16:01, 30th Jun 2008
Rui: Approved. A pretty decent campaign with an original story inserted in the Warcraft lore.

this is confusing map... i mean it changes the whole stryline .... anyhow its not bad i wuld give it an 8/10 ! 1 thing i dont like is that illidan was not an elve he was nightelve... still you made it your own style and i like it i give u 8/10 becouse terrain in some maps wasnt so good

Approved.

Sorry Tuzec but I really didn't like it... The idea of having a main hero that is a small lizard was annoying, and it frequently used unnessasary cinematics. Your cinematic skills need work. However, I notice your grammer has improved by far, my faviourite of your maps was the Lord of the Rings one you made, but your grammer was bad in it. Now its very good! ^^

Its Good. Totally random,If a clone kills another clone is it murder or suicide?

A bit 'o both

I once said Ney,and they beheaded me.But thanks to the wonders of modern science,they were able to reatach my head... to the body of the other person that said it.
Now I have the head of a Troll and the body of a female night elf

To vexertrini, Clones killing clones isn't murder or suicide. It's nothing. Because you can always clone again to replace. And If it's armys killing armys of clones, then it's a statistic. This all depeneds on If their the same clones.

And their is a problem with level VII the "demon hunter". I noticed that at the ancestral alter, I can summon up an unlimited amount of deathwings. This makes it very easy to just have an army of him.

eerrmm....
does anybody knows where is the sequel of this campaign?
i can't find it(i'am a lousy searcher):-(

cool campaign 4/5

OK on map um... let me think 3 where you kill the moonstone iv killed everything on map but it quest log still says i havnt killed all hippogryph avengers, i used iseedeadpeople to see if i was missing a building and i even swept the entire map with venars to see if there was an invisible units, if anybody can help me or knows what im doing wrong please tell me so i dont have to retry entire map to see if it will work the second time

-thanks in advance Me_Godzilla

nice job, good modeling and AI, here are three suggestions to improve it:

1) work the balance and difficult level of some missions. Half of the missions are hard, but the rest is close to impossible. You might want to consider adding some allies and/or extra resources. Using chets does spoil some fun.

2) I love the Eclispse option on the ziggurat, but it'd be a GREAT idea to add and "auto-cast" option, so you can concentrate on fighting (i.e. fun) instead of camping (i.e., farming)

3) improve the terrain in a few missions, in particular consider the size of the units/armies so that they don't get horribly stuck in narrow corridors. The huge bugs-siege engines are nice, but they can't normally figure their way out of most terrain.

If you work on some little issues, this campaign well get perfect.
Again, godd job an 5/5 4 me!

are someone know where to find next story

What is a ,,magic word,, in chapter VI pls? i have all 3 scrolls but i don't know

It says what does Lamdal mean,not the word lamdal,the trolls told you before,I was wondering why we need to listen the conversation again,because of this....

This was really entertaining and a very well made campaign. If some bugs and mistakes were fixed, you would think Blizzard made this campaign. Great Job

Pros:
-Story Line
-Use of Warcraft Lore with your own twist
-Fairly Challenging
-Terrain and Landscape was very well made
-Units and Buildings were balanced and well made
-Use of Day/Night cycle had me on my toes at all times
-Cutscenes

Cons:
-Not the best dialogue
-Had many grammar and spelling mistakes
-Sunlight during cutscenes would kill my heroes lol
-Certain missions are alittle unfair (like first mission)
-Certain missions last WAY too long

and the nezt one? the warriors of the dawn?

Good map ^^ 4/5

please can u tell my what to do in chapter Vl i have the three magic scrolls but i dont know what to do

rex03 said:

please can u tell my what to do in chapter Vl i have the three magic scrolls but i dont know what to do

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White home is the password!

A chaotic and mostly difficult campaign with some interesting ideas.

-well, this could just have been an original story

chap1:
-how are they talking to each other from such a distance (dragons and lizards)
-dragons are also healed by the lizard building; actually only the dragons and Malkor; don't know why; it worked before the cinematic scene with the Ventars
-cinematic mode needs skip
-don't understand. Only Malkor is healed in the base? That's how it looks; sometimes the dragons too
-good luck with keeping your units alive until you find a Fountain of Health and wait for the sage to reach level 5 killing dragons and surrounding creatures
-there's a bug; fountains don't heal the lizards only the sage; other lizards are not considered normal units (eg: ancients, mechanical etc.)
-it's the first level; players should get accustomed not annoyed
-the "closest" mine is well guarded and there's no certainty that the player will gather enough gold until then to build a resource stocking building
-why do Brutal Lizards have mana? What for?
-why was the first Brutal Lizard neutral and the rest are hostile?

chap2:
-seems the loading screens are random
-units selected during cinematic mode
-the sage has other abilities than I previously chose; his items are different too
-if the scene with the ventar that flies nearby the elven village is skipped, the ventar remains near the village
-overall it's slow paced and very dependent on hypnotism
-what's the logic behind killing all the elves, especially when they are not in the way anymore?
-how do you kill the rest of the villagers if they run out of the map? Oh, they're invisible... well that makes the ventar quest very optional...
-too many cutscenes
-message from a Dryad: none; another one but I've heard "The hunt is on!" while seeing the "none" text
-since when do dryads work together with satyrs?
-everybody makes the lizard laugh

chap3:
-cinematic scene after cinematic scene; what about fusing them?
-they're talking to each other from one side of the map to another, again
-well, they're bases can be destroyed as their AI isn't working, I guess because I haven't built anything yet
-this level is better than the others in that you can also rely on something else than hypnotism
-three Codices of Frost? What to do with them? One or two (one for eeach hero) would have been enough
-a Snowy Owl belonging to the blue player and some three rats
-Ancestral Mages suddenly appears and the camera remain on them unless reset
-killing every unit belonging to the enemy to win...

chap4:
-Illidan!? What...
-mix of nelves and helves
-not Warcraft, have no idea why you bothered to "fit" the story there
-the witch doctor the lizard was talking too was died almost half-way during the conversation
-because units teleport to the cave, they might just appear on the cliffs with no way to get down...

chap5:
-some warden look-alike heroes have names ending with "II"
-The Pilgrims Way Gate quest can be finished without being discovered

chap6:
-Priestess of the Moon: none; two times
-buildings are too big for the used camera view; some of them occupy 1/3 of the screen
-I guess the dragon key should have been on the dragon king?
-Sylvanas Windrunner, eh?
-somehow the commander died during the scene where the king abandons
-so, they were trying to fend off the demons by having a demon gate in their city!?
-why would the dragons know how to summon demons and tell elves how to do it?
-killing every Lamdal unit does not go against the fact of chasing them through the green and brown bases...

chap7:
-Altar of Ancestrals can summon Deathwing...
-how do you earn gold?
-the Dark Moonstone does not have a cooldown/duration in its description; the item's icon does not hint at how much time before it can be used again still remains
-next time Larodar appears, he attacks alone
-well, the Light Sphere is quite unprotected; also for what it is named, it doesn't really look like light

chap8:
-Magtheridon level 9 and Magtheridon level 10
-"No way! We have to go back for some help." after the heroes returned to the region from the enemy base
-pretty much random and tiring

chap9:
-Darksun's Vampiric Aura only affects other (melee) troops not him too

Roughly 3/5.

This was one of the first campaigns (besides wanderers of sorceria and Mordock's question) which I've played, and it's still one of my favorites!

Good campaign, I really liked the mission where you have to retrieve the orb of dawn or whatever its called, overall a good campaign that looks at wc3 lore at a different angle

I use to spend hours playing this campaign, I wonder if it still works with wc3 version 1.31

Prince Aerrus said:

I use to spend hours playing this campaign, I wonder if it still works with wc3 version 1.31

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This campaign is like spending 95% of the time trying to win that mission where Illidan invades the high elf city, and the other 10% of time on all the other missions.

tulee said:

This campaign is like spending 95% of the time trying to win that mission where Illidan invades the high elf city, and the other 10% of time on all the other missions.

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I just remember playing the mission where you're supposed to take the orb of light from the city of light or something similar, to me the mission was fun, it was probably one of the 20 custom campaigns Ive ever played

tulee said:

This campaign is like spending 95% of the time trying to win that mission where Illidan invades the high elf city, and the other 10% of time on all the other missions.

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If that wasn't a joke, Illidan is not even present here from what I remember. This is about lizards.

deepstrasz said:

If that wasn't a joke, Illidan is not even present here from what I remember. This is about lizards.

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No, if I remember correctly Illidan is training to become some sort of Guardian of Light, he becomes disenchanted with it because he has to kills trolls in a ritual in order to become a guardian, so he sides with the ancient lizards and spearheads the attack on a sacred city which houses the orb of light, an artifact which causes the location where it's stored to always be mid-day

Prince Aerrus said:

No, if I remember correctly Illidan is training to become some sort of Guardian of Light, he becomes disenchanted with it because he has to kills trolls in a ritual in order to become a guardian, so he sides with the ancient lizards and spearheads the attack on a sacred city which houses the orb of light, an artifact which causes the location where it's stored to always be mid-day

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Heh, you're right, the character is there. I just went back to my review. For some reason, when I used search I couldn't find Illidan on the thread written by me.
My bad. Thanks for pointing it out.

just want to say good story work a bit on your techtree and that it deserve a part2 and beyond or a great remake more models skins map remakes +rep

with all the great classic campaigns getting remakes right now, if this one could get it that would make this remake renaissance complete lol. i can only hope.

corellius said:

with all the great classic campaigns getting remakes right now, if this one could get it that would make this remake renaissance complete lol. i can only hope.

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You could try the 2 player version until then: