22:26, 28th Jan 2010
67chrome: The colors don't seem to work to well together on this skin so far, the yellow is at least used in various portions of the skin, but all other colors added only seem to be in one place. Try sticking to two or three colors throughout the skin, and make sure each color is used in more than one location. You might want to look at the coral doodads from sunken ruins (or even pull up their skin) and use the colors from those throughout this entire skin to better define the tropical look on this guy, with a tried and true color scheme.

The tentacles on the face seem to be facing the wrong direction :O
Speaking of the face, the faceless ones faces are very easy to manipulate, they only consist of two planes that are very susceptible to alpha work. You could add a lot more tentacles, make the face look as though it is made of coral, seaweed, whatever. You seem to know enough about alpha channels to remove team color, try playing around with the face some more

This skin seems to have a lot of the original faceless one poking though, the face, legs, feet, hands, and arms all seem unoriginal, I do not think this skin has quite reached the 75% freehand threshold either

You need to add details, loads shadings and highlights

Shading and high lights. and more freehand. looks recolor+adding something to me

Needs loads of shading and highlights. And more details. And at last, those circles looks like you just put them on the top of the texture instead of putting them on the creature, if you know what i mean. Make it look like the circles are sitting on the creature and not on the top of the texture.

looks like clown
not like naga :3

also u could add new weapon

Naga aren't soo yellowis.They are green-blue with some yellow or orange borders....

Whisper said:

not like naga :3

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That's because it's no naga, just a Faceless, banned into the ocean by the Naga, and he has become one with the nature of the ocean.

Waaaah! This is too colorful. it doesn't make any sense.

although the idea's good. Keep workin' and make the details bigger, instead of this tiny stuff.

hnnh looks like a walking lollypop

also try to make the colors fade into each other a bit, the sudden jumps between colors of its skin looks a bit odd

It's too colourful.
It looks like he's wearing some Power Ranger jumpsuit.

lol Power-faceless