13:23, 1st Jul 2008
Septimus:

-give modellcredits plz

-n u should add sounds to the special effects cos it's a littl silent - but my first cinematic was without sound as well (but also without special effects )

the rest was an average first try i'd say even tho it was a littl short and i did not rly get who hits who when why how

most ppl start with arena/fighting-cinematics as their first step i think n therefore it was ok =) (even tho i dont like arena-cinematics too much)

so everything was ok n u should improve everything as well (watch other cinematics/read comments to get what you could improve)
keywords: camerawork, sound, terrain, story/characters developement

=> first try goes 3/5 =)

PS: now u'll have to watch my latest cinematic ;D

Sorry for model credits, I forgot it.

Thanks for your comment, I will try to do a better map in the next version.

It was a good map. It lacked furnishing, particularly with the terrain, the music and the camera work....I give the fight scenes a 4.5/5 or 5 due to its coolness. But I have to give the entire map-work a 3/5 due to the lack of terrain and camera works/music etc....cheers!!
Nice job with the models too!!

good, camera is ok, units are good, music is ok but you could add maybe some better blizzard music, ill give it 4/5

I'l say epic FAILURE (thumbsdown)

Pretty random although somewhat a shortly nice spectacle.
Terrain is mostly flat and has little tile variation.
The loser does not have hero glow. You could add one: How to add Hero Glow without Modeling