Map Description - Templates - pick a thing or two.
Also, using the basic w3 doodads does not fit the "realistic decorations" mentioned by you.

Should go in awaiting update status.

Author missing. Edit the map description in the editor.

A credits list is mandatory in the map thread description. Use this: Resources in Use by Floyd's time | HIVE to write one. Also credit any other resources (models, skins, music/sounds etc.) external to the editor.
The description should be more informative and better structured.

From what I can tell, this is a small map which carries a low weight. For works in progress use the map development forum: Map Development

Awaiting Update.


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The author is still null. You have to add your nickname/name in the campaign editor and map options.

1. Terrain is pretty much bare and flat. Read some terraining tutorials I provided in my first post.
2. During the cinematic scene units don't all attack together. Some stay behind and come later, others get back to their initial spot after their target has been eliminated.
3. Cameras are just bird's eye view during cinematic mode. Some place which are not supposed to be seen are visible.
   
4. Retreat=/=surrender. But they left them there, not take them prisoners?
5. No character development, no idea what's actually going on. Why did Floyd have to leave etc. The "story" is less than bare bones.
6. The second map should immediately start with cinematic mode. I selected Floyd beforehand.
7. The map has fog of war on.
8. Floyd has usual Warcraft III spells. Try some custom ones: Spells | HIVE
9. Joseph had stuff to do but why was he at the town entrance then?
10. Cameras should instantly start on the place they're supposed to show. If you're looking somewhere else on the map, the camera slowly pans towards the region Floyd triggered the cinematic scene on.
11. Duplicate Back to Home quests.
12. Floyd triggers the scene with the tax raise from too far and cannot be seen within the camera's borders.
13. You can't see the cursor to choose what to do when you get to the wizard because user control is still disabled.
14. Gameplay is somewhat linear.
15. Oldness' buff description isn't complete.
16. The demon quest isn't marked as completed after doing all the requirements.
17. Because instead of removing or hiding Joseph, you've moved him to the southwest, the player's units automatically go to his location after the scene ends unless ordered not to.
18. The blue footmen don't know how to go to the teal Barracks after the tower is destroyed.
19. Units selected during the last cinematic scene.
20. The second map doesn't have a visible button in the campaign menu.

This is heavily unfinished/unpolished work. You should have it here until you get it near completion: Map Development
Play some custom campaigns/maps and learn from them. Let yourself inspired. Read tutorials on the site.

Substandard.

(previous comments: Floyd's time)

deepstrasz said:

The author is still null. You have to add your nickname/name in the campaign editor and map options.

1. Terrain is pretty much bare and flat. Read some terraining tutorials I provided in my first post.
2. During the cinematic scene units don't all attack together. Some stay behind and come later, others get back to their initial spot after their target has been eliminated.
3. Cameras are just bird's eye view during cinematic mode. Some place which are not supposed to be seen are visible.
   
4. Retreat=/=surrender. But they left them there, not take them prisoners?
5. No character development, no idea what's actually going on. Why did Floyd have to leave etc. The "story" is less than bare bones.
6. The second map should immediately start with cinematic mode. I selected Floyd beforehand.
7. The map has fog of war on.
8. Floyd has usual Warcraft III spells. Try some custom ones: Spells | HIVE
9. Joseph had stuff to do but why was he at the town entrance then?
10. Cameras should instantly start on the place they're supposed to show. If you're looking somewhere else on the map, the camera slowly pans towards the region Floyd triggered the cinematic scene on.
11. Duplicate Back to Home quests.
12. Floyd triggers the scene with the tax raise from too far and cannot be seen within the camera's borders.
13. You can't see the cursor to choose what to do when you get to the wizard because user control is still disabled.
14. Gameplay is somewhat linear.
15. Oldness' buff description isn't complete.
16. The demon quest isn't marked as completed after doing all the requirements.
17. Because instead of removing or hiding Joseph, you've moved him to the southwest, the player's units automatically go to his location after the scene ends unless ordered not to.
18. The blue footmen don't know how to go to the teal Barracks after the tower is destroyed.
19. Units selected during the last cinematic scene.
20. The second map doesn't have a visible button in the campaign menu.

This is heavily unfinished/unpolished work. You should have it here until you get it near completion: Map Development
Play some custom campaigns/maps and learn from them. Let yourself inspired. Read tutorials on the site.

Substandard.

(previous comments: Floyd's time)

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1. Red about terraning. Now it looks better.
2. Now the units are closer to each other a
3. Now they aren't. I still have to work at the unwanted visible stuff.
4. Their general thought that the threatening were enough. Now this is more obvious.
5. Most of the information leaks have been filled. This is my first story and I know it could be much better.
6. Done
7. Done, but how do I make the map hidden terrain from the settings?
8. I plan to make some spells to change based on the choises made.
9. Done
10. I think this makes the cinematics smoother.
11. I know and I can't find the issue ( I ll work on this)
12. Done
13. When I enable the user control at the choosing trigger it bugs and when I enable it in the cinematic before the choosing trigger it doesn't work. Could you please help me with this ?
14. Any sugestions here? What should I do to make it less linear?
15. Done
16. The trigger us there and it doesn't work.
17. Done
18. Done
19. Idk how to solve this problem.
20. I don't know what to say. I ve put the trigger which shows the next button as in the tutorial.

Thx for the great feedback. Pls help me with my issues.

EDIT: My nickname is Null and I have proof . This is my name in wc 3 and star craft too.

QuestionMen said:

7. Done, but how do I make the map hidden terrain from the settings?

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World Editor's menu bar->Scenario->Map Options->untick Masked Areas are Partially Visible.
Then, in the Trigger Editor, Actions: Visibility->Enable Black Mask.

QuestionMen said:

10. I think this makes the cinematics smoother.

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Sure but first, instantly apply a camera then make it move because otherwise you'll be stuck with it panning from one end of the map to where your hero is.

QuestionMen said:

11. I know and I can't find the issue ( I ll work on this)

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Make sure you turn the trigger off once it's supposed to run.

QuestionMen said:

When I enable the user control at the choosing trigger it bugs and when I enable it in the cinematic before the choosing trigger it doesn't work. Could you please help me with this ?

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What do you mean it bugs? Just turn cinematic mode on and don't disable user control until after you press a dialog button.

QuestionMen said:

Any sugestions here? What should I do to make it less linear?

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More optional quests but you should have made the map a little bigger than it is. There's still some space however.

QuestionMen said:

16. The trigger us there and it doesn't work.

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I don't quite get it. You should mark it as completed after the demon dies. It's nothing special.

QuestionMen said:

19. Idk how to solve this problem.

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Trigger Editor, Actions: Selection-Clear Selection for Player after Disable User Control. After Enabling User Control->Selection-Select Unit for Player.

QuestionMen said:

20. I don't know what to say. I ve put the trigger which shows the next button as in the tutorial.

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Your game cache is probably not saved and ported properly for the next map.
Making a Basic Campaign
How to use the campaign editor

I can't play it! Because when i open my Custom Campaigns, this campaign is nowhere to be found. And i am pretty damn sure i've put it together with the other campaigns.

Venkolm said:

I can't play it! Because when i open my Custom Campaigns, this campaign is nowhere to be found. And i am pretty damn sure i've put it together with the other campaigns.

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You need 1.31.1 for it.

deepstrasz said:

You need 1.31.1 for it.

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I see. Well, its a shame, since back when it was a map, i played it.

Venkolm said:

I see. Well, its a shame, since back when it was a map, i played it.

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Everything for someone who likes my maps.

Will check 'em out.

deepstrasz said:

World Editor's menu bar->Scenario->Map Options->untick Masked Areas are Partially Visible.
Then, in the Trigger Editor, Actions: Visibility->Enable Black Mask.

Sure but first, instantly apply a camera then make it move because otherwise you'll be stuck with it panning from one end of the map to where your hero is.

Make sure you turn the trigger off once it's supposed to run.

What do you mean it bugs? Just turn cinematic mode on and don't disable user control until after you press a dialog button.

More optional quests but you should have made the map a little bigger than it is. There's still some space however.

I don't quite get it. You should mark it as completed after the demon dies. It's nothing special.

Trigger Editor, Actions: Selection-Clear Selection for Player after Disable User Control. After Enabling User Control->Selection-Select Unit for Player.

Your game cache is probably not saved and ported properly for the next map.
Making a Basic Campaign
How to use the campaign editor

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No bugs left. Please test it again so I can be shore that it hasn't some unwanted bugs.

Well, the maps do not show up in-game. maybe i will update to 1.31 someday.

Venkolm said:

Well, the maps do not show up in-game. maybe i will update to 1.31 someday.

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good night and thanks for trying my maps
or trying to try

QuestionMen said:

No bugs left. Please test it again so I can be shore that it hasn't some unwanted bugs.

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Well, bugs are the least problem here. It's the quality of the maps and what content they offer that doesn't pass over the Substandard border, I'm afraid.