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Forest of Clouds

Forest of Clouds

My first melee map for the Hive people and the normal visitors.I hope you will enjoy it.
This was actually going to be just a template but then i changed my mind:p
It's a 96x96 map with no camera bounds=(all map is playable) and supports a 2-4 players game from 1v1 to 2v2 and a FFA.

Contains:
-1 Fountain of Health
-1 Fountain of Mana
-2 Goblin Merchands
-2 Mercenary camps (ashenvale)
-11 Orange creep camps
-4 Green creep camps
-1 Red creep camps

Credits:
Just to me for making the map and to Blizzard for the world editor.


P.S.
I got some hard problems with the editor and right now i support the 1.07 version of roc editor only.....Big problem but i hope i will fix it soon.


---Theoden[KoMe]---

Keywords:
forest,clouds,Forest of Clouds,melee,theoden
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Forest of Clouds (Map)

Reviews
Orcnet08:43, 21th July 2013 Map Approved Forest of Clouds (No Version/s Stated) RateScorePercentLetter 5/591-100A RateScorePercentLetter 4/581-90%B RateScorePercentLetter 3/575-80%C RateScorePercentLetter 2/570-74%D...

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Review

Map Approved
Forest of Clouds (No Version/s Stated)


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5/591-100A

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4/581-90%B

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3/575-80%C

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Overview:

Gameplay

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"Total gameplay is fair and well executed, but the idea of really near creep camps to some player bases and expansion sites is a free fall, not a good idea if I might say."

Terrain

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"Terrain is sprouting good but somehow your height leveling needs more stable tone to it, such as your work with the waterfall and the spam use of bush on the west part of the map, do please adjust it more."

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"To my testings, map can be useful and approved."

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Level 30
Joined
Nov 29, 2012
Messages
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Forest of Clouds Review

Introduction

Played your melee and I must say, it has this good terrain for a melee though many coplications are spotted and most are major.


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[tab][tabheader]Good Points:[/tabheader]
  • Terrain looks good though empty at many points
  • Map has enough resources for a melee map
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[tab][tabheader]Bad Points:[/tabheader]
  • Map is not symmetric. Some player positions have bigger spaces and some small and also the player position at the lower right part, there are enemies there so when you build, they will attack your base. And so this includes also, player positioning looks decent though we have same problems in spaces.
  • There are too much creeps, one cannot kill at start a large grou of creeps. Remember, players mostly find to creep at early games so at least give them creeps that can be defeated easily at start. And again, we have come to the conclusion that creeps are not balanced also.
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[tab][tabheader]Suggestions:[/tabheader]
  • There is still room for improvements in the terrain. You could fill it up with some more decors.
  • Make the map symmetric and also fix the player position and the imbalance-ness at the spaces.
  • Fix the imbalance-ness also in the creeps. There are too much large groups of creeps to handle which in the start, players cannot defeat easily.
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Comment

Overall, this is a decent melee. It has a good terrain though major complications crushed it and I am very sorry but this is not Approvable at its state unless you fix the problems stated. Good luck and happy mapmaking :cgrin:

Rating: 2/5
Vote: Pending
 
Level 13
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The terrain is gr8 but description is poor, add some screenshots, use bb codes, add some color
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Rating:
-4/5
Stuff to fix:
-Description needs some work

Don't know how to add screenshots
First go to your user control panel or userCP, you can find this at the top right of the page, then find networking on your left, below that, find pictures and albums, and start uploading pictures, the code to put pictures on your description is
 
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