Date: 11:05:11 30-Jul-12
Map Moderator: -Kobas-
Map Status: Rejected 1/5
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Rejection Reasons:
Map has low quality terrain!
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Comment: Low quality.

Very nice Map. )

All Done Bro

Celestial Wars v3.3 Map Review
Good Points
(+) Custom Shop and Heroes
(+) Credit list
(-) The map is protected
(-) The terrain is messep up at some location
(-) No custom spells, you just used the default ones
(-) Fix some grammars in the description
(+/-) Improve your description
(+/-) Add more spells, doodads, items
(+/-) Make the map unprotected so the moderators will review it fast
Points
2 good points and 3 bad points. 2/5 total

Thanks UndeadImmortal ill do it ASAP!

The idea is great but there are too much things to be done , keep up the good work ! 3/5

Thanks for the Comment flamedragon89 im glad to hear it
and UndeadImmortal,All done bro

Haven't tested the map yet, but here are some things you need to improve or change in your thread:

You could use tags to show terrain screenshots, instead having users copy-paste the link you gave, it would be better. (Not sure if you're allowed to post img's though)
The changelog could use more additional info/detail on the bugs you fixed. This is to prevent users from double-posting bugs already fixed.
Plot should be at the upper part of the thread since it should be read first by the viewers, plot at the lower part of the thread is not-so-good of an idea.
Your font color for some text could be changed instead of mostly gray or whatever that color is. You could use red for important messages. Plus, you could also use some bbcodes like [hidden] to hide text aka spoiler on some forums. You could use that for changelogs, adding different hidden tabs for each version like this: Changelog -> v1.20/v1.21 having two tabs.

I want to try testing the map, but I'm too busy with school right now, that's why I'm not even going on hiveworkshop these days, just saw this map here and posted.

Well I try to give you some nice suggestions :
> Balance out the Strength, because you did it this way (1STR=50HP) Which is for me, some what OP.
> Try to decrease the attack speed because some PC will lag... (This happens to me alot, I don't know for you.)
> Is it just me or all of the models are the same? :O (Try using unique models for each of them describing/relative to their ability, and name)
> Try adding some more things.
> (Suggestion) Improve your terraining a little, though it is NOT VERY bad.
> Edit some of your heroes and make some unique abilities for them which is NOT found in other heroes.
> Add some more spells, items and "decorations" as what UndeadImmortal said you to do so.
> Try adding more effects, other than the attack animation! Haha
> Add some random events like :
Duel = 2 random players will fight each other while others watch.
godstrike (Yes, small G) = The god of Azeroth is annoyed by your performance, BOOM! (Strike the player with lowest score and damage it by x [x=the number you want])
>And oh, I think you have mistaken "fog" as always visible, don't you?
Change "-fog" to "-unfog" (Which means to remove the fog of war)
Well overall nice map (Even though my map is even worse )
For now I'll rate it 3/5.

Good luck fellow Pinoy in your career!

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Looool. This is game is so fun! It is totally worth playing
Anyways nice game br0, even if the score is 14-1 xD
YOU ARE SO IMBA DUDE, I MEAN, YOU REALLY NEED TIMING IN EVADING ALL OF IT. JUST SO, ARRRGHH!

Ahahaha yeaah xD

Thanks for the Suggestions

Ahahaha i died laughing here! xD

Lol you. Lets play another game XD

By the way, why are you always busy? :O

Hero model miss left arm and some animations.
Terrain is really bad, and there are far more better hero/game modes pick systems that require less space.

Aw got rejected. Condolence man!

OH STOP IT,YOU
-Kobas-



lol UndeadImmortal made the terrain xD

UndeadImmortal said:

I do not made the terrain, I just try to improve it.

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Lol... problembr0, try to make a new map nalang. Hahaha
Try ko tulungan ka.

iChaos said:

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