looked at properly and problems getting fixed.

Reap of Creep · Jul 9, 2009

The assembly is very nice....

4.2/5

Recommended

NomarX · Jul 12, 2009

Hey, whatever they say I think this is a great model! fricken 5/5 here baby!

Mr. Bob · Jul 14, 2009

T-Revellion-T said:
Yeah, I forgot to add that one tag in there.

For all who read this, I'd like to avoid seeing off-topic comments, which seem to always be caused thanks to those few members I highly disagree with, i'd like to ask these members -You know who you are- to simply observe/download, and keep their posts to themselves.

T-Revellion-T said:
My model, my decision, don't push your luck with me.

As far as I can see, according to the site rules, you have no authority over the users right to post about your model. As long as it has something to do with the model, wether on or off-topic (considering as how wether something is "off-topic" or not is subjective).

Regardless of the fact that you made the thread, you really can only ask people not to post. They are well within their rights to post.

Your a user. Not an admin. Just because you apparently hold grudges, it doesn't give you authority over their posting.

If you are going to stir up drama because of silly and stupid dislikings, PM them. Don't take it out on us.

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Now, as for the model, it looks pretty solid. My only complaint is that there is a major technology clash. He has a barrel on his back, and two lightsabers in his hands. Maybe add a few more mechanical parts? Just my opinion.

Direfury · Jul 14, 2009

Well, Bob, some opinions don't deserve to be heard.

Mr. Bob · Jul 14, 2009

T-Revellion-T said:
Well, Bob, some opinions don't deserve to be heard.

Your points are subjective. Rules apply here.

You seem to be very hostile. Please, you are not improving the moral status of this community. While I have no authority over you, others and myself are at liberty to state our opinions wherever and whenever we would like. As long as they do not go passed the sites rules. As a request (I can not order you around as you do to others. To no point I might add.) I would ask that you improve your attitude. Your current attitude makes you seem rather grumpy and hostile, making you a pain to be around. Of course, this is merely a request. You are free to do as you will, given that it does not break the site's regulations.

Therefore, it is my opinion that our opinion is invalid and contrasting to the site's set rules.

If you would like this to go further, PM me. You have already threatened me in a PM.

Midnighters · Jul 14, 2009

T-Revellion-T said:
My model, my decision, don't push your luck with me.

Like you can do anything about it.

T-Revellion-T said:
Well, Bob, some opinions don't deserve to be heard.

I think you are being an inconsiderate jerk who has no idea what freedom is.

Direfury · Jul 15, 2009

Well I could always keep my models request-only. I'm hostile because I'm here to finish what I started, nothing more.

Mr. Bob · Jul 15, 2009

T-Revellion-T said:
Well I could always keep my models request-only. I'm hostile because I'm here to finish what I started, nothing more.

Hardly a reason to be grumpy.

As far as I'm concerned, no offense but I couldn't care less about what you release. I don't know about everybody else though.

Midnighters · Jul 15, 2009

T-Revellion-T said:
Well I could always keep my models request-only. I'm hostile because I'm here to finish what I started, nothing more.

Well, you don't have to be a complete dick when people criticize you.

Mr. Bob said:
Hardly a reason to be grumpy.

As far as I'm concerned, no offense but I couldn't care less about what you release. I don't know about everybody else though.

I agree with you 100%

Archangel_Tidusx · Mar 31, 2010

Ahhhh you were the creator for this! I made an icon for the model, if youd like it.

Direfury · Mar 31, 2010

Feel free to submit it.

Alfagar · Apr 3, 2010

It's awesome

cool_is_i · Apr 13, 2010

Using this model for hero contest #3
Needed an icon that I could edit into a spell

Icon:
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/icons-541/btncyberslayer-163867/

Spell:
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/icons-541/btndigitize-163869/

hope you dont mind, will remove it if you dissapprove.

Archangel_Tidusx · Apr 14, 2010

cool_is_i · Apr 19, 2010

yea i saw that, but i needed one that i could edit to have a second effect [ie my final]
so i needed the base file, with all the layers and the icon itself, + that icon is yours and i coudent mod it

Naz · Jan 20, 2011

Nice job man, real fan of gobs! Gona use it my map thanx :goblin_good_job:

Monkeyladboy · Apr 1, 2012

Even though this was made over a year ago; LOL, the covenant has infiltrated the goblins XD

Claud · Jun 18, 2012

One more cool model!! God

fgundam · Apr 1, 2018

AWESOME model can you add a hero glow version?

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