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End of Arthas

This bundle is marked as useful / simple. Simplicity is bliss, low effort and/or may contain minor bugs.
Welcome, my friend! This is my first cinematick work that i've never made. It tells about defeat of Arthas... First Illidan losed to him, he has been revived now, and he returned to kill Arthas the Lich King!


Very much thanks for BlizZard for Creating Warcraft III! The Sounds have been taken from Campaing.

Version 2.

- - - PROBABLY BUG FIXES - - -

[x] More Special Events.
[x] More Camera Events.
[x] Illidan doesn't now say front of Arthas, "Can you hear me out there, Arthas?".
[x] More people at Credits. (Few more...)

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End of Arthas (Map)

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A friday, in 2009... ap0calypse: Rejected Random fire on snow, bad trigger (yes, trigger... not triggers) 08:49, 14th Sep 2008 Septimus: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/816738-post4.html

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A friday, in 2009...
ap0calypse: Rejected

Random fire on snow, bad trigger (yes, trigger... not triggers)

08:49, 14th Sep 2008
Septimus:

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/816738-post4.html
 
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Avarage cinematic. Fight between Arthas and illidan is just too...boring and when Illidan meets Arthas he says "Can you hear me Arthas" I'm sure he hear 'cause he is standing in front of him:grin: You could add some cool special effects so fight looks better.
 
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nice first work, really, and better than many cinematics people offer who have experience in making cinematics/maps but still (and unfortunatly) just average
i say unfortunatly, cos i say this should be the cinematic standard and/or the lower bound; which basicly should first off make all other creators of cinematic maps who create way worser maps feel ashamed and second off make you proud having created a decent first work;

but there r still lots of issues;

[-] the camera(work) was boring (use different angles, fullshorts/closeshots/totals/etc)
[-] you did not came up with an own story
[-] you use ingame cutscene sounds (which is a great minus for me; do you have a headset - well use it =))
and the sounds didnt always fit
[-] there is a lack in (special)effects and especially the fight is too boring
[-] no custom stuff

[?] why are all those creeps wandering around???

[/] terrain was there but it... well... ye it was there; whats a 3/5 for me;
4/5 would be awesome terraining and 5/5 would be interaction with the terrain (in my understanding)

[+] it's a nice first piece of work; and shows effort put into it

still 3/5 but keep going =)


ps: your discription reads: "This is my first cinematick work that i've never made." you sure mean "ever made"* =) also there r some more typos =D
 
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Map Review
1) Terrain - Bad (2)
2) Trigger - Bad (2)
3) Minor Error - Bad (2)
4) Major Error - Good (4)
5) Replay Value - Bad (2)
6) Fun factor/gameplay - Bad (2)
7) Use of imported material -
8) Single player -
9) AI support -
10) Camera - Horrible (1)
11) Originality -
12) File Size - Excellent (5)
13) Internet/LAN Friendly -
14) Balancing -
15) Packaging - Horrible (1)
16) Credits -
17) Storyline - Horrible (1)
18) Theme - Horrible (1)
19) Protection - Excellent (5)
20) Quality - Bad (2)
21) Description/Information/Detail - Horrible (1)
22) Hiveworkshop rules & regulation - Excellent (5)
23) Game Mode -
24) Function -
25) Unit Placement -

Total Accumulation Point : 36/75 * 100 + (-12) (Review) = 36

[+] -
[!] - Leak trigger, but since this is cinematic. It is fine.
[-] - Lot's of typo error
[-] - Unprofessional way of setting starting location
[-] - Trigger could use improvement.
[-] - Should use fade filter.
[-] - Battle scenery is very dull.
[-] - The last camera at the battle scenario move very quick.
[-] - Victory condition should skip dialog and scores.

Review : Ok, the cinematic failed to follow the theme of warcraft completely as there is a contradiction between it.

The lich king already merge with King Arthas if you do view the final cinematic after the battle between Arthas and Illidan.

In addition, Jaiden size is extremely epic and not that small. Play the campaign and see how big he is.

Second, there is a mass amount of such a cinematic between the battle of Illidan and Arthas. Can you come out with something much original ?

This map still lack a lot of stuff.

Another -12 point for this map.

Septimus Score System
Awful: 1-10
Unacceptable : 11-30
Lacking : 31-49
Useful : 50-69
Recommend : 70-90
Highly Recommend : 91-100
Director Cut : 101-105
Sub-Zero : 106+
Rating & Miscellaneous information
Score - 36/100
Rating - 2/5
Condition - Average
Status - Approve
Review - 1
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What i think is fucking brilliant is how you subtitled:

"Or you will face my eternal wrath."

as

"Or you will face my internal wrath."

It was obviously a mistake, which makes it even more awesome.
 
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and why are there wandering animals? Well, they are there because they fit good in the terrain.

my intention with my criticism was; no they do not; at least not loads of them

it's the ultimate fight between arthas(lich) and illidan, and a seal is crawling around between their legs; and a littl bear and small wolf r running in their backs among 10 more animals;
that basicly just makes fun of arthas and illidan and is more insulting than realistic;
cmon -> Arthas <- and -> Illidan <- ; they'd burn every puppy that marshes their way
next off, have u ever entered a forest and were surrounded by 15 animals? o_O

i hope i made my point clear =D
 
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Jan 16, 2009
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you could have used the skins in the way they were i mean realy arthas back to paladain
and illadan diden't even have wings what kind of cinmatic person are you. you diden't even use the right place in the gameyou got the frozen throne part right but a forest in a fire world that has a citadel
 
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