21:57, 13th Dec 2009
67chrome: The yellow bands around the armor should over-lap over one another to look more like they are framing plates of armor, right now the yellow looks like a fishnet of silly-putty covering the model. All of the texture could use more work, and the rock-like pattern on the legs looks more like the after effects of some filter that looked interesting than anything that really fits the theme of a futuristic robot. Everything could use more work. The entire skin is lacking in shading and highlights as well. The face looks - like it is not wrapping correctly, I would recommend working on it much more. Usually faces take a good 10 tries to get everything in the right place, the demon hunter has the type of wrap that makes said process more time consuming. I like the hair, but everything else needs some major work.
I'd strongly recommend checking out the 2D art tutorials as well, looking into how to do metal could help this skin at least look like a robot.

Hes more like, stone elemental that robotic...
i just dont see enough metal to this.

That really need shades and highlights, and it doesn't look like metal---- and really you need to rework face

Ohh on all the stone/metal things you freehanded you need much more shadings and highlights but i would rework them if i were you..

Doesn't look good... specialy that I hate the eyes on Deamon Hunter...

Why is he wielding a Carrot Glaive.

Bad. the face looks out of this world, the the skin lacks definition, shadows, highlights,and the hair is greatly suspicious to me. it looks like you just stole a skin and painted over it.

now.. i'm not trying to accuse anyone, but it simply does look.

not enough metal on him, face looks funny

Meh, everything is blobby, blurry and weird... study some of the tutorials over at Warcaft 3 campaigns or here at Hive workshop. Also, I lol'd when I saw the face! xD

The hair is the only thing that looks good, though I think it's CNP from someone else's skin.

this skin is... well really bad

1. i swear that hair is form another skin and it does NOT work with the skin at all!
2.yes... he does looke like stone
3.wtf is with the face? its basically a crying blob or... something
4.change the blades, too bright, too boring... its a carrot and therefore the skin is now carrot elemental
5.i understand im restating most of the things other people said, im just agreeing

EDIT: I also just noticed he has lazer crotch

His face looks funny and his body looks like a stone.

wtf?! oO ... his face looks like he get a giant stick in his ass! it means his face looks painful. please kill him and spare his life ( and our eyes ) from this torture.
ok... now please add shadings and highlights, make it more metal than rock or rename it.
this not good at all.

And here i got u stealing CnP-ing from THIS skin: OMG NOOB! lolol

knight26 said:

And here i got u stealing CnP-ing from THIS skin: OMG NOOB! lolol

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Eh, not really. Sure the hair looks similar (though almost anyone can do that trick on the hair), but the rest is way to different to be a CnP from someone else's skin.

And now for my comments on this skin.
- A lot of the skin has a huge lack of shading, highlights and contrast.
- The guy's face is screaming "KAWAII DESU", which looks awkward to your theme.
- You should be very careful and nitpicky when it comes to the face, because the wrap there is very assy and has a tend to fuck up textures when wrapped (epecially the eyes).
- For a futuristic robot, he looks more like he's made of stone than metal.
- What's with the weird yellow lines on the arms and torso?

Not to be mean, but I'll go with everyone else and say the face looks weird, I really don't understand the point of the red lines, and it looks like a rock.

the hair isnt CnP i compared them and they arent they have differences. before you go accusing look at them carefully.

real138 said:

the hair isnt CnP i compared them and they arent they have differences. before you go accusing look at them carefully.

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it could be still.. but it certainly isn't from that skin.
i could swear i saw that hair somewhere

Fix the face. it is HORRIBLY wrapped right now. You also need to add a lot more shading and detail because this piece is seriously lacking in it. The yellow lines are just so weird. get rid of them or make them look like they actually belong to the skin.

Dan van Ohllus said:

- For a futuristic robot, he looks more like he's made of stone than metal.

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yes. as DvO sais, it is like rock try adding maybe some metal plates, wires, to make it look a little more roboty and not: "YARRG imma stone golem with a Stretched face!!"

oh and BTW the hair is CnP with recolour http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/skins-552/robotdemonhunterz-61353/?prev=search=robot&d=list&r=20

~Dentothor

ok that one is CnP. and as everyone else said the face looks funny.