Fear Chamber

Moderator · May 10, 2009

19:38, 21st May 2009 by bounty hunter2:
Septimus is quite clear, Rejected.

Septimus · May 10, 2009

1) Description - Lack of proper description about this map. All we know about this map was just another dota copy.

The same goes into the map as well without a proper quest log.

2) Scripting/Triggering - Poorly done, full of memory leak and ineffective. It leak location, special effect and etc etc.

3) Terrain - Poorly develop with lack of destructible/doodad usage and tiles variation. Infact, the entire terrain was flat with 1 type of destructible.

4) Tooltips/Hotkey - Lot's of hotkey doesn't show, invalid or clash, even the tooltips isn't properly done.

From what I seen, this isn't beta stage map; but alpha stage.

1/5 (Unacceptable)

Please read more tutorial before you make any map in the future.

gert123 · May 10, 2009

im sorry but i dissagree, the hotkeys are all working properly and as for the terrain i think its good,not extremely super cool and not the worst ever.As for the triggers i think that the mapmaker deserve a compiment because its a miracle that he managed to made recipes,modes,kills and etc.etc without using any variables or anything except gui triggers.it shure needs some work but for now its 3/5 :nemor:

Spiridon · May 10, 2009

I think thats a good map. The heroes are very orginal and the spells to. But i dont like dota style maps. 4/5

pyromancer · May 10, 2009

i think that its one thing to open the map with the world editor and to watch the triggers and a whole onther thing is to host it 5v5 play it and just have fun.ofc if the only thing you saw was the not excelent trgiggers you will think its 1/5 but if you play it and have fun you will think its 4/5 or 5/5.

i say 4/5(realy good allthoug it needs some work)

pyromancer · May 10, 2009

i agree with gert123 and pyromancer the map is fun.i most like the mact that everything is made only with GUI triggers and the fact that the mapmaker has tried to use the normal spells as little as posible 4/5

Septimus · May 10, 2009

the hotkeys are all working properly

Needless to said more? This is just a few.

As for the triggers i think that the mapmaker deserve a compiment because its a miracle that he managed to made recipes,modes,kills and etc.etc without using any variables or anything except gui triggers.

Terrible coding isn't something to be proud about.

but for now its 3/5

If such a map deserve 3/5, all approve map deserve 6/5.
If you think this map deserve 3/5, why don't you ask all those staff and map reviewer team to review it. I guarantee their answer would be exactly like mine.

gert123 · May 10, 2009

i think that its one thing to open the map with the world editor or singleplayer and to watch the mistakes of the mapmaker a whole other thing is to host it 5v5 play it and just have fun than you will have a different apinion of the map.

gert123 · May 10, 2009

1/5 rating is for the worst of maps,this map isnt so bad for 1/5 it deserves atleast 3/5

Shanghai · May 10, 2009

terrain is very bad. the spells is not fun for a aos. I mean if u play an RPG its ok with normal spells. But this is an aos need triggered spells to be fun. But overall 2/5. if im nice 2.5/5 u need to do sumthing more but it has potential work harder on it and post it later when u have improved it. Ask some one for help with variables etc.

Septimus · May 10, 2009

i think that its one thing to open the map with the world editor or singleplayer and to watch the mistakes of the mapmaker a whole other thing is to host it 5v5 play it and just have fun than you will have a different apinion of the map.

What's the point of hosting a map with terrible coding that leak heavily? It would just cause a serious lag later on.

It don't even have a decent hotkey setup at all just like you claim.

Hotkey must be shown at tooltips, it must work and it must not clash with other hotkey. That is what we call a proper hotkey.

ArcticInferno · May 10, 2009

I agree with septimus. I don't see how this is fun, even if I was playing it 5v5 with 9 other open minded people.

MrBimbo · May 10, 2009

wow harsh much?

according to these guys, you should just give up on life and stop making maps.

ArcticInferno · May 11, 2009

MrBimbo said:
wow harsh much?

according to these guys, you should just give up on life and stop making maps.

Nobody said that.

Sparten1one7 · May 11, 2009

Here is some advice...
100% of the maps made from dota fail.
I'm not going to even bother to review it, pick up a new project, or change this one considerably.

Shanghai · May 11, 2009

i can prob help u wioth the terrain and making some heroes cooler

if u want ofc

gert123 · May 11, 2009

ofc i want :grin:

its just what i need thank you. :thumbs_up:

atleast 1 person is thinking how i can improove my map and not just say its a peace od crap :wink:

Shanghai · May 14, 2009

wtf i cant come to the second topic LOL. Septmus pls solve this out maps is black ets xD.
And septimus is right about this. This map need alot of work. And i think i can help u with some parts. And i hope u get a very good coder to fix the memory leaks and the stuff. Would be great if some one helped u with the codes

I checked ur map again more detailed. Dude its horrible. U need to fix alot the creeps goes wrong. And some times i cant buy items. Its alot that needs to fix. it feels like u made this haras and u wanted ur map up. I think its good to remake the map. THe creeps in the forests looks wird. Its not like an AoS. U need to fix alot. I mean the heroes are so boring. And when i try to kil la creep it takes 1 min. And some times when the creeps coming = the creep spawn. It takes to long time so i got to w8 like 20-30 sec for next wave i mean LMAO. Ok i can help u making better terrain and do some cooler heroes. But u need some one to fix ur triggers and stuff. Send me an pm with ur msn

But i like ur minimap its awesome

u could do it cooler tough i can do that for you if u want

gert123 · May 14, 2009

Shanghai said:
wtf i cant come to the second topic LOL. Septmus pls solve this out maps is black ets xD.
And septimus is right about this. This map need alot of work. And i think i can help u with some parts. And i hope u get a very good coder to fix the memory leaks and the stuff. Would be great if some one helped u with the codes

I checked ur map again more detailed. Dude its horrible. U need to fix alot the creeps goes wrong. And some times i cant buy items. Its alot that needs to fix. it feels like u made this haras and u wanted ur map up. I think its good to remake the map. THe creeps in the forests looks wird. Its not like an AoS. U need to fix alot. I mean the heroes are so boring. And when i try to kil la creep it takes 1 min. And some times when the creeps coming = the creep spawn. It takes to long time so i got to w8 like 20-30 sec for next wave i mean LMAO. Ok i can help u making better terrain and do some cooler heroes. But u need some one to fix ur triggers and stuff. Send me an pm with ur msn But i like ur minimap its awesome u could do it cooler tough i can do that for you if u want

wow thanks dude,but there is a little problem i dont have msn i have skype :con:

Shanghai · May 14, 2009

ok man can u get msn then. Its just to download. And then add my msn i will send u.

Its very simple go to msn.com and then download and after that make an account sign up. And then logg in and il add u msn is the new generation stuff get it

gert123 · May 14, 2009

ok i made an msn account e-mail: P.S this is my mother's e-mail

Seralas · May 16, 2009

Probably a good idea to edit that email out and message it to him. Don't want your mothers email gettting spammed by unscrupulous (morally lacking/bad) people

Or, if he already has it, just delete it.

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