12:14, 13th Oct 2011
DonDustin: you have some nice ideas there, but this model really does not catch the hero feel. You should seriously develop your concept further and give him some different armor(texture) tec.

DonDustin: much bettter now. You can finally see that this is supposted to be a hero and the chosen texture fits aswell, but there are still 2 tiny things that you should consider to change and 1 mistake that has to be changed:
1. personally I'd change the texture of those blades on his back. A wood sword does not really fit to him as a dragon slayer or something.
2. I like the concept of the helm, but you might want to furthher that concept a tiny bit more. Why don't you add a dragon skull/head as the top of the helm instead of putting a dragon face on top of it?? Might make it even more awesome. The wrap could also need some small touches.

3. you have to change the material type of the face. CHange it from blend to none

DonDustin: this model really developted a lot since it's first WiP. Good job

Well this one looks wuite better.

First animated unit model by Eubz, anyway, it looks fine.

the wrap could've been better on the legs. i'll rate this 3/5 for now.

It's a nice idea and concept but it looks messy? It's like you just put it together (a.k.a. FRANKENMODEL)

it doesn't really make sense atm..

@ Misha
What doesn't make sense.

I personally dont like the texture of the shield and in my opinion the spikes on his head are way too big.
Other then that its acceptable.

Accname said:

I personally dont like the texture of the shield and in my opinion the spikes on his head are way too big.
Other then that its acceptable.

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Thanks for the comment. The shield is actually team colored.

Is that a Captain or a Bandit? I think something is wrong with the nose.

Captain of the bandits I think.

Animalpower said:

Is that a Captain or a Bandit? I think something is wrong with the nose.

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How can you see a nose under a helmet??

A fine adition for the bandits. 4\5, nice work !

eubz said:

@ Misha
What doesn't make sense.

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these helmet spikes for an example, i'm not sure what you tried, but the spikes just look alien to the helm, also the.. whatever he's wearing, i can't really figure what it's made of, perhaps you could draw out the wrap so it gives more details from that dragon texture, like scales.. or maybe new texture, dunno..

legs.. don't make sense due to the bad wrap on 'em, maybe you could take another go at 'em?

as for weapons.. why is he having two different ones? shouldn't all be like the one he's carrying?

shield could use somewhat an edge at the "upper" part of the shield (which faces to front on unanimated view)

..helpful? Oo

looks messy, but nice concept...
i'll looking forward to see this model approved

Misha said:

these helmet spikes for an example, i'm not sure what you tried, but the spikes just look alien to the helm, also the.. whatever he's wearing, i can't really figure what it's made of, perhaps you could draw out the wrap so it gives more details from that dragon texture, like scales.. or maybe new texture, dunno..

legs.. don't make sense due to the bad wrap on 'em, maybe you could take another go at 'em?

as for weapons.. why is he having two different ones? shouldn't all be like the one he's carrying?

shield could use somewhat an edge at the "upper" part of the shield (which faces to front on unanimated view)

..helpful? Oo

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this. do it

i dont mean to bother you at this time but if i may ask..how do you make models? is it some kind of paint program or?

Fixed some issues in the model. As for the sword, the two are in what we call as sheath, a scabbard, while the other one he is using doesn't have sheath so he does use it. Lol .

i would like to suggest, to remove all the bandit texture on his legs, and hands, change them to the bronze dragon texture, as for the head, change it to something "Gold like" texture

I'm going to think for another name again if that's so. It would be something different from being a bandit captain.

how about..
Dragon Slayer?

Woah! that's a good name.

I'll help you out with the wrap

Looks pretty good so far from the screenshot but maybe just a teeny bit more work. I don't really like how the legs aren't gold-ish like the rest of his armor.

Model has been edited adding much better textures. Thanks to the comments.

Now it is Dragon Warrior

Now that's what i call dragon slayer!, btw, you should make a brand new helmet for him, currently, it's approveable, but need more work on the helm (nah, for the helm, just my personal opinion)

@rysnt
thanks dude. You're awesome.

Nah, i like to be someone's brain stromer, haha~

In my opinion, I liked the prevoius model better. I liked how the silver blended with the gold - it looked better that way imo

This one is still good though, 3/5.

ahh.. now it's soo much better :3 but that helm.. wouldn't it suit more to have like.. a dragon's skull somehow put in place instead?

just my opinion, it's a cool edit there _(^^)b

Thanks dude, I'm going to try that one. Cool advice man.

Now that's a serious motherf*cker ! xD

Better preview plox.

I will check in Magos.

He looks like a dragon warrior more than a bandit captain.

lookin nice there, man =) although i was more along him having a frostwyrm skull as helm. but it turned out cool

although there is something weird with his nose.. mind if you check if making the texture "twosided" fixes that? Oo

thanks for another helpful comment Misha.

no problem.

I saw this on wc3c originally, it looks pretty orgasmic, but the wrap could used improving just a bit. I love the idea.

3\5.

The concept is good but the outcome is the one I really dislike.
Based on the screenshot, the shield is not that great. As it doesn't seem
to protect the hero.

RakEnRoL said:

The concept is good but the outcome is the one I really dislike.
Based on the screenshot, the shield is not that great. As it doesn't seem
to protect the hero.

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Tell me, what kind of shield can protect this hero? Can you help me create that kind of shield?

you could try and make the shield a dragon skull since he's a dragon slayer.

Thanks, editing now.
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Model has been updated with the moderator's comment.

change the screenshot and change the name.

It is a nice model but it is a little too golden for a bandit.

The name will be changed to Dragon Warrior (The Slayer) According to the two people here. I owe them that name. If ever this model got approved.

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The name has been changed. Thanks for the comments.

groovy, just one more thing though.. =3 the back of his helm looks rather.. weird, pulling away from the coolness you achieved so far.. can you try rewraping that somewhere else on the frostwyrm to it matches the skull part better? :3

rysnt11 said:

looks messy, but nice concept...
i'll looking forward to see this model approved

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I must agree to that,

Misha said:

groovy, just one more thing though.. =3 the back of his helm looks rather.. weird, pulling away from the coolness you achieved so far.. can you try rewraping that somewhere else on the frostwyrm to it matches the skull part better? :3

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Model updated with your help. thanks.